Reborn: Parallel Summoning

It is quite frustrating for the system to find such a host. There are high-level summoning cards and there are no need for upgrade cards. When something happens, the subordinates can't defeat them. This happens again and again. The protagonist still doesn't know how to improve. If the system hadn't been better than him, the protagonist wouldn't even have leveled up.

The paragraph is too long, affecting viewing

The author must be very confused after seeing their comments. They missed the point. What they mean is that your novel is as if the protagonist is the author. It is a self-narration and a metaphor. I stood in the snow, and my body was covered with a thin layer of snowflakes. Looking at everything in front of me, I suddenly felt so peaceful, and my heart and brain were empty. But I know that these peaceful days will not last long, and what is coming will always come. My thoughts are wandering, suddenly. "Ding, Zhang Sanfeng, a person related to the host, broke through to the early stage of Martial Sainthood during the battle." What happens when you break through the primary level of Martial Saint in battle? Why did you also explain that it was during a battle? Is there something going on at home? Come back quickly. I told my father that I wanted to go home. I didn't tell him specifically what was going on, because I didn't know what the situation was now, so I just didn't tell him. He was also worried.

It feels like I'm reading a composition

First of all, I can't stand the first person, and secondly the content... Your book is not easy to become popular