Bai Yueguang in Tomb Robbers: the Heartthrob

I like a lot of CP, but the heroine is not to my taste. She is too soft and licky. She cries at every turn. She cries when she is bullied and cries when she loses her virginity. I don't understand what there is to cry about. It's just a few men who can have sex with each other. I still prefer the scumbag Neptune.

It's very interesting, but I gave it four points because of the stuck points. You can tell from the beginning that the author just started writing, and the writing style is very average. It's really hard to stick to it. I read it four or five times, and every time I read one or two chapters, I couldn't put it down. But I was really curious about the subsequent plot, so I skipped the previous plot this time. The first part is probably about the four white moonlights in the bottle of evil black flowers. In fact, I personally don't know what happened in detail. The plot in the latter part is good, and I can clearly see that the writing is improving in the later part. I really like watching the plot when the heroine is with everyone. The only flaw is that the heroine feels a bit weak. Although I know that the heroine is taking the supporting route, I personally hope that she can have some strength. The system has a lot of roles and talks a lot. I disliked him very much at the beginning. I felt that the system talked a lot and often dug holes for the heroine. But after the system disappeared, I found that I couldn't live without it. I beg the author to bring Yunyun back quickly. I look forward to the subsequent plot. I want to see the Shura field where the Zhang family ancestors, the young guards and the juniors are in the group. After the system became Fu Bao, I personally felt that the plot was not that good. In the previous plot, this was still the case. The heroine at least had the right to choose whether she wanted those men. After the heroine chose to accept those men, she would sign a contract and then join the group. After the system became Fu Bao, Fu Bao's approach was that he thought it would be good for the heroine, so he acquiesced that he had made the choice first, and that these men had feelings for the heroine. Without the heroine's consent, Jiang Ren accepted the heroine's harem and gave them the right to join the group. Before coming to the Tang Dynasty, when it was still the original system, although the heroine's character was indecisive, she was still acceptable. At least she still put her own happiness first. But in the latest chapters, I feel that the heroine no longer has the right to choose. From the moment those people enter the group, it has been acquiesced that these are people in the heroine's harem, and even the heroine herself does not know. After that, the heroine is very indecisive. You say treat them as younger brothers. If they like you, it is okay for you to refuse, but in the eyes of these men, it is useless even if the heroine refuses, they will still stalk you. I think it's better to let the heroine accept them directly. If you really don't like them, the most you can do is to keep them in the harem and continue to treat them as younger brothers. If you don't want to see them, you can't see them. It's just a little kissing benefit. If you give them, you can give them. And why should the fight between men bother the heroine? Can't we just let them solve it themselves? Isn't it famous that the Zhang family has the right to speak if they win a battle? When there is a conflict, let them go out and fight on their own. If they are killed, it will be considered a layoff, so as to save the heroine herself trouble. The narrations kept describing how those people would feel distressed when they saw the heroine cry, and then vent their anger on their love rivals. I was thinking, part of the reason why the heroine was sad was because Zhang Wuya was ignorant. Since you can't see him sad, then don't do it. Must you use this method to gain sympathy from others? The same goes for the heroine. Since it's so difficult, she should just accept it. Again, at worst, she will be brought into the harem and treated like a younger brother. It would be normal for a younger brother to kiss his older sister. If he really wants to do something extreme, other men will compete. When will it be his turn? I still like System Yunyun, and now that Yunyun is back, I feel that the plot is a lot better.

The author is so good at writing! This is so awesome! Every world is wonderful, and the heroine is so adorable! The author is really awesome. Each male protagonist and female protagonist are written in a super loving way, and the sweetness is beyond the limit! Especially the heroine's delicate and soft character is simply irresistible! No wonder everyone falls in love with her! Every time Wu Xie was made blush by her unintentional words, Zhang Qiling silently guarded but couldn't help but get jealous, Xie Yuchen doted on her while using his poisonous tongue, and the black blind man teased her ruthlessly but protected her. The members of Laojiumen also had their own charms, the gentle and domineering, the sinister and seductive, all of them made people's hearts flutter! The Zhang family is even more amazing. There are so many men, and there are all types of men. You can find a book that will satisfy any type you like. It's so comprehensive! The arrogant Zhang Haike, the calm elders of the Zhang family, and the mysterious and powerful juniors of the Zhang family, all of them are addictive! It's so delicious!

When I first read it, I felt it was a bit immature. After reading it, I felt that it was very disappointing. As I continued reading, I felt that the author is really a good actor. [Like] Let the heroine eat with us so well [I learned]

All-oriented, the male protagonist Quan Jie has a lot of scenes with the Zhang family boy group. I watched a lot of them and my face turned yellow. I liked it very much ~ [shy][shy][shy]. Come on, Dayan baby, there will be many more follow-ups ~ Especially the same male protagonist in different time and space cooking together, etc. I am looking forward to it [shy][shy][shy]. And just write according to the author's ideas. Those who love baby girls are the best ~ [love] [love] [love].

When I first read this book, I was overwhelmed by Mary Sule [laughing] but as the words in the chapter said, it gradually got better. I really like the relationship between Yueyue and the male protagonists. They are sincere and pure, with laughter and tears. Fortunately, he has the guarantee promised by the author (~￣▽￣) ~ The characters created by the author are also very three-dimensional and full, showing readers the ancestral crying skills of the Zhang family (≧∇≦)/ The only regret is that the bookstore is shallow and the two updates a day are not enough (இдஇ; ). It seems like a long way to reunite with the original four masters, and I am really looking forward to their expressions when they learn that they have hundreds of more brothers (σ･ω･)σYO♪ I like the author's writing style and I'm looking forward to his new works, so please do your best (≧∇≦)/

It's super beautiful, better than other books. Delicate writing style But can you be a little more cruel? For example, some unnecessary people should not write about cultivating immortals, unless you want to write about spiritual energy recovery in the future. After all, if there is no spiritual energy recovery and immortality in the later stage, it will be a secret. If a secret is known to too many people, and it's the kind of person who has too much savvy in the world of tomb robbers, there will be problems.

Super pretty! ! ! Whoever sees knows it! ! ! Author, you can't be a eunuch and you can't stop updating, even one chapter a day will do. I will chase you forever, write a long novel! ! ! I haven't seen such a good-looking article in a long time. Author, please be more confident, everyone who criticizes you is jealous of you! ! ! The heroine is innocent and kind but not a holy mother. When she makes mistakes, she will reflect on herself instead of questioning others. She has the three views of a normal person. The most important thing is that this is cultivation + redemption + tomb robbery + time travel + system + group pet + heartthrob + no cruelty + heroic competition + Shura field. From Nine Gates to Tomb Robbery, the system is very good to the heroine. The heroine is also very lucky in opening gift packages. The heroine has Qilin bloodline that can turn into a Qilin. The system tasks will not conflict with the heroine. The heroine is very relaxed when she is redeemed, and she also teaches them to cultivate immortality... I always tell the truth. The only shortcoming is probably that the heroine has no cultivation and no strength, and is weak.

Ah, it's so good-looking, I highly recommend it. The heroine is ignorant and a newbie in love, but in my eyes she's not that silly and sweet. She regards love as friendship, but other men don't think so. Damn, I'd like to ask about the approximate update time.

After reading your work, I am deeply inspired. Your exquisite writing style and vivid plot made me feel like I was in it, feeling the joy, anger, sorrow and joy of each character. However, I also want to give you some advice. The update speed of your work is moderate, but it is also important to slow down occasionally and give yourself time to breathe. After all, creation also requires the accumulation of energy and inspiration. I look forward to more of your masterpieces. Even if they are not finished, they are highly recommended! I hope you can maintain this enthusiasm and creativity and continue to move forward. Between the pages of the book, the seeds of the story quietly take root and sprout in the heart. The author's brushwork is like a spring breeze, gently awakening the sleeping imagination. Between the lines, there is sometimes a magnificent ocean, sometimes a deep and quiet forest. Every plot is like a window, leading me through time and space to explore the unknown world. The words are picturesque, the world under the author's pen is full of flowers, and the picture of life is slowly unfolding in front of my eyes. Those words are like a string of pearls, connecting the pearl chain of time. Each chapter remembers the ups and downs of life. I love reading, because in the book, the joys, anger, sorrows and joys are so real, as if I can touch the reality of every emotion. The spring breeze brings warmth, and the pages of the book fly. The words flowing from the pen are like a timely rain, nourishing the readers' hearts. Author, please don't let the rain stop. May your writing bloom with flowers. May your words be like spring silkworms that will die before they die. Let us look forward to every update as a feast for the soul [laughing]

I like this novel very much. I personally like it!! I think the author's writing is very good. The female protagonist is a dodder type, which is acceptable to me. The female protagonist is favored by heaven and has a system of heavenly favors. Hehehe, this gold finger is huge. I don't know how many male protagonists there are at present. There are too many roots. There are so many books to count! I don't even know how the author remembers the names. I'm such a good person. I forget every one I read [face covering]. There are also my favorite plots where I am jealous of myself. I may have a bad taste and like to watch this kind of [shy]. I don't recommend it to tomb robber fans, after all, they all have OOC.

The tool looks good! ! It's the best-looking Tomb Raider fanfic I've seen so far! ! Author, don't be tired or idle, please update more! ! ! [Love][Love][Love][Love]

This is a treasure book📙Super super super beautiful ꉂ(ˊᗜˋ*) The character of the heroine is also very cute❛˓◞˂̵✧And she has gone through a little transformation to become what she is today (of course her appearance is always the best in the book NO .1) She was nurtured by love little by little. From being unconfident and sensitive to the outside world's gaze at the beginning, she later became able to accept the gaze of others calmly and be brave enough to be herself🌈👏 Her men are also very good, and every one of them can be the prototype of the male protagonist in the novel👍👍Such a gentle and lovely Yue'er deserves to be cared for by all of us🌸🌸I also hope that readers of fan fiction will not take it too seriously. Read more about the introduction. After all, this is fan fiction, if you don't love it, please don't hurt it. Consciously quit, hello, me, hello everyone. (Keep a good reading atmosphere) I also hope that more like-minded friends can see the increasingly beautiful moon. Their story is still very long, I look forward to them getting better and better👏👏🎊And the most important thing, thank you to our most hardworking and lovely Yanzi💋💋 (Swallow, how can I live without you❛˓◞˂̵✧)

Among the Tomb Raiders fanfics, the heroine has the most open harem. I won't say anything more. I couldn't hold back the AK at the corner of my mouth the whole time. And it looks really comfortable. When the heroine faces danger alone, everyone protects the heroine.

The author's subject matter is very good, and his writing style is also good. Because I prefer to read Heartthrob and Peaceful Regret, so I think this book is really good, but it may be a little too strict during the review, and there are many deleted words in it.

It's a very Mary Sue, very Dream Girl kind of novel. I liked it very much when I first read it. I'm a native, so I love reading it. But there are too many words, and I get a little tired of the same characters, but if you really like this type, you can still take a look.

Very nice! ! ! It is a real group favorite article, the sweetness is beyond the limit, and the Shura field is also very beautiful. I personally think it is a very beautiful one among the stolen works.

Especially beautiful. The shaping is also perfect, especially the more than 100 people in the Zhang family boy band, but they were only thought of after a lot of effort, and ordinary ones are not needed at all. Believe me, she is really super good-looking. Xiaoyue'er is also a shy, cute, soft-bodied and beautiful little beauty. Everyone loves her. She may be a bit Mary Sue in the early stage, but she becomes more beautiful in the later stage. Really a five-star recommendation, depending on how long I read it.

Delicious, love to eat. Eat a lot. This Zhang family boy group is all on the table. It's the first time I've seen such a special stolen pen setting. It's great. Not following the main line, or rather not following the original work. This book has a clear main line. Redemption is in it, blah blah... I like to see the Lord having meat to eat blah blah...

The writing style is very good, and the author also loves to interact with readers. This novel is definitely one of the best among stolen fan fictions. It mainly focuses on a person who loves to knock, and I like the author, Dad, one day [shy]

It looks good, the author should write more [learned] [learned] [learned] The author's writing style was relatively immature at first, but then gradually matured. The heroine gradually develops and becomes powerful from the initial timidity, fear and sensitivity. It can be said that the author and the heroine have grown together. Wow, so many people don't know how the heroine's waist is? [Adoration][Adoration][Adoration][Adoration][Adoration]

It's so good. If you like it, read more. Author, please feel free to update more in the future. I'd like to take the liberty to ask when it will be finished (it would be better if it can be updated to thousands of chapters) Here's wishing my baby Yueyue health, happiness and peace! [Send heart][Send heart][Send heart]

Keywords: time travel, beautiful heroine, heartthrob, training gou, Zhang family boy group, Laojiumen Tiantuan, Nenniu Wufang, Wangwang special agent team For a period of time, I was particularly obsessed with humanities, such as curses, tomb robbers, HP, Naruto, and pirates. I read them all. You can tell by looking at the categories on my bookshelf, but I haven't organized my bookshelf in a long time. Among the many articles I have read, the writing style of this book is relatively high. I personally like the ultimate ambiguous pull and the heartthrob. Maybe it is because I was relatively lonely in real life before, so I felt that if I create a novel character, I must make everyone love her, but it must also be well-founded. At that time, I was obsessed with the heartthrob, haha, but it is much better now. Okay, I'm going to digress. The ambiguity in the early part of this novel is still very interesting, but in the later stage, maybe because of the ancestor Qilin, everyone can't help but feel good about her. It must be very refreshing. I know that as an author, I hate writing guidance. Maybe I wrote this article just for the readers and myself. It's cool and refreshing, but I think the author has a great chance to improve it. The main line can be clearer, so that readers can make the novel three-dimensional, the hierarchical structure can be clearer, and the contrast between the specific events of the story characters can be deepened, so that readers will have a deeper memory and enjoy the novel more happily. Summary: The author's writing style is very good. It's a Tomb Raider Notes fanfic that is worth reading. It can be seen that the author also writes with great care. Anyway, I will not let down the author who is attentive. Also, I'm so hungry, the author is very [grieved]

The presentation of the "heartthrob" in the book is not superficial, but is reflected through the changes in the attitude of different characters towards the protagonist and mutual protection in times of crisis. This special charm is intertwined with the danger of tomb robbing, forming a wonderful contrast. The growth of the protagonist during the adventure is also worthy of attention. From being initially ignorant and fragile, to gradually adapting to dangerous situations and showing inner resilience, the gentleness of "White Moonlight" gradually becomes more tenacious, and the character becomes more plump. Like it very much! ! !

Nice! ! ! The author writes more! ! ! ! ! ! There are more updates every day, every character and every chapter is so beautiful! ! ! ! ! I hope to write more, write more pages, and write more chapters every day! ! ! ! ! Don't finish it too quickly, write more! ! Super pretty! ! ! This is by far the most beautiful thing I have ever seen! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! I haven't seen enough yet! Author, please write more chapters next time. I love what you wrote! ! !

Super pretty, Yueyue is cute, kind, blushes easily and is shy, Yueyue deserves to be loved by everyone! I like Yueyue's character so much! The male protagonists are all pure and strong, and they love Yueyue so much. They are so sweet. The system will also protect Yueyue from getting hurt at all, and they are very good at keeping things alive. I haven't watched Tomb Raider but I have watched it from beginning to end. What I like the most is that everyone in the Zhang Family Boys Group loves it so much. The plots of these two parts of Nanyang and Northeastern Archives are my favorite and have the most interactions. Now I write about the three of them going to play in an amusement park in another world. It's very nice and sweet. Yueyue really prefers the younger brother, hahaha. It's so well written and attentive, and there's not much involved in the plot. I really like the interaction between Yueyue and them.

This book is really a super big book. It's beautiful and the author's writing is good. I also bought some small foreshadowings. In the later stage, it was very enjoyable. It looked very enjoyable. Although some were deleted, the author still created a group for us and put those The deleted parts are available for us. You can re-watch the content and it's super good to watch. Moreover, this heartthrob is real. There are not just a few dozen but hundreds of heartthrobs. It's really fun to watch, very cool. Invincible is so good, it's not enough to watch at all! ! ! ! ! ! ! All in all, I love this book so much (ᐥᐜᐥ)♡︎ᐝ

I love the handsome guys from the Zhang family in the Southern Archives so much. It's really rare to write about them. It's my honor to find the author of this one. Woohoo, I love it so much. Good luck to the author (I rarely give five stars to novels, hum)

Good looking! ! ! The Li people must have my Li people! Su Wan, Yang Hao, Liu Sang, Wang Can, Zhang Jiuri hides sea flowers! ! !

You don't know if you don't see it, but it looks great. Love you author