People Are in Tokyo, and There Are Swarms of Demons

The topic is very novel and the content is good. However, I once mentioned purchasing a devil's contract or something. There was no contact for a long time and I had no ability to upgrade. A hodgepodge of too many animes that are not original and interesting

Overall, it's very good. The only doubt is the emotional line. I don't know if there is a female protagonist. I think if there is no female protagonist, I don't want to write those ambiguous plots. Now there are two women who like the male protagonist, and the male protagonist even lives with one of them. Overall, I still hope there will be a female protagonist.

It is indeed possible. If you can tolerate the secondary style of Japanese comics, there is nothing poisonous about the plot. The author must have read a lot of Japanese comics.

So far, I haven't found any major flaws. The story and worldview are all conventional Gao Wu Tokyo style. The advantage is that the characters are beyond my expectation, and the battle scenes, whether they are bad students or passerby opponents who have appeared in the game for hundreds of words, are all vivid and vivid! I can't believe this is serialized on Tomato! Although a lot of things have been stitched together, it is still considered an original plot, and it will be more difficult to set up the characters. It seems that the author must have read a lot! As a picky old reader, I think it is fully capable of being serialized on a paid platform!

Japanese manga-style novels, the concept of power, power, and demons are really good points, but they are all very niche at the moment. The character of the protagonist is not the hot-blooded young man in ordinary Japanese comics. The character of being ruthless and not talking much attracted me. I like this book and give it best to the author [sending my heart]

I haven't finished it yet, but I think it's pretty good. Although the author didn't say it clearly, I feel like the author wants to take the route of having multiple female protagonists. There are already several girls who have a good relationship with the protagonist. One of the two girls even confessed to the protagonist and the other lives with the protagonist.

The author followed me for 16 years before writing the protagonist

The world view and the male protagonist's design are pretty good, and the design of the first few games so far is also pretty good. An original article worth reading, the best part of the tomato is the grass jelly. The battles are also beautifully written. The only minor shortcoming may be the emotional scenes and the shaping of female characters. There are no outstanding female characters for the time being. But I don't think it's a problem with the writing. The main reason is that the current female characters all feel like they're from urban comics. But with such a theme and a male protagonist, it's difficult to have a relationship-related development. Maybe it's just a small ambiguous single arrow at most.

WOC is so handsome and cool, fighting! Cool! It is similar to the setting of Chainsaw Man, but the concept of strengthening abilities is carefully thought out. Of course, the only problem is that the protagonist's enhancement ability is too supermodel, but it doesn't affect the enjoyment of watching it.

We found this novel among a lot of anime [laughing]

Very nice! The battles are exquisite, the protagonist is decent, he is a cold-hearted man who is ruthless and doesn't talk much, he is a heartthrob type. Feel free to write about your daily life, I am a native dog and I love reading it😋

If nothing else, the author is really cute [laughs] Isn't this book better than the Hoshino Gen next door? Up to now, I am still updating every day. I owe more than 30 chapters. How many chapters do I still have to pay? I've been raised to the point where I'm almost moldy, and I'm only in the single digits. I haven't read it yet.

I always feel that the protagonist is too powerful. This book may be very short. I hope the author will write more. I have always wanted to read a book with the power of rain. This is the one I have been reading for a long time. It is very well written and I hope to update it more!

The bad news: it's a mix Good news: It's all mixed up

As of the 79th chapter review, I feel that the combat power has collapsed a little, and the main abilities have increased too fast, which is weird and hard to describe. Overall, it is a very good book.

I feel like the protagonist still has huge room for improvement. The Rain Demon still has a lot of fragments. The lion who strengthened his ability said he was given clues but hasn't gotten them yet. This is already the peak of Tokyo's combat power. I feel like the recent plot is so weird, with a lot of pitfalls. The protagonist was originally invincible before he made up for himself, but after making up for himself, everyone has the courage of Lu Bu. . . And the plot is a bit weird and twisted now.

Those who like Japanese manga style will probably like it very much. I personally think the writing style is good. But people who don't like it will definitely have a bad sense of it.

The Super Invincible Universe Explosion Level looks great [Like][Like][Like] But can the author write more about it? [Cry][cry][cry]

A good novel. If your brainwaves are right, you will find it very interesting.

This familiar neon, this familiar middle school, this familiar game, the stitching of ancient Japanese animation

It has a Chainsaw Man-like world view, a good Japanese cartoon campus daily style, reasonable combat ability development, and good character creation. It's all fairy grass, but the number is limited!

At a glance, the story flows smoothly. The rating may be a bit low because I just started writing it. But as the number of words increases and more people read it, I believe it will increase. More than nine points

The protagonist is smart and powerful. He has emotional lines but does not express them deliberately. He can barely accept it when he joins the official team. He is a little prone to being emotional but these are minor problems. His character has good outlook on life. I hope the author will work hard to update. Ten chapters a day is not too much.

There is a slight problem, but I can keep reading. So does this book have a single heroine or no heroine?

Author, I believe in your ability. You can definitely write a hundred chapters a day. You are the one who made a contract with the writing devil.

It feels so good to find gold in shit.

Is this book something I can see on Tomatoes [face covering]

If there is an anime, it will definitely have a huge dick

How should I put it, Shadow Girl is quite strange.

One of the few Tomatoes has written such a handsome book, but the score feels so low.