Azur Lane: The Might of the New Donghuang!

I have read more than 260 chapters so far. I just read the Spring Festival extra. Let's talk about this book. First of all, if you feel uncomfortable at the beginning, don't rush to quit. It is obvious that the author's writing style is improving in the book. It is recommended to consider quitting after about 100 chapters. This book is generally good as a leisure article. What I have seen so far is that the protagonist participates in various activities. The dynamic storyline is constantly about breaking knives (I really like this, I just love watching this kind of knife breaking). In addition, the military and historical related parts are well written, and some famous historical scenes are restored. Overall, it is not particularly outstanding, but it is pretty good, with four stars. Considering that the author is a newbie, I will give it a five-star rating~ Let's talk about the problems. First of all, I am currently confused about the main plot. I don't know why the protagonist has completed the first world (Little Blue World), why there is a second one (Cangsteel World), and why he has to go to the third one (Azure Main World). It feels a bit confusing. It is said that the protagonist is required to save the world, but he still doesn't understand what to save 🤦 The second one is in a multi-line advancement state for a long time. Here is what I see There are three main lines, and there are some minor short lines scattered here and there. It feels very messy and jumps around. I feel that the author also uses this to make a point, which is a bit unsatisfactory. The third is a small problem in the writing style. A lot of modifiers are deliberately added. This is a problem faced by many new authors. It is particularly prominent in the first few dozen chapters of this book, but it is much better in the later chapters. In short, it can be used as a casual article about ship girls, as well as a military article, and is worth reading.

The writing is good, but starting from Chapter 350, I felt that the author started to let himself go. I don't know what happened at that time, but I think the author must have his own thoughts in doing so. And before reading this book, I thought that the rating was indeed a bit low, so Because I have also read other fanfics before, including Jiang Linya and Jiang Mengyue in Bilan. I will not compare them with other fanfics. Each has its own advantages and disadvantages. Every author starts with a young writing style. I won't say more. Come on, author.

I have now read Chapter 16, which contains a lot of content. The most important thing is that this is not just an ordinary Bilan article. Regardless of the writing style, the article describes the glorious rise of New Donghuang and its tragic history.

The author can send some sweets. I just came out of the last book with a similar theme. It's like touching the ears of a fox or something as long as it doesn't involve H. After all, Bilan has a touch system. Of course, the most important thing is to intersperse a little bit of the harem on fire. It doesn't take a lot. After all, we are Dadonghuang. I don't know if it can be done?

It looks great, I love watching it, but I just want to know if modern ship girls can be as powerful as MEAT ship girls (Rodney MEAT has the ability to explode), Siren is also very popular in the plot 🤔🤔🤔

I like what the author wrote very much

You can write anything, but sails are often forgotten [face-covering] [face-covering] I have read several stories about ship girls, but there is no sign of sailing [face-covering]

Newcomer, is the Nanchang Fleet the commander's sharpest sword? [Laughing]

Well written, please keep up the good work.

It's good to read. It's the second one I like among the Kanniyo stories I've read. The first one was blocked. I hope this one can be finished.