The Little Junior Sister's Sexy Tricks Are All over the Place, Playing in the World of Immortality

A little bit of daily writing. The writing style is very delicate, but the plot progresses very quickly, and you can learn a lot about it. Those chapters are interesting and can be described with great colors. At the end, there is a point that is difficult to explain in one sentence, and the level of comedy is not enough. I think the laughs are below average. The big book makes me feel like I want to laugh, but I can't. It may be a problem with my personal expression ability. The funny things I say sometimes become a little unfunny. If Da Da wants to follow the kind of slow and steady style, it will be good to develop like this. The characters in the book can be described as prominently as possible. The character traits of the characters written by Da Da are not so obvious, but they can still be seen. They are all very lively children, but they also have their own attributes. It is good to be able to express them~ Damn, if you don't remember your blessings well, use a notebook to write the names of the characters and remember them~ The above are the problems I have observed, and I hope they will get better and better. In addition, I have a grudging request, that is, can you not only give the good things to the heroine? At any rate, it's okay for the people around you to get 1 point, right? What I hope to see is not just the heroine becoming stronger, you would say that the supporting characters are becoming stronger, right? No, no, no. They just became stronger in cultivation, there is no difference in essence! ! Also, the good things I hope are not all obtained by relying on the heroine. Some of them are obtained by themselves and obtained through their own efforts. They are also very outstanding young geniuses and high-spirited young men. There are some things that not only the heroine can obtain! ! ! I'm asking for a double update as always, big brother, look at me! ! I have a weak question, is there no cp in this article?

I think it's pretty good-looking, the logic is clear, and the characters are likeable. It's very good, but there are too few updates. Personally, I feel that the six-person group is really loving. The heroine's character is not obvious in the early stage, which may be due to the author's change in writing. The group portrait is my favorite. The characters are very clear and obvious. That's why no one has read it. This is really a good book. I will keep up with it and add more updates to the author! ! !

What do you say when the six of them are together? They care about each other and tease each other. In short, they are in harmony. Anyway, we love each other very much, especially Ling Mo. The whole character in the later period gives people a very relaxed and funny feeling, and the author describes the characters and their respective characteristics of the six of them very vividly (I don't know how to describe it) [laughing], in short, I personally think it is very good-looking, I love it very much [Send heart]

The organization is clear, the language is humorous, and the characters are distinctive. The author and her characters are very good babies. The author updates on time. In short, it can be said in two words: Haokan [send heart] [send heart] [send heart]

It's really beautiful. The author must keep it up [Sending my heart]

I feel like some of the plot is the same as a certain book, but it's still pretty good.

It's really good-looking, but the biographie called Shen Xinghui confused me. The book is really good-looking, I hope the author will continue to finish it! Really pretty! ! !

Very nice, good luck to the author

There's just a shortage of books, so the author really wants to update them [Sending my heart]

It's beautiful~ The author is great, please take a rest

This book is quite nice. , But I feel that the heroine is really suitable for all CPs, but I don't know who is better. If it is the one with the surname Zhou, I think it is not bad, and it is quite unexpected. This novel makes me think it is very interesting. I gave other novels four or three stars. Well, it has a juvenile feel.

Make me fall in love with Xiuxianwen again

Oops, I still haven't remembered everyone's names, sects, and how many senior brothers they are. I only remember Ling Mo😋, but the capital letters are super nice! ! ! I hope a class representative will tell me my name and ranking [shy]

I like it. I just want more. It's not enough. I had it for a few months and read more than 40 chapters in a few hours [crying]

Looks good, really looks good. Overall, he is warm and funny, with a little bit of seriousness attached to him. But what should I do if I don't really like Elder Bai? Someone come and save me quickly.

I like it, love to read it, please update more, the author please don't stop updating, you must write to the ending [please update]

If you like it out of 10 or 12, cheers!

It's super, super good-looking. I like the character of the protagonist so much. There's a lot of humor and a lot of laughs. It's all about being ridiculous. I really recommend it.

It's quite exciting, the story line is pretty good, and the emotional line is quite delicate.

It's very nice, but there are a few typos. I hope the author can correct the typos🥰🥰 It's so good. I stopped reading after reading more than a hundred chapters. Now that I've read it, I'm going to read it again. The latter part is super good. The teenagers redeem each other and help each other. The atmosphere is very good. There's no infighting within the group. It's very loving. I like it. I love you, the author😘

This book is really good. I just finished it. Can the author of this book reveal whether the ending is be or he? (You don't have to answer)

It's good-looking, very interesting, and has a lot of jokes.

It's pretty good to read. But the author didn't reverse the order of the words when he typed them up. Some places were in the wrong order. It was very tiring to read. Overall, it's very good. I like a few of them😁 The author is great, I hope that senior fellow apprentices Ling Mo also have no CP, and don't want to rely on CP for friendship.

It's beautiful, really!

Good-looking, good-looking, so good-looking

Good-looking, good-looking, good-looking, good-looking

I love it so much, I love it so much, I love it so much! ^～^

Good-looking, good-looking, good-looking

So pretty, so pretty

Nothing else, I just hope that the teacher will not interrupt updates. ୧꒰•̀ᴗ•́꒱୨