Traveling Through the World of Beasts and Being Robbed by a Beastman

I felt like I was reading an essay, not a novel. There are so many adjectives and idioms that are unnecessary. I have never seen so many adjectives and idioms in a novel. There are also some psychological descriptions and some sudden emotional descriptions. I am really convinced. (At the beginning, the heroine is a strong work character. I wrote a paragraph about chicken soup for the soul. The most unbearable part is picking dates. One, she actually described a moment of saying goodbye to the jujube tree. . . Numb) It felt like a knife was put on the neck, and you were still chanting. I was watching the plot, not to learn how to write. Maybe the ancient Chinese is better, and the beast world is more vernacular!