Staring at the Immortal Road

It's a very good start. The writing method of crowdfunding and foundation building is novel. Although the writing style is light, it can still make the protagonist and some of the monks around him flesh and blood. There is quite a sense of friendship in it. It feels very good. It is a very good book so far.

Yuanying has written very well before. The struggles and opportunities in each realm, and the methods for breakthrough in each realm are also set up, which is eye-catching. At the same time, the method of human elixir is also very well set. The disadvantage is that the plot transition after Nascent Soul becomes faster, and the cultivation of the unit infant stage is supported by the story line. The plot becomes slightly empty after breaking through to God, which also leads to very fast plot transition in the later period. I think it may be that the author did not plan for After Yuan Ying in the initial outline, but this is just a minor flaw. Before Yuan Ying is the main part of the novel, and it is worth reading. Note: This is not a brainless article.

This book actually looks like a classic novel from the Ming and Qing Dynasties! The language is ancient vernacular, and the words and deeds of the characters are quite simple. It is not like the Shuangwen of today, and it is unique among Tomato's many novices. But it's really not too combustible, so it's still good to read patiently.

To be honest, it is better than most of Tomato's fairy tales. The opening dozens of chapters are really good at first glance. However, the writer becomes a bit weak as he goes on. The main problem is that the protagonist has not grown up. There is no change in mentality or behavior. The character is indecisive and submissive, but it is still pretty good! There is no big problem with logic! But I still hope that the author can write better and better!

The writing is sophisticated, both the protagonist and the supporting characters do things with basic logic, and the combat power has not collapsed yet. I will support it with five stars first.

It's so beautiful. It's hard to become an immortal. It's one step at a time. There's no talent, it's all about hard work. It is very practical to read, and the writing is delicate. There is no system, no exaggeration, no cheating, and it is a very pragmatic article.

Dear friend, Congratulations on completing a book with profound skills, smooth writing, and clear logical thinking. Your efforts and talents are admirable. I wish your creative path will become wider and wider! Recommend!

For today's people, reading a few fantasy novels can soothe the spiritual emptiness and learn some illusory immortal skills. It is also a kind of spiritual sustenance. I just read this novel and I don't have much understanding of the protagonist's character traits. However, for someone who has lived at the bottom since childhood, his personality is calm and unassuming, and he practices step by step. However, he still has a close temperament to the young man who pursues strength and is unwilling to be inferior to others.

It's well written, keep going and don't end it.

I have read this book intermittently several times, and I like the character of Little Marquis better. He is flesh and blood, and knows how to advance and retreat, which is rare. There are not many supporting characters in Tomatoes that are well described. High position and power are not the pinnacle. Being able to appreciate is the true meaning between people.

The writing is very good, not exaggerated, and the content is described in detail and with flesh and blood.

Very good-looking, a bit like Xiao Ding's real cultivation of immortality

A very nice fairy tale novel

Nice fantasy novel

The content written is truly wonderful!

Good, good, good, good, good

It seems more humane now.

It looks okay so far, I hope the quality gets better and better

The writing is good, the logic should be more rigorous, and there should be no inconsistencies.

It's well written and engaging, I like it very much. After searching many comparisons, this book is still the best.

The plot of the book is clear and ups and downs, without too much nonsense.

I think this is a harem novel about cultivating immortals with food and grass, but girls die too often. The protagonist is not decisive enough, and it would be better if it was darker.

It is the only book about cultivating immortals that is readable. The author's writing style is excellent. The plot unfolds slowly. Characters from all walks of life talk and move in their hearts. The consciousness of mortals struggling to survive is vividly displayed on the page. The dialogue scenes also make people feel as if they are actually present. I hope the author will persevere and write well, and it will become a masterpiece of Tomato [Like]

The plot is solid and not exaggerated, and the writing is concise. It is indeed a good book worth reading [smile]

Quite interesting, good article

The article is eloquent, fascinating, and enjoyable to read. Good writing. [Like]

It's a good book, the story has twists and turns, the author's writing is sophisticated, the language is concise, and there's not so much nonsense. I like it very much and can't put it down.

It's still very beautiful and worth seeing.

Very nice! Very satisfied! Like it very much! Thanks!

The book is really good, but the progress is fast [laughing awkwardly], really fast, and there is not much nonsense. Overall, it's okay.