Self-Destruction [Narcissus]

One body and two souls, constantly entangled, the long-term pursuit of the male lead takes up nearly 50,000 words. I'm used to giving five stars.

It's beautiful. It's been a long time since I've found a narcissus novel that's so satisfying. The author's characterization is pretty good, but Fang Jing occupies too much space, and the narcissus tastes a bit weird.

I rarely post book reviews, this one is an exception The more I read it, the more regretful I feel Everyone has different feelings, let me just talk about my personal feelings. 1. The author said in the early stage that this book had no outline. At the time, it seemed to be nothing, but some of the writing later became messy. "The characters in the novel give birth to souls" (Lizi meets later, contains spoilers) 2. The author is very active, and I can't change the habit of reading book reviews, so I saw some spoilers by the author. The author also opened a chapter to talk about some contents of the book, including the development of the protagonist's emotional line, which affects the perception ꒦ິ^꒦ິ 3. Some of the foreshadowing in the previous article has no follow-up, and some of the content in the later article has no foreshadowing in the previous article, which seems abrupt. 4. The author himself has done a good job in shaping the characters. Everyone has a distinct personality, and there is basically no reason to be hated. The author said that A Yan's personality is a bit weak (should that be the word?), But I think it is more in line with his experience. The following contains spoilers. If you haven't watched it, don't read below. 1 1 1 1 1 1 1 1 1 1 1. There is still no news about the person behind Fang Jing's death. He just said that "all the people who deserved to die or deserved to die have died." It is difficult to verify. I wonder if the author will fill this hole in the future. 2. I feel that the friendship between O Yan and Chu Yu ended inexplicably (?, Although it is very realistic, but Chu Yu finally said that he wanted to come to Qian Xuanji, and I don't know why I feel a little sad for Chu Bao, there is a kind of affectionate love for the male lead in the female channel) Feeling? (Nonsense) Anyway, I still can't forget that O Yan made up his own ideal type in order to reject Chu Yu, and Chu Yu was greatly hurt by this. In fact, O Yan had many ways to refuse at the time, and he said it himself. If I believe that there is pure friendship between AO, I can directly state that I have no such thoughts about Chu Yu. Even if I didn't know that I would get together with A Yan at the time, he had said it before (or later, I can't remember where) in this life. If you have the idea of ​​falling in love, you may find a partner. When looking for a partner, you cannot avoid the issue of ideal type. Fang Jing (and O Yan) do not talk to Chu Yu. This lie will eventually be exposed, and Chu Bao will be the one who will be hurt after all. ꒦ິ^꒦ິ 3. As in 1, Fang Jing died, but the person who harmed him was not caught. O Yan was very sad at the time but Chu Yu coaxed him and it seemed to be okay. Later, O Yan and A Yan did not have the idea of catching the real culprit. O Yan felt very guilty about Fang Jing. Fang Jing's incident was unlikely to be forgotten. We can only guess that the author did not think about how to introduce Fang Jing's incident, so he had to avoid talking about it. 4. The part where O Yan confessed to A Yan felt very strange. The author also made it clear that he had no intention of confessing there. It doesn't mean that it was not in line with the character at that time, but it just lacked the drama I wanted (?, That is to say, the plot development in that paragraph was relatively gentle, and the part where the confession was inserted was very sudden. Wu, I expected that when A Yan's suspicion of O Yan reaches its peak and the situation becomes critical, O Yan confesses when O Yan is questioned by A Yan. In addition, A Yan may feel distressed for him after seeing part of O Yan's experience, but I don't seem to notice it (maybe I am too straightforward and insensitive). I said a lot of things inadvertently. I would like to emphasize that most of them are personal opinions. If you disagree with me, go out and turn left. Thank you╮( •́ω•̀ )╭ If the author can see it, quietly making a wish can give the protagonists and supporting characters in this world a better ending. It is considered a personal selfishness. Please read it from beginning to end, rationalize your thoughts, and think about the foreshadowing and the expected plot. There is no need to change the text drastically, just let them move on to where they should go, and give them a good ending (´இωஇ`) I really like the author's A Yan O Yan, Fang Jing, Chu Yu, and Bai Luo Luo, but I won't continue to follow up on the novel in the short term. Let's take a look again when the book is truly finished and everyone's ending is ushered in. (*'-'*) (Cry) Forget it, I was browsing the comments before and saw a one-star long review. The author avoided talking about the issues he mentioned. Instead, he said, "Take a screenshot of the first one-star review for nostalgia" (to this effect). Isn't this the attitude? I gave up all hope for this book all of a sudden 🙂🙂, one star for Chu Yu and Fang Jing, whom I once liked.

The author really writes well. There is no comparison or foil, and the love of each character is obvious. Xiao Jing will not fall in love at first sight with Chu Yu, who suddenly appears as a male protagonist because he is a supporting role in life, but falls in love with Ryan, who may not even have a real name. What he said is really good, a person's love is also love, you can sing loudly, or you can be silent. Every character has a sparkling side, this is the charm of group portraits 🥰 Finally, the author is updating the article. Don't be tired, but don't be idle either.

I love reading Narcissus, it's very interesting. Pay attention to the introduction and demining. Personally, I don't like things like quick soul traveling that takes over the magpie's nest. If the original owner uses his body to fall in love with the person he likes, what will happen to the original owner and where will he go? Regardless, I feel a little speechless just enjoying the treatment of the original owner with peace of mind. Fortunately, the plot of this book is quite good. It has the ins and outs and is reasonably pretentious. I haven't read enough interstellar literature and I don't really understand it. Alas, the story of Unnamed Little Planet is a bit confusing. As well as reshaping the body, Narcissus has to smell like herself! I don't feel any discomfort at the moment, but I feel a little moved. Everyone has his or her own destiny, with its own splendor and loneliness. I hope you continue to keep up the good work and don't end it! The only thing I'm not satisfied with is that it's still serialized!! Itchy heart...

He's good at selling CP, but he's not very friendly to some of the supporting characters and Narcissus. Omnivores and evil people who don't care at all can watch it.

It's beautiful, the writing is smooth and logical, and it's my favorite narcissus theme (I can't resist narcissus). At present, it is only the early content display, but I like the character creation of this book. There are no very stereotyped characters. I look forward to the follow-up development. I will review it when I see something worth talking about 😘[Flowing Kiss][Flowing Kiss][Flowing Kiss] Come on, author 😘😘 Ah, I would like to add that this is a slow-paced book. People who are used to the fast pace may not be used to it, so everyone needs to consider this as appropriate. The following content may contain spoilers Editor 2: Alas, the author's treatment of the two souls is what I expected. In fact, I really like the character Fang Jing. At least he has shined. But from the moment Luo decided to become Fang Jing, this book is no longer considered Narcissus to me, alas. But understandable. Part Three: If you don't become a party, then you will have your own body. Part Four: The pacing is messy, especially in the second half.

Nice! There is no bad ending, I confront myself, I predict myself, I save myself. Luo Yan: Why am I so unruly? Me: My younger self is so funny I felt good when I read Narcissus for the first time. The first part of the book was well written, especially the portrayal of the important character Fang Jing was very successful. The second part was probably because the author didn't have an outline, and many plots were a bit messy, as if they were written out of nowhere and then filled in the gaps. Also, it can be clearly seen that the author was a little "exhausted" at the end of the writing, and the character creation of Bai Luoluo was a bit pale, but overall it was good. I felt comfortable reading it. I was a little worried that the book would be unfinished without an outline, but the author was also very strong and insisted on finishing it completely. I didn't say that the ending was particularly sloppy (here I mean a hastily written ending similar to "the prince and the princess lived happily together from now on"), but when the two protagonists were separated, I personally felt that the writing was a bit sloppy, and the reason why the lower-ranking character gave way to the higher-ranking character was not completely written out. Regarding the theme of "I returned to another world and fell in love with myself in another world", I think this book is well written (at least it is very good on Tomato) Since this is the first Narcissus I have read, and there are very few similar Narcissus novels, I am happy to give this book a high score. The novel is indeed a bit lacking in taste, but I believe that the author's subsequent works will get better and better, and I look forward to the author's subsequent works. I just quickly re-read the previous content about Fang Jing. The ending is about holding a knife, but I have to say that the character of Fang Jing is more complete and realistic. Although I thought Fang Jing would be more familiar with a group of CPs when I read it for the first time (unscrupulous tomatoes made me more stereotyped), but when I think about it carefully, Chu is just a stranger with a high pheromone match for Fang Jing, but Yanyan is indeed a beam of light that shines into his life, giving him a sense of self. The letter of encouragement, as a supporter that he could truly rely on, gave him light in the darkest time of his life. At this time, I think there should be no other reason for anyone to fall in love with a stranger who has a high pheromone match without having any trouble with this light or having feelings for this stranger higher than this light of salvation. This makes Fang Jing come alive and makes this book more real. At the same time, the way Yan and Fang Jing get along also conveys that Yan's character is kind and upright, and his outlook on life is very upright. Then I went back and watched [The Grass Has Been Planted]

The first time I saw Narcissus, I had never seen it before and I subconsciously felt a little unable to accept it. I was hungry recently and wanted to try it, and it turned out to be so damn sweet. I was really wrong. I love it so much!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! 😘💕

The author writes very well! I really love ABO plus Star Plus Narcissus plus two male protagonists. I don't have any meal replacements at the moment. I'm looking forward to O Yan getting a new body. The ghost setting is the first time I've seen it in an interstellar novel, and I'm really looking forward to it. There's also the league between military academies, which I really like. The first time I saw Narcissus, I was really confused by the fragrance [sending my heart]. The characters in this article are all very well created. For example, Valentina, Bai Luoluo, Chi Ying and Chu Yu have really distinct personalities. It's like having a picture emerge in your mind as soon as you read the text. Although it is slightly different from the introduction, it is innocuous. The plot is really attractive. Now I am really looking forward to O Yan's new body 😘.