Broken! Do Vicious Cannon Fodders Also Need to Be Locked up in a Dark Room?

I came here from the video tweet about the card. If it weren't for you and I, I wouldn't know that reading novels on Tomato is free! ! ! The characters are all well written, with a sense of emotion, and are much better than other short stories [Blow a kiss]

I caught it on Douyin and jumped directly to the card world. It was so novel. This was the first time I saw the card world. "He is not a card, he is my lover, ahhh! Who understands!"

The card plane is really beautiful! ! ! Ayan is not a card, but a lover! ! !

Every world is beautiful. Just when I think the new series is the peak, the next world is always more exciting. The world view of cards and the little eunuch is also quite rare, and the writing is so attractive [shy]

I like it so much. I think Kuai Wen's love at first sight is better based on their acquaintance, and the degree of love at first sight is also well controlled. He won't turn into a crazy person chasing after Yuan once they meet. There is a natural process, but based on the original character, he will forcefully suppress the throbbing. It's so cool. Also, it should have followed the original plot, but seeing Yuan really go on like this will make him crazy, just like in the second world. , "Love me, now", I was really excited when I saw this. I like to see the plot of Gong begging Shou to love him, and watching Shou's calm appearance and going crazy. It's so cool. I hope the author can write the kind of story where Gong fell in love at first sight but didn't realize it, and when Shou told him that she liked him, she was obviously throbbing but was stubborn and refused to admit it. Then he realized his feelings but found that Shou didn't seem to love him as much as he thought, and then he was dark and twisted.

The plot and characters are quite nice and relatively novel, but I really can't stand Yan's hard work, and often ends up with 0 points, or even deductions, which really makes people feel like they have conquered him [face covering]

To be honest, it was very hard to read at first. If I hadn't been curious about how crazy this book could be, I would have closed it. However, later on, the imaginative little world is really good, and the author is getting better and better as he writes. Of course, there are definitely shortcomings, but it is obvious that a lot of progress has been made. I really like to read novels that use my imagination like this. In terms of character creation, the hamster changed from an empty and untenable image at the beginning to a flesh-and-blood protagonist in the later period, which is very good. The author gave a lot of cheats to the two protagonists, and also added a lot... Well, it's more of an ancient Mary Sue-like setting. It can be seen that he really loves the two characters in the novel. There are no inexplicable setbacks in the relationship, no third parties, no bloody entanglements, the double arrows are highlighted in bold, and there is no sourness or abuse when you are jealous. This is simply wonderful. The animal character of the hamster is very cute, and it is also very cute when eating melon seeds. I thought it would turn into a hamster or something later, but it didn't. I felt that if it turned into a little hamster and got along with X, it would be very cute, but unfortunately it didn't.

It's good-looking, very sweet, not cruel (if the mission is not completed and the points are not many, it doesn't count), it has a certain logic, the plot development is well controlled, the plot is not fast and ink-free, and the plot framework is also very interesting.

Card World is a relatively new theme. I hope there will be more themes of this type in the future.

Suddenly I found that there was also a Book Tomato in Wukong, so I ran to take a look. I found that many people look at cards first. The theme of cards is really rare and novel. It is really easy for people to catch their eyes. The cards are what they are most interested in. The tweet is also [blowing kiss]

A sunny, cheerful, lively and cute little hamster who likes to stock up and drinks milk tea x a gloomy and paranoid man Super pretty! This fast-traveling small world is a little different from other fast-traveling books. This book has some small worlds with relatively new settings, such as blind boxes, cards... X in every small world loves Ayan (only in the final chapter did he get the name [face covering] Xu Chen), and Ayan's baby is really super cute, sunny, and is X's salvation, whether it is X in the small world or this one X, Baby Ayan is his salvation (my name is Baby Ayan ! ! [Send heart][Send heart][Send heart][Send heart][Send heart]

The author writes very well, and the settings of each world are very interesting. Although the interaction between the two protagonists sometimes feels a bit awkward, it is still very sweet. It's just that I can't stand it anymore. I personally like the kind of show where you can watch the sweet interaction between two people without delaying their career lines. Shushu had already worked so hard to earn points, but his old attacker was simply a hindrance. He fell in love with it just by replenishing his brain, and then performed a series of operations. Shuoshu's points went from 10 to 1 to 0, and even went backwards. The old attacker, who was said to be a big boss, watched a few worlds to make up for it. I didn't see it, it's really annoying. Of course, Shushu is obviously not suitable for this kind of cannon fodder who is in trouble with the protagonist. He can't bear to be that kind of vicious cannon fodder. Ordinary cannon fodder will be noticed because of his differences. He really should be transferred to the strategy department. He can fall in love without delaying his career.

It's okay, proper yandere literature. The shortcoming is probably that the main control point of view character design is naive and silly, which is a common problem in some fast-travel sweet stories nowadays. If you can't accept it, don't watch it.

It's really beautiful. The story and plot are not unprecedented, but they made my eyes shine. Although he is the protagonist in each small world, he regards the male protagonist as a god (maybe he has been a supporting role for a long time before, hahahahahaha), and has a fierce love head. While playing the role seriously, the male protagonist will also give the protagonist unique warmth and love. Later, he also recognized the male protagonist as the person who has been following him. Every small world is quite sweet, it's worth it for two people! ! ! Watching the last world made my heart feel uncomfortable. I wanted to complain, but I also recommend not watching the last small world! I always read this book as a little sweet read before going to bed, but the story about one body and two souls at the end annoyed me so much that I couldn't sleep. I couldn't stand it anymore after reading about half of it. Just like the previous small world, of course everyone likes sunny and cheerful people. This is also Shou's character, and Gong has always had a bad attitude towards world destruction. This is fine, but the problem lies in the plot. This is the first time I feel sorry for Gong, ① because after Song (Shou, also the second personality) appeared, many people wanted Qi (Gong, also the main personality) to disappear. It was like school bullying! ②Because Qi studied very hard, but two personalities appeared in one person for one day, which shortened Qi's study time by half. Qi wanted to stay up late and sprint before the exam. As a result, Song felt that his body couldn't bear it and wanted his roommate to help supervise Qi to sleep well. The roommate directly said to Qi, "Brother Song can't stand it" and asked Qi to sleep, which made Qi even more jealous of Song and even punched Qi. This plot is really crazy. Song could persuade him by himself (for example, writing a small note), but he asked his roommate who had a bad relationship with Qi to persuade him, and the roommate couldn't talk well! ③Because Qi won the teacher's favor with his own abilities, but he still subconsciously thought it was Song's credit because of his previous experiences (for example, his roommates and classmates became friendly to him, and the cafeteria aunt was very enthusiastic about him). I can understand that it is to highlight Song, but it is a bit too much to make Qi Qi like this!

I have finished reading three small worlds. From the current point of view, it should be a sweet love story. When I was hypnotized in the second world, I looked at the introduction and thought that this guy would hypnotize Yan Yan. I was already ready for a little abuse, but no, so for now, it should be a sweet love story. Both of them are very good. I will wait for the update [Blow kiss] [Blow kiss] I followed the tweet after seeing it on Douyin, so I watched the third world first, and I like the third world better [blowing kiss]

It's beautiful, every small world is very beautiful. Although I feel that after the world view is unfolded, it is not as exciting as before, but it is still very sweet. The key is that the settings of each small world are very novel and beautiful. I like these three little gangster cards and elves very much. How did the author come up with such beautiful things? ! ! I usually read articles with a three-minute focus. I was still reading this one last time. Next time I go online, I will be attracted to another one on the homepage. But this one is really different. Every time I read it, my eyes light up. I basically read this one as soon as I hit Pomodoro (although it is also true in the middle) I have actually collected several other books, but I just collected them. I should read this one when I should.) The writing style is also very good. The description of X's unspeakable hidden crazy love for Ayan is very delicate and has a strong sense of pull. How could anyone write about kissing in such a gentle and ambiguous way? The supporting characters in the middle are also very interesting, and they sometimes laugh out loud. Gong's character is super touching, and Ayan is also a soft-hearted baby. Every time I see him trying to get points but failing because Gong loves him too much, he is so angry that I really want to post him [shy] I hope the author will make more updates! Come on, come on [blowing kiss]

After looking at the first five worlds, the first world is the most beautiful, the logic is the most comprehensive, and the ending is also very good, with a lot of bonus points. The world view of the elf is very good, and it is a very romantic science fiction love. However, like other worlds, the bad thing is that the score is low or even negative. I really feel sorry for the main character. Corner Baby, I personally feel uncomfortable in this regard, as if I have been forced to give a mission, but aside from this point, the protagonist's personality and system are all cute and cute, not too silly, the control of the speed is relatively accurate, the story design is also very good, the pace is medium, and the writing style is quite funny.

Super pretty! ! ! The writing is so delicate! I really like Yanyan! It's obviously very simple and cute, but it also exudes a warm atmosphere like lying on a quilt! ! ! I also really want to know if it was Gong who gave Yanyan melon seeds, or the one on the list

It's super beautiful, and the author's writing is guaranteed. Each one is a warm and healing story, the little gangster, the hypnotized little pitiful person, the summoned card, the little eunuch, the companion elf, and the newly opened Lady Chongxi. Every story is novel and not the same. , It is eye-catching. The hypnotized little pitiful person went back to the past and gave the hypnotist two melon seeds. The card destined to be abandoned is willing to share snacks with every card that lives by fighting. The setting of the male protagonist makes people remember points and has its own logical main line. Come on, cute Xiao Song! 60 Points are waiting for you hahahahahahaha

It's good to read. I've read a lot of fast-paced books and usually pay attention to the sub-titles. In fact, the title setting of many worlds in this book doesn't really attract me. But as soon as I read the beginning, I will be attracted by the ups and downs of the plot. Then there are worlds one after another, and the small worlds have interconnected world views. Many people said that the first world was relatively new to me, but I didn't pay much attention to it when I watched it and thought it was okay. The author of the subsequent plots is also getting better and better, and it attracts me more and more. The end of the last world is still a bit unfinished, and I still like fast-paced (small world) novels. However, I feel that the author was a bit lacking in expressing Shou's feelings in the early stage. It was said to be 1V1, but in the early stage Shou seemed not to know that the male protagonist was the same person, and easily (ok, let's compare) accepted the intimate behavior of others (male protagonist). The first world was actually okay, and there was a process of falling in love, but it was normal Shou should be able to react in the second world, but it is still not described. It was only after a few worlds that Shou knew it (or it was hinted at). At the end, the previous story and reasons were supplemented, which is not very good for the early senses (for a double-clean party like me, including the kind of spiritual clean) In the past, I actually didn't like quick travel because it said 1V1. The actual female protagonist is a time travel guide for various men. Only from God's perspective (we) do we know that the male protagonists are all the same person. Saying a bit too much (extending too much) Anyway! Come on, author, the writing is very good, keep up the hard work, and look forward to the next one

First of all, the writing is very good. Secondly, I just became a career fan. The more points I earn, the fewer points I earn. I tolerated 1 to 0 points until I posted 10 points. I laughed. Damn it, I really laughed. After posting, I finally gave 10 points, but somehow I feel like I have been working hard for a month. In the end, this little bit is nothing.

The book is very nice. The author has a great brain. But I still want to say something. From what I've seen of the world so far, I really don't see the concept of love. Even saying I like it is a bit far-fetched. It feels like everyone in the world is telling me to wait for Shou to love him, but Shou just wants to do his job, and love cannot enter his eyes.

It's really good-looking. The character of the protagonist is really likable. He's such a well-behaved and optimistic baby. [Sending Hearts] Help is really cute and the plot is super interesting. It's a bit unexpected and good-looking. I like it! ! ! ! ! [Send heart][Send heart][Send heart][Send heart][Send heart]

Well, I don't like the previous one, but the small world of the card may be because we have seen it before, so I think it is quite novel. The writing is really good. I feel that the protagonist Shou is the kind of gentle big brother. It is very good. I hope the author can continue to work hard [Send heart][Send heart][Send heart]

The author Yitangtang skillfully constructs an imaginative fast-travel world. The protagonist Song Shaoyan has a distinct image, and his wisdom and courage are particularly important when facing various challenges. The design of each world is unique, which not only tests the protagonist's adaptability, but also shows his growth and changes. The sweet pet element in the novel adds a touch of warmth to the intense fast-travel mission, and the 1V1 setting ensures the focus and depth of the story. During the reading process, I was attracted by the wit and bravery of the protagonist, and at the same time I was amazed by the complex world built by the author.

I read the second novel a lot and found out that the third dimension of this novel is exactly the same as the novel I saw on dy in a tweet. Help, the last book is also the second dimension and I also read [blowing kiss][adoration] on dy.

The subject matter is novel and I haven't seen it often, especially the small world of cards, which is very interesting. Yan Yan's character is also described in a very cute way, and it's not enough! ! ! Update soon! ! ! ₍ᐢ..ᐢ₎ ༘♡

Nice! I watched the latest chapter from the first one in one go. I didn't watch the series at first and now I am silently waiting for the update [crying] Overall, the setting is quite novel, especially the third world, which I have never seen before. The plot moves at a moderate pace, neatly and neatly, without any lag, and the average of 30 chapters per world is really good [Adoration] [Adoration] So far, it's not too sadistic, and Cookie is very satisfied (❁´◡`❁)*✲ﾟ*

For someone who likes sweet writing, extreme control, and a preference for fast pace, this novel is really great! Most of the ink in each small world is devoted to the two protagonists, which makes me feel that there are only two of them in this world, and there is no need to consider other things such as vicious cannon fodder. Yanyan and his lover are very sweet, really sweet. Love is restraint, just love (dog attack?) Restrain yourself, and resolutely prevent your lover from being wronged or feeling bad. Overall, this is a very good novel. I love Yanyan, I love this novel, and I love the author so much! ! ! There is a saying, if the ending is unsatisfactory, then the process must be very exciting. In fact, when I saw the last two worlds, I felt that there was a little unclear explanation. What made me confused in the new chapters was that they suddenly went to a planet to farm? Is this the Chinese infrastructure? He has always known and believed that Yanyan would be with his lover and not be separated, but their previous story was only briefly explained? I feel like there are more details that I don't know yet, but overall the ending is good and the process is very exciting. I have discovered this novel from more than two hundred chapters to now reading the finale. I am grateful to the author for his great efforts, and I also like the description of the words. The charm in one picture is actually the charm behind it, haha.

It can be regarded as watching the author grow step by step. The previous books had a few flaws, just a few, but the overall plot was pretty good. This is my favorite. In fact, it was still a bit... Greasy at first (don't scold me, it's my own feeling), but it gradually developed and became more and more beautiful and spicy! And the world type is also very novel, okay? I really admire the author's great imagination. Whether it is the writing, plot, or characterization, it is slowly becoming fuller and must be praised. In addition, it would be better if the author could update 10 times a day.