Born with Legilimency, I Am a Magical Prodigy

Not bad, no obvious poisonous points The one who gave a high thumbs up in the book review probably made a negative review because he didn't read the plot carefully. The content of his review was a mistake (Has he read half of it?). The explanation in the article is quite clear, and it is probably logically self-consistent. Okay, let's talk about something else. First of all, the pace is quite fast. While other fans may still be buying books and wands, our protagonist has already graduated from the first grade 🤦, and the 100th chapter has reached the fourth grade. I don't know how long it will take to write. Fortunately, new settings have been added, so I should be able to write more. I hope the author can control it and not collapse. Then it's about me I regretted reading this book. I just accidentally discovered and opened it. I looked at the low score and tentatively looked at it. I thought it was okay and stayed up for a while. Then when I woke up today, I looked at the lower left corner (2132/2482) and hurriedly opened the table of contents. There were only about 30 chapters left. I was going crazy. I should have fattened it up 😢. I killed people in my previous life, but I will read new articles in this life [smile]. Finally, if you like to read ratings and reviews to decide whether to read a novel, then be sure not to believe them all, especially fan fiction. Because everyone has their own preferences, you will never think of how exaggerated people are. There are heroines, no heroines, Granger, Ron, Hufflepuff, Gryffindor, original characters, and other plots of blockbusters. These are all reasons for low scores. You always have to read it to know whether it suits your taste. Only your feet know whether the shoes are suitable [OK].

Although I only watched half of it, the main character's setting at the beginning was very good. I only watched half of it and couldn't stand it because there were too many plots about women and there were a few things I didn't understand. Let me share my opinion. First of all, based on my own point of view, I think Philo is confused. He came to this world and was born with Legilimency. Before he could find his own path, the emotional scenes were arranged for him. I felt awkward and a little disconnected. (This is my own point of view. I think it is more important to have your own way.) Secondly, I have only read it for one academic year. I didn't know later that Philo had basically no male friends except Neville. He seemed to be acquainted with other male classmates. Furthermore, Qiu Zhang's feelings above are really inexplicable! (I don't know if I missed it) You can tell that Hermione has a lot of roles, and you can tell that she is the heroine, but you can also feel that Philo is just a friend in the first year (this is what I feel). Also, isn't it inappropriate to have an emotional drama in the first school year? Finally, the previous settings of "Prophet" and "Map" did not show much effect in the first school year. They should be foreshadowing and will be introduced later. This is the first time I've written such a long review. Most of them are my own feelings when I read it, "I think". Since I have only finished the first year of reading, I am not critical of this book. It is more based on my personal feelings. The setting at the beginning really irritated me, but there is a female protagonist, but it's a pity that my protagonist has no cp 🤦 Come on, author, please give me the thumbs up!

I have read Chapter 13 and everything feels good, but is it too early to start a relationship? Then ask more, is it pure love? Or a harem stud?

The author's writing is very good. Among the second-generation fan novels he took me to read, it can be considered very good. The only thing that makes me feel a little bad is about the female protagonist. I can accept whoever the female protagonist is, but I hope it can be confirmed and the ambiguous plot can be reduced. Moreover, I prefer a single female protagonist [top post]

The best second Harry Potter movie I've ever seen Rather than simply preventing events, the author can create new plots And there is no clear female protagonist (multiple stocks are competing)

To be honest, I also really hope Luna is the heroine

The book is quite good, but the diary part makes the protagonist a bit arrogant, but as the protagonist grows up later on, that's no problem. But I want to know if this book is a harem or a single heroine? There is so much foreshadowing, not writing about the harem would be a poisonous point, and it would be a pity.

The character design is quite good, but the author may have written the plot of the diary and the plot of competing with Lockhart out of consideration for shaping the image of the protagonist. Personally, I would like to see the protagonist deal with some things in a more reasonable manner, and I personally feel that this is not something that can be simply explained by a young man's mentality. It depends on the author's subsequent shaping. Then about the heroine, based on my personal experience and preferences, I have a tendency to write it as a heroine, but in the end I said it is not a heroine... Wait and see, Qiu Zhang, Luna, write it to give readers the feeling of being a heroine... Read the author's comments, single or double... Either don't write in this aspect, or write it and don't throw it away, especially in online articles. Of course, if the author likes this kind of thing... Otherwise, the next time I write a female character, I still have to make the positioning clear. Come on

Brother, I regret it. I really regret it. I beg you to come back to life.

The book is quite good, but the story is a bit too bland. The male protagonist lacks initiative and feels like he is always being pushed by others. He seems to have no independent opinion. In addition, I personally prefer more female protagonists in terms of emotional lines, because there are currently many girls who have a crush on the male protagonist, but the male protagonist basically does not take the initiative to respond. I don't know when this wave swept the novel circle. It can only make readers think that the male protagonist is stupid or hanging on others. It feels very bad and one-sided. It's very uncomfortable. Finally, in terms of setting, it is obvious that the author wants to add some stronger settings to the male protagonist. However, as of now, adding too many plots that introduce the setting has deviated from the main line, and has always left a certain mystery, which makes people confused. Finally, this special setting is not unique to the male protagonist, so a lot of pen and ink must be spent to describe other people, which makes the main line more difficult to promote, and requires a high level to balance the strength of the male protagonist and other people. Generally speaking, the male protagonist is strong, but the development speed is very slow. The story is too bland, lacks conflict, and therefore lacks attraction. The more you watch, the more boring you will feel. Finally, I hope there will be more female leads, I want to see blood flowing like a bayou!!!!!