Hogwarts: Magical Song of the Heart

Not bad, no obvious poisonous points The one who gave a high thumbs up in the book review probably made a negative review because he didn't read the plot carefully. The content of his review was a mistake (Has he read half of it?). The explanation in the article is quite clear, and it is probably logically self-consistent. Okay, let's talk about something else. First of all, the pace is quite fast. While other fans may still be buying books and wands, our protagonist has already graduated from the first grade [face covering], and the 100th chapter has reached the fourth grade. I don't know how long it will take to write. Fortunately, new settings have been added, so I should be able to write more. I hope the author can control it and not collapse. Then it's about me I regretted reading this book. I just accidentally discovered and opened it. I looked at the low score and tentatively looked at it. I thought it was okay and stayed up for a while. Then when I woke up today, I looked at the lower left corner (2132/2482) and hurriedly opened the table of contents. There were only about 30 chapters left. I was going crazy. I should have fattened it up [cry]. I killed people in my previous life, but I will read new articles in this life [smile]. Finally, if you like to read ratings and reviews to decide whether to read a novel, then be sure not to believe them all, especially fan fiction. Because everyone has their own preferences, you will never think of how exaggerated people are. There are heroines, no heroines, Granger, Ron, Hufflepuff, Gryffindor, original characters, and other plots of blockbusters. These are all reasons for low scores. You always have to read it to know whether it suits your taste. Only your feet know whether the shoes are suitable [OK].

Although I only watched half of it, the main character's setting at the beginning was very good. I only watched half of it and couldn't stand it because there were too many plots about women and there were a few things I didn't understand. Let me share my opinion. First of all, based on my own point of view, I think Philo is confused. He came to this world and was born with Legilimency. Before he could find his own path, the emotional scenes were arranged for him. I felt awkward and a little disconnected. (This is my own point of view. I think it is more important to have your own way.) Secondly, I have only read it for one academic year. I didn't know later that Philo had basically no male friends except Neville. He seemed to be acquainted with other male classmates. Furthermore, Qiu Zhang's feelings above are really inexplicable! (I don't know if I missed it) You can tell that Hermione has a lot of roles, and you can tell that she is the heroine, but you can also feel that Philo is just a friend in the first year (this is what I feel). Also, isn't it inappropriate to have an emotional drama in the first school year? Finally, the previous settings of "Prophet" and "Map" did not show much effect in the first school year. They should be foreshadowing and will be introduced later. This is the first time I've written such a long review. Most of them are my own feelings when I read it, "I think". Since I have only finished the first year of reading, I am not critical of this book. It is more based on my personal feelings. The setting at the beginning really irritated me, but there is a female protagonist, but it's a pity that my protagonist has no cp [face covering] Come on, author, please give me the thumbs up!

I have read Chapter 13 and everything feels good, but is it too early to start a relationship? Then ask more, is it pure love? Or a harem stud?

The best second Harry Potter movie I've ever seen Rather than simply preventing events, the author can create new plots And there is no clear female protagonist (multiple stocks are competing)

The author's writing is very good. Among the second-generation fan novels he took me to read, it can be considered very good. The only thing that makes me feel a little bad is about the female protagonist. I can accept whoever the female protagonist is, but I hope it can be confirmed and the ambiguous plot can be reduced. Moreover, I prefer a single female protagonist [top post]

To be honest, I also really hope Luna is the heroine

The book is quite good, but the diary part makes the protagonist a bit arrogant, but as the protagonist grows up later on, that's no problem. But I want to know if this book is a harem or a single heroine? There is so much foreshadowing, not writing about the harem would be a poisonous point, and it would be a pity.

The character design is quite good, but the author may have written the plot of the diary and the plot of competing with Lockhart out of consideration for shaping the image of the protagonist. Personally, I would like to see the protagonist deal with some things in a more reasonable manner, and I personally feel that this is not something that can be simply explained by a young man's mentality. It depends on the author's subsequent shaping. Then about the heroine, based on my personal experience and preferences, I have a tendency to write it as a heroine, but in the end I said it is not a heroine... Wait and see, Qiu Zhang, Luna, write it to give readers the feeling of being a heroine... Read the author's comments, single or double... Either don't write in this aspect, or write it and don't throw it away, especially in online articles. Of course, if the author likes this kind of thing... Otherwise, the next time I write a female character, I still have to make the positioning clear. Come on

Brother, I regret it. I really regret it. I beg you to come back to life.

Gaga looks good, keep updating, I think Zhang Qiu is good as the heroine

It looks fine so far, it looks pretty good. But there is one thing that needs to be corrected, that is, the Northern Long-tailed Tit has been eliminated from the Silver-throated Long-tailed Tit subspecies and become independent. I hope the author can correct it [smile]

When I first read the synopsis and book reviews, I was actually not very optimistic about it, because I personally dislike stock buying articles. Not many people wrote good ones, so I continued reading because the heroine was Hermione, hahaha. However, when I read about twenty chapters on another mobile phone that was not logged in, I decided to change my mobile phone to leave a review. Hehe, I gave it five stars because I really like the scene where Neville and the protagonist are in the hospital. I hope that Neville's parents will get better later. I'm waiting to see the rest of the plot, please update it soon, please [crying] I'm waiting for a lot of pitfalls to be filled in, I quite like these settings. Come on, come on

The book is quite good, but the story is a bit too bland. The male protagonist lacks initiative and feels like he is always being pushed by others. He seems to have no independent opinion. In addition, I personally prefer more female protagonists in terms of emotional lines, because there are currently many girls who have a crush on the male protagonist, but the male protagonist basically does not take the initiative to respond. I don't know when this wave swept the novel circle. It can only make readers think that the male protagonist is stupid or hanging on others. It feels very bad and one-sided. It's very uncomfortable. Finally, in terms of setting, it is obvious that the author wants to add some stronger settings to the male protagonist. However, as of now, adding too many plots that introduce the setting has deviated from the main line, and has always left a certain mystery, which makes people confused. Finally, this special setting is not unique to the male protagonist, so a lot of pen and ink must be spent to describe other people, which makes the main line more difficult to promote, and requires a high level to balance the strength of the male protagonist and other people. Generally speaking, the male protagonist is strong, but the development speed is very slow. The story is too bland, lacks conflict, and therefore lacks attraction. The more you watch, the more boring you will feel. Finally, I hope there will be more female leads, I want to see blood flowing like a bayou! ! ! ! !

Keep up the good work, author. Except for some very small problems, everything else is very good. The update speed is slow. Please wait and see again. The story is intermittent and I can't understand it. The thing you may need to pay attention to is the error in the timeline. The author is very good. Come on, come on (ง•̀_•́)ง July 19, 2025 10.02 Am

This book is quite interesting, I just hope it has a single female protagonist, the female protagonist is wise and can make progress together with the male protagonist [I learned it] [I learned it]

It's pretty good. I wrote something of my own, not a simple reworking of the original work.

The reading so far feels good, but there is a sentence in the article "from God's perspective" but the article does not explain whether the protagonist is a time traveler who knows the plot or knows the future because of a flash of prophecy. Because the first chapter directly states that the protagonist starts to choose a wand, and it does not explain whether the protagonist is a time traveler or a simple "aboriginal person". I hope the author can fill in a Chapter 0 or Prologue before the first chapter to explain the identity, background and interpersonal relationships of the protagonist in the Muggle world, so as to have a better reading experience. Chapter 28 directly states that the protagonist directly obtained Voldemort's Horcrux diary, without explaining how the protagonist obtained it. It has a strong sense of separation @Gui Fengtong

The writing is so good, brothers, I am a poet who holds

Looks good, come on, madam

It's very beautiful, but I don't know why the score is so low?

Although the rating is lower now, this book is not as bad as others say, it just has a few minor issues. I hope the author sticks to it and the rating will go up.

The plot is good, but it's a pity that maybe it's because I've read too many books about the heroine Hermione. I personally feel that Luna in this book is more suitable for the heroine's identity.

It's good-looking, the protagonist's setting is likable, the outlook on life is very upright, and there's no babysitting. Although it's a bit confusing at times, the writing makes up for everything. I love watching it, come on!

Five-star review, highly recommended. I've been feeling like I can't stand any book lately. After turning a few pages, I quit and change to another one. Only this book, I've been reading until now, and I haven't changed to other novels. Come on, don't stop reading.

Regardless of those book reviews, my personal opinion is that it is good to read. Good luck to the author.

I don't know why the score is so low. I personally think this is a good hp fic in Tomato.

When I saw that I was shortlisted for the contribution list, I remembered that I hadn't rated it yet. It's a super good hp fan, check it out! Ps. My friend is now number one in the contribution list. Can you please give me an extra update? Author Sang

Among the Harry Potter books I have read so far, they are very good, suitable for those who don't like the system, and the pace is slightly faster.

Very well written, come on ma'am👏

Come on, come on, come on