Black Myth: Wukong: The Sage Emperor's Tale of Merit

This is the first Black Wukong fanfic that is quite good. It has both merits and demerits. Since this is the first review, I will also talk about the good and bad, as well as some of my suggestions. The first is the emotional experience between the protagonist and the fourth sister. It is not abrupt but it is too fast. Sharing adversity is not so fast. During the fight, the fourth sister and the protagonist met less than 5 times in total. Experiencing together will only deepen the relationship but not skip the relationship. Of course, these words of mine are based on the theory that I can stand up and talk without pain. I mean, writing such details will be a bonus, at least for me. Secondly, I feel like it's time to give the protagonist a name. I don't know whether the author chose the name because of the abandonment or for other reasons. The name Wuming, which is not a name, seems rather awkward to me. The third is the treatment of the protagonist in the Hexianren section that I consider to be a "poisonous point". I was helplessly thrown to the next map, which was a bit deliberate. When I was halfway through reading it, I thought it was a "road" novel, where the fourth sister and the protagonist were traveling while solving incidents. In-game events such as Black Wind Mountain and Huangfengling, and outside games such as Heavenly Court and Dragon Palace, there were many places and events that could be written about. The emotional development of the fourth sister and the protagonist was also more logical, and it was easier for the author to lay out foreshadowing. This kind of subject matter was quite good to me. Of course, the author's writing is pretty good, but there are a few minor issues with the details. Although I can't say it's innocuous, what I can say is that the flaws do not outweigh the flaws. I hope more consideration will be given to the emotional aspects of the characters. Sometimes, more direct emotional expressions do not fit the current character.

Although the preliminary preparations are long, the characters are all portrayed, with thousands of faces. Once I become a disciple of Patriarch Bodhi, everything will be fine. I look forward to the day when I become the Emperor of Humanity, conquer the heavens, and fly together with my fourth sister!

"Black Myth Wukong: I Turned Back for the Fourth Sister" is a fascinating work that makes you unable to put it down with its unique perspective and gripping plot. In the book, the author uses delicate brushstrokes to describe the deep friendship between Wukong and his fourth sister, as well as his courage and determination to fight against the heavens in order to save his fourth sister. Wukong's rebellion is not only a challenge to authority, but also an insistence on family affection and justice. The book is full of suspense plots and rich characterizations, allowing readers to not only feel the charm of the story, but also understand the inner struggle and growth of the characters.

Fourth sister, my fourth sister 🥺 🥺 why can't I go to heaven 😢 😢 Every time I play emo, my fourth sister [crys] [crys] The author helped me destroy Lingshan Heavenly Court.

It's really good to read. The author has also delved into the content of the game and mythology. Although there are some descriptions of combat power and inconsistencies in a broad sense, it just breaks out of the cliché of killing monsters and upgrading. The content is tight and tight, and the writing is smooth. It is really an unexpected surprise. The only uncomfortable thing is can the update be faster????

Ordinary people will really be disappointed when traveling to the West

Come on, author, it looks good so far. I hope it will be on the home page soon.

To be honest, the first few pictures were very uncomfortable and not very good. But after all, this is the first fanfic about the fourth sister. I can only say that the author, please work hard and write. I hope it will get better and better in the future [Thoughts]

I have an idea. A time traveler obtains the God List and establishes the True Heaven in the world of Black Myth Wukong. The True Heaven does not rely on the spiritual essence of all things, but relies on the aura of heaven and earth, various skills, various magic weapons, and various spiritual treasures of heaven and earth. It can be given templates, of course provided by the system, and then fights monsters and upgrades all the way to establish the True Heaven, collides with the Black Myth Wukong Heaven, and finally ascends to the great unification, organizes the human world, regains control of the three realms, and finally brings this sick world back on track.

The subject matter is good, but it was too depressing at the beginning, and it seems much better after I regain my memory. I hope the writing will get better and better in the future!