Attack the Demon Lord? Junior Sister Fucked Bai Yueguang Directly!

Sisters, the author just doesn't have time to write now [I'm about to cry] If the rating is much lower, I may abandon the article. I can just skip it without reading the short story. If you don't want to wait, you can just stop reading [crying] It feels really uncomfortable to read an article you like but can't eat it.

Overall, it is a very good book on Tomato. It's very interesting, it feels very relaxing to read, and the adventure of the group is also very interesting. But the narrative pace is too fast, and each small unit feels not very long. In fact, the characters in each story are well-shaped, but they should be described in more detail. You can write fewer small units, lengthen each story line, and add more reversals and foreshadowing. In this way, it feels more delicate when reading, instead of feeling like it stops suddenly while reading. Ah, of course, this is just my own opinion. The author can write whatever he wants, and don't get into internal friction because of these few words of mine——

It feels like it's not an ordinary routine, it just pokes me [laughs] The point of laughter, especially the jokes that pop up when there is nothing to do [laughs and cries] It's a bit like a group. Although the male protagonist said that he didn't believe the female protagonist because of the dirty things that the original protagonist did, but he didn't quietly fall into it later. The female protagonist is very interesting and a modern young man [Thinking] Then the changes in the female protagonist, many people's perception of her has changed. She is super interesting. I look forward to the subsequent plot [Sending Hearts]

Nice! The author should stop updating, please! This book is really, really beautiful [love] [love] [love] [love] [love] [love] [love] [love] [love] [love] [love] [love] [love] [love] [love] [love] [love] [love] [love] [love] [love] [love] [love] [love] [love] [love] [love] [love] [love] [love] [love] [love] [love] [love] [love] [love] [love] ][loving][loving][loving][loving][loving][loving][loving][loving][loving][loving][loving][loving][loving][loving][loving][loving][loving][loving][loving][loving][loving][loving][loving][loving][loving][loving][loving][loving][loving][loving][loving][loving][loving]

(Must be expanded) Maya is so beautiful that I can't lie. The introduction of the first book that suits my taste drew me in, and I couldn't stop reading it. Yu Tang is lively and a little bit poisonous, but also very cute. Xie Zhihui is innocent and shy (can't stand Yu Tang's teasing). After that, I just want to say: "You kid, don't be too loving" [laughing] The content is interesting and the writing is very good. Many short stories also attracted me. And the love, family, and friendship in it are killing me, some of them are almost crying [crying]. Overall, it is very very very very very very very very very very very very very very very very very very very very very very very very very very very very very very very very very very very very very very very very very very very very very very very very very very very very very very very very very very very very very very very very very very very very very very very very very... (10,000 Words omitted here) It's beautiful and I love it very much. I also highly recommend everyone to watch it. It's amazing. Also, can the author update five times a day [awkward laugh] [cry] I really want to read it. I'm so anxious that I'm going to die [cry][cry][cry]

Really good-looking! ! ! Why is the rating so low? Author, please don't abandon your article! ! Every character is very vivid! ! Love it! ! ! Love it to death, love it to death! ! ! It would be great if I could update it more every day. Woohoo. It's really beautiful! ! Don't give up! ! ! I will go everywhere to read your books! ! Never give up

Despite its low rating, it's super beautiful. The emotional line is not sloppy and neat, and the male protagonist's favorability is very easy to increase, and he is very generous. Every sub-CP is very exciting, but it is not finished. I plan to save up and watch it again. Come on, the author, don't give up on the article. [Adoration][Adoration][Admiration]

I was attracted to this genre after reading the introduction, and it seems to be okay so far. What I wrote above is mainly about the CP plot of two passers-by. The content and plot are quite good, but I definitely prefer to watch the plot of the protagonist. I look forward to the heroine's death escape later, which makes the male protagonist wait for a long time🌚

Come on, author, I love what you wrote so much. The writing style is very humorous. I hope you can stick to it and don't stop updating [crying] I will always be your fan!

It's good to watch, the plot is novel and not cliche, the male and female protagonists have their mouths, the only drawback is that there are too few updates

It's good-looking, although it hasn't been updated yet, but it's really good-looking. Every character created is very three-dimensional, that is, everyone has flesh and blood, Huang Yingshi and Xiaolong, the magistrate and his wife, Taoyao, Chen Xu and his sister... You can still read the turbulent emotions between them, family affection, love, friendship... The concept is also very good. All in all, it's very good. The senior brother is gradually becoming more cheerful, and Xiao Xie is also slowly opening up his heart. He doesn't want the five-person team to be separated. They are all doing well [like][like][like][like]

I really hope the author can update 100 chapters in one night, I really like it, I like it [KISS] [Sending my heart]

Ahhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhinging lookingating an update.

I personally think it's pretty good-looking, I hope it won't end badly in the later stages [shy][almost crying]

I accidentally tied it. It's great. Every short story I've read so far has a pair of CPs. They're all very interesting. I also like the male and female protagonists. The heroine's personality is very interesting. She'll do it when it's time to do it. She's a veteran who takes advantage [laughs]

The story line is quite complete, the writing style is silly but not mentally retarded, and the emotional transition is relatively natural. Unlike other fast-traveling novels that randomly add favorability points in pursuit of rhythm, there are not many updated chapters at the moment, so check them out! !

Please, teacher, I can't see enough [crying][crying][crying][crying][crying][crying][crying][crying] Please update it quickly [crying][crying][crying]

Super pretty! Although the score is only 7.5, The plot is very interesting (and interesting)! ! ! Especially the scene where the protagonists are bickering is really realistic! Our male protagonist is a stupid beauty who takes care of herself! ! ! Early stage: Fighting against my wife Later stage: Everything my wife said is right

Author, please don't give up on this book. This introduction really attracts me. I really want to read it. The last chapter is to be seen in the future. Is the author sure that we will see you in the future [crying]

It's a fairy tale. In fact, I was short of books and only read those short articles on Kuaishou. After all, they are really capable. Until I read this book, my long-dormant heart revived again. It is really good to read. Many people are not as uncomfortable as some of the readers. They all have distinct characters. I really feel that many people are very good. The relationship between them feels like what I want to see, sincerity, friendship, happiness, and joy. I have to admit that when I lose interest in novels, Tomato will suddenly flash a spark, but I still believe in Tomato. A single spark can start a prairie fire. Looking forward to seeing masterpieces here again [Blowing Kisses]

Ahhhhhhhhh it's so beautiful, it feels like a small group portrait, even a bit like a family

It feels pretty good! The article is very informative and interesting to watch. The heroine's quarrel with the system is really festive and funny. The pace of the writing is also moderate. Each character has a distinct personality and there are also foreshadowings. I like it 🥰, and the author will give it a thumbs up for more updates!

Author, your writing is really good. Fast, faster, faster, faster, faster, faster, faster, more. Don't force me to kneel down. Please really read it. Come on, the protagonist is also very cute and clever, and the author is great. Why are you so stubborn? How can there be such a stubborn person? [Face covering][Face covering][Face covering]

After watching it for so long, there are only four words in my mind: Too! Good! Look! Got it! Everyone can be the protagonist, and many of the short stories are very touching. The author really writes them very well!

Good-looking, good-looking, good-looking!

A very funny book. Recommended

Is it really not updated yet? I almost forgot about the plot [laughs] (It's a miserable life)

It's super vivid, who knows? The personality and image of each character are super full. It's so special, so appetizing. I love it so much [adoration] [blowing kiss] [blowing kiss]

It looks good. You must kiss him [blowing kiss][laughing]

It's worth watching. I got hooked on it in the first three chapters. I was already hooked on this sadomasochism, but after getting hooked on it, I realized that it was not the case. The heroine has a good personality and the small group portrait is beautiful.