After Rebirth, I Became a Swimming Legend

It's such a rare novel about swimming competition with a female protagonist. It's rare to see it, so the author said it has a cp, so I put up with it for the time being. However, I hope that the competitive part will account for a larger proportion. I was completely attracted by this (of course this is just a personal wish. The author can write whatever he wants.

It's a good book. Lin Xi's parents, brother, Xiaoyu system's swimming coach, and real-life coaches are all good. Grandparents, grandparents, uncles/aunts, cousins, aunts/uncles, classmates/teammates are all good. They are all lovely and friendly people. They don't like to scheme against each other, are scheming, do not hesitate to cut off hands, and have dark and twisted psychology. People who are scumbags should not retreat.

At the beginning, it was like a composition, the writing was a bit stiff and the reading was a bit strange. It's not that it doesn't look good, but this writing method is not suitable for writing novels. But now the writing is getting better and better, and the character image of Lin Xi is more complete and vivid. Finally, come on, I wish you better and better [blowing kiss]

It's a harmonious and happy family of four, which is pretty good. I have a younger brother myself, and we have a very good relationship. We grew up with each other, so I don't think there's anything wrong with having a younger brother. Just write according to your own wishes and don't pay attention to some Internet trolls. Come on!

Although your article is not decorated with gorgeous language, it impresses readers with its plain and true feelings. The sentences are smooth and coherent. The psychological portrayal and detailed description are very successful, giving people a sense of aftertaste! From a literary point of view, the material selection is very novel, the angle is clearly visible, the language is plain yet elegant, concise yet full of meaning, it can be called a model article! This plain article shows extraordinary literary skills. It can be said that every word is a masterpiece and every sentence is a classic. It has reached a height that is elusive for us. From an artistic point of view, this article still needs to be improved, but its significance is far greater than the success itself. Also, the use of punctuation marks is even more appropriate. After reading your article word for word, my heart can't calm down for a long time! How could there be such a penetrating article in this world? I couldn't believe my eyes. You made me deeply understand the saying "There are people outside the world, and there is a sky outside the world". After reading the article, I asked again: Can I add another chapter?

The writing is very serious. At least it has an attitude, but it doesn't quite fit the novel. It's a bit like writing an essay, but it has a different flavor.

It's okay, but it's not finished yet.

The subject matter is novel and the writing is interesting. Five-star praise.

It's good to read, but the author is a bit slow in updating. Can he update two chapters a day? [Adoration][Adoration][Adoration]

It is recommended that you cheat to cultivate immortality and explore the universe in the later stage, but don't be so anxious.

Good-looking, good-looking, good-looking

The writing is average, but the subject is about swimming, which is rarer than giant pandas. Is the author interested in building a readership?

Extremely powerful, come on, author!

Super, super good-looking, highly recommended, highly recommended

The subject matter is quite novel, but it doesn't feel like reading a novel. I don't have a sense of immersion. I can tell that it hasn't been long since I wrote the article, so keep up the good work.