Naruto Develops Lin from Six Eyes at the Beginning

Beautiful, really redeeming. It was Ye Cang's death that made me a bit agitated as I just watched a novel with Ye Cang as the heroine... But I still like what the author wrote. The author's explanations of some techniques are also very reasonable. Anyway, it looks good

How can I put it, the rating is low but it looks good. Disadvantages: I think the reason for the low rating is that it doesn't feel exciting enough. There are no troughs, only crushing. There is a system but basically no one. The plot has no sense of the follow-up direction... And there is a sense of relaxation. Pros: The characters fit the plot very well and there is no OOC at all. The author knows where the pain points of Naruto fans are, and completely makes up for the plot's regrets (except for one damn person). The writing is good, it seems effortless at all, and the author will remind you of the key points of the plot without having to think too much about it.

Surprisingly, it's okay. The protagonist is well portrayed, the plot line is very smooth, and there's nothing too abrupt. I think the original characters are quite good, especially the description of the protagonist as a time traveler, which I think is pretty good. The difference between this book and other books for me is that the overall plot is very smooth, and there is a feeling that he is alive, which is a bit hard to describe. It is that this book has a different flavor when I read it. It gives me a feeling that I want to continue reading. I can't describe it. It is considered a high-quality fan fiction in Tomato. It's okay. It's a bit boring later, but I can accept it.

The author's writing style is very good. It can be seen that the author is a complete fan of Naruto. He is very familiar with the plots of Naruto and Boruto. With his own understanding and consideration, all the plots, even under the aura of cool writing, are written smoothly and smoothly without any abruptness. He must have put a lot of effort into studying the plot and characters. I'm a good boy. There are hundreds or thousands of episodes. Just thinking about it makes my scalp numb. It's amazing. Friends who like Naruto fan fiction can definitely read it, it is very cool, it is not ambiguous at all, there is no pressure at all, it is quite immersive, the tail is too cute, the positive side of the fan fiction is relaxed and pleasant to friends, it looks very comfortable. [I'm about to cry][I'm about to cry][I'm about to cry] The overall rhythm is controlled very well, and every aspect deserves five-star praise.

Yes, this book is seriously underestimated. I can't say it has no shortcomings, but they can be ignored. As for the advantages, well... The writing is good, the plot is also okay, and there are also things about ninjutsu and fighting. I also enjoyed reading it. I personally think The biggest advantage is that this book is written with a strong Naruto feel. Nowadays, many authors write Naruto fan fiction, and it feels like they are all wearing the skin of Naruto. In fact, it is in a fantasy style, with a thick pretense of slap-in-the-face routines. Most of them are unreadable. In short, I give this book a thumbs up.

Overall, it's pretty good. For me personally, I don't care whether it has a single female protagonist or not. Moreover, there is no situation where the protagonist's combat power is suppressed, and the protagonist's character is also easy to accept.

Chapter 58: Killing through the Hidden Sand Village, sent directly to Luo Sha and Ye Cang. I would like to call him the fastest legend in the ninja world.

I've read 6 chapters and 70 chapters so far. I can give this book a 4.5⭐. I haven't seen the kind of plot that makes my scalp numb. It's just that my strength has grown too fast. Invincible. The other thing may be that the emotional line is weird. I don't know if the author is a woman. The writing is a bit too feminine, but it's pretty good.

No poisonous points, no conspiracy theories, just the invincible life of Mr. Yue. Generally speaking, it is relatively dull. After all, they are invincible. The descriptions of daily life and battles are okay, and there are many outstanding points. All in all, definitely worth a look! It's a pity that the author can't write a side story, I also want to watch the daily life

Excellent book, especially one that does not hide its strength and always has a trump card. If you have any questions, just ask instead of just saying "Maybe it's an illusion" and let it pass. Then something unexpected happens. Hold on and read this book. The battle scenes and abilities are very good, but don't drag on about emotional issues. The longer you don't talk about it, the greater the damage will be. In a world where great power is concentrated in one body, emotions are not easy to drag on. Isn't it a good idea to confess? And don't forget Tsunade, don't say anything about Jiraiya. He hates Jiraiya. He is disgusted just by being a voyeur. Not to mention that if the daughter is more vicious and the relationship is more decisive, the rating will go up.

The skills of the protagonist are very good, and the memories of my childhood are intertwined with the current memories. I didn't expect it to be like the sanctity of Seer Hopponi. At first, I didn't realize that it was the one from 4399. I hope the author can write better and better, and I also hope that he can add sealing skills like [Jealousy] in Spider-Man and [Gluttony King] in Reincarnated Slime in the next skills, because I also like both of them.

What kind of fairy life is this? There are cats, a house, gentle green plums, arrogant neighbors, and you will die without regrets. Another ps: the writing is good, the plot has a happy ending, and the time traveler has the ability to change the plot.

It's 327. I realized that I haven't written a comment yet. I only watched it intermittently when I saw 250. I don't remember it very well. The poisonous point is the ruthless cheating in the early stage. The jounin level chakra can fire two spiral shurikens and the damage is 2 kilometers, which is a bit outrageous. Also It's the original heroine Liuli. It's hard to say. I quite like her. Other comments say no. I think the only problem is that the time we get together is a bit short. Looking directly at the back will make us more harmonious. The advantage is that the cheating is very fun. Except for Madara, there is basically nothing wrong with her. I didn't expect to be able to finish it. The update was obviously unstable after more than 200 chapters, but I was able to finish it at 690. The author is still very perseverant. All in all, the whole story is quite enjoyable. Except for the end, I was basically not disappointed. After reading it, of course I said it was good. I recommend it.

Perfect, I held it back before I saw Loulan in one breath. It can be said that there is no poison at all. The only thing that is possible is the title of the previous book? I was also attracted by the title of the current book, and after reading it for a while, I realized that I might have bought it before, but I didn't read it because of the title. 1. The author knows how to cheat. After all, there is no need to suppress everything after opening the book. This book is very good, so feel free to open it and read it boldly. It will be fun if the protagonist is not embarrassed. 2. There are no disgusting conspiracy theories, and the protagonist is sitting upright, killing enemy ninjas at the right speed, and not looking forward and backward. It is the best written among all the three-game war stories I have read so far.

It's an okay read. It doesn't write any conspiracy theories about Konoha. The plot is quite rich. I haven't watched Naruto that much, but I've read a lot of fan fiction. In addition, there are edited plots on the Internet, so I only know some of the plot. I only watched Sasuke's defection in Chasing Naruto. Among the Naruto fanfics I have read, this book is pretty good. The plug-ins are creative, but the ending is far-fetched, but at least it is over. There is not much description of the emotional line. The story is very fast. It is finished before Naruto grows up. I didn't mention which two. I am quite curious. It's a pretty good Naruto fanfic, worth reading.

This book was so enjoyable to read, but it didn't even get a 9 rating. Although it looked a little like the previous books, this was what I wanted to read. [Praise]

The part about the death of Fenfu is very well written and has a lot of feeling. I can say that the author has something to say about the various plots that will be expanded later. However, I think the plots written later are okay, but not exciting enough. I also want to see the collision between the protagonist and the characters in the original plot. I can arrange for the protagonist to travel through the original novel.

It's pretty good, and the character of each ninja is restored quite well. There's a little bug in the timeline, but it's nothing serious. It's just too much fighting scenes. It is recommended that the author update some daily ones, and the whole article is covered.

As a villager, I can tell you that this book is good-looking. Brother [face covering] [OK], who said this book is not good-looking? This book is so beautiful. [Praise]

This Naruto novel is very interesting. Overall, it is an invincible novel with a relaxed style. Basically, when entering the war, it is almost invincible. The author does not stress about combat power and kills when necessary. There is no ink, and unimportant things are simply mentioned. The emotional scenes are also okay. Lin's emotional line is average, just like childhood sweetheart template (not annoying). Liuli's emotional line is well written, with ups and downs, and details. I like it very much (not a single woman, nor a harem). The author has his own innovations in the plot that do not follow the original work. The setting of Otsutsuki is also very reasonable and self-consistent. The writing style is relaxed and good at making jokes (the author is complex). The description of the battle is okay. It has been six chapters so far. It is very exciting and I look forward to it [Blow kiss]

The previous part of the plot is a bit deliberate and looks a bit bad, but it's still reasonable. Overall, it's very good-looking, and it's my favorite type. The more you go to the back, the better it gets, and the plot arrangement becomes smoother and smoother. The straight-shooting aspect is well received.

The rating of this book should be around 9 points. There are basically no major problems in the plot content, the writing is not bad, and the protagonist's plug-in setting has also been resolved. An ordinary person in this world was hit by a meteorite into the two-dimensional world, and his own personality became the source of power.

After watching it for a long time, I finally finished it. Personally, I think it's good. The advantage is that it is refreshing, and the plot has always been relatively compact, and there is not much daily life. Personally, I prefer novels with more plots, but I don't like to read them in daily life. So overall I feel relatively comfortable. I personally have never read Boruto, so I am surprised that the author can handle the follow-up so well. I don't know what settings are the same as those in Boruto. Looking at the ending of Shippuden, I think the subsequent plot settings are very reasonable. And it's the first time I've seen a Naruto fan who has made so many changes based on the original work, but the changes are really nice. The direction of dimensionality expansion at the end is indeed a good ending, an idea that I have never thought of. The shortcomings, if I have to say it, are the emotional lines. No matter how you look at them, the emotional lines are rather blunt. At first, the contact with Lin when I was a child was a little better, but later on, Liuli always felt very stiff, and Lin's scenes were almost gone. I feel like the whole novel might be better if it didn't contain any emotional lines. But I will be able to watch it. Pretty good, hehe

I have read 6 chapters so far, and they are well written, with plain narratives, many detailed descriptions, and not so gorgeous words. It is a bit similar to the writing style of "Soft Rice, Hard Eating", and you can gain insights in the plainness. As long as the subsequent battle scenes don't collapse, this book deserves a rating of 9.5 Or above. Come on, author, this beginning has already surpassed many good 9.0 Books.

It's so good to read, the article is very organized, the description of the fight is very good, very enjoyable, but the only shortcoming is that my Tuzi brother's eye opening is a bit outrageous, but it's not harmful, and I just want to see the Ludou show up as soon as possible, so cheers for the author! ! !

This book is really good to read. The protagonist is not like a man-machine and a virgin. There are also two heroines. Although the emotional writing is average, the golden finger and the plot are very reasonable and logical. Apart from the shortcoming of updating one chapter in one day, it is really good to read.

It looks pretty good. I don't want to follow other Naruto fanfics I followed at the same time. [Shy] I give the author a thumbs up. It's just that the combat power is a bit difficult to control later on. Although there are still occasional fighting scenes, the protagonist's current strength can be said to be endurance. He is the strongest in the world, but his reputation is not as good as that of Hashirama, the god of ninja world. I hope the author can control it well. Also, if the protagonist's personality is compared with his strength, there is a big sense of gap, which is more or less uncomfortable, including the handling of the two female protagonists. I don't know how the author will write it. If the writing is not good, it will be a big poison. Only the two female protagonists, the Minotaur, will not like it (you will not accept the daughter of Thousand Sons), and the Pure Love God of War will not like it (you can't control Lin's tears!). Both sides are not very comfortable to watch. I don't know what kind of people the author wants to attract [awkward laugh] Overall, I think the evaluation is very fair. Cheers to the author [Like]

The writing is very good, the description of the battle is very detailed, the characters are full of personality, the description of the process is excellent, and the protagonist has strong abilities but no conflict. In line with the setting of Naruto's original work.

I usually only read negative reviews and almost missed it. The whole article is surprisingly good, even if it is toxic, it is minor and can be ignored. It's just that Uchiha Ruri is not the protagonist, but just a native. Without the help of plug-ins and the protagonist, this eternal mark kaleidoscope opens a bit unexpectedly. The whole thing is very smooth, and it is considered a masterpiece with a score of 9 or above.

After finishing the game, I felt quite mixed. In fact, I originally wanted to give it four stars because I really didn't like the two female protagonists. There were a lot of plots that made me scratch my head in the middle. But when I saw that Naruto got second place in the final assessment, Karin was also divided into a group, and Minato and Kushina went on a trip together, after thinking about it, I decided to give it five stars. This is what I mean when I read a fan.