Mortal Cultivation: Starting from Treasure Hunting

If you write your own book, support it yourself!

For a 12-year old bookworm, this work is already great. I like mortals to become immortals. The main character is not a virgin, and the killing is decisive. The plot is smooth and natural. Come on, the author, don't finish it. [Salute]

The writing is indeed good, and the plot is also very accurate, but why is there a single female protagonist? How good are two female protagonists? Isn't that Miss Jiang from Danding Pavilion and Miss Yu, the young protagonist of Danding Pavilion, not good? Tao Han is invincible, why is the protagonist not dead yet? It stands to reason that you, the author, have no priority. Tao Han is so defiant, how is it possible? How could a newly-made golden elixir be defeated by that real person? Now in order to add an enemy to the protagonist, Tao Han is forcibly written to be invincible. This is a big failure, and basically this novel is almost scrapped. Originally, this novel had some poisonous points before Tao Han was written, but they were all small ones. Suddenly, a super poisonous point appeared, and the novel was also scrapped. Hey

Be calm and rational, this is the real cultivation of immortality, not playing with women every day

It seems okay now, keep working hard💪, come on [I learned it] This book is really well written. I saw a lot of people talking about the protagonist having an affair with the female supporting character, so I thought about it and asked. Just look at it and say a few words to call it ambiguous. So does touching it twice mean that the protagonist is having an affair with someone else? It's really funny, and the reasons why some people gave negative reviews really opened my eyes. If I really have nothing to do, I'll go find a class.

The writing is very good, and it is more realistic. Normal books would be unreadable after just a few chapters. You successfully made me finish reading them.

Very goodദ്ദി(˵ •̀ ᴗ - ˵ ) ✧The plot is tight and the logic is clear

It's pretty good. Every novel must have shortcomings, but this novel has its flaws, and there are many merits. It's quite normal for a cultivator to not say that he is invincible for no reason. There is a process, and it is a novel worth reading.

Come on, the plot is very good, it made me see a person's constant struggle, come on😊

There are some flaws in the front, but it becomes more and more exciting as you read later. I hope it won't end badly in the future.

It's very realistic, very beautiful, and the quality is really good. There may be some small flaws in the early stage, but the problems are not major. The plot is reasonable and full of ups and downs.

It's really great. There are too few novels about mortals cultivating immortals like this, or there are too few that can calm down and read them.

It is recommended that the protagonist releases his nature and accepts more ambiguities from women. It doesn't matter. Anyway, if there is danger, he just runs away. Don't give up the free ones.

I feel that the protagonist is flesh and blood, decisive in killing, and clear in love and hate.

It looks pretty and has very few poisonous spots. You can use it with confidence.

There is still room for improvement in the writing and plot. I hope the author will continue to work hard and become a new generation of online writing masters.

A very good mortal novel, please give me a five-star review to encourage it (՞ਊ՞)👍👍👍

Awesome, this is my type, keep it up

There are new ideas and good writing, keep up the good work!

It's well written, and the protagonist is very fulfilling. I hope I won't turn back into the good old guy from the early days, and I must stay dark-hearted and ruthless! ! !

The time setting is quite pleasing, and the continuity seems to be good so far. I look forward to its performance in the future.

Good, good, good

The plot is okay and the pace is tight.

It's really good, I feel a bit emotional.

The protagonist's personality suits me

It's beautiful, why is it rated so low?

It's okay, I'll look at it later

Good, good, following it

Not bad, very nice [like][like][like]

Looks good After reading dozens of chapters, the protagonist still looks like a pussy because he is not decisive in killing. Two of them are caused by the lack of decisiveness in the sofa. The people who kill you one by one are still hesitant. Is he worthy of being the protagonist if he kills or not? Also, if you want to say something, don't say it in front of the person you want to kill. Can you give me some advice? The same words and numbers give people different feelings. This book still has certain problems. There are still problems with language organization. Another one is that it emphasizes emotions. As long as you embark on cultivating immortality, you cannot emphasize emotions.