Traveling Through the World of Immortality, Ruoyi's Path to Immortality

If you steal other people's food and clothes, why don't you give them some money?

Very well written. A dragon princess was the family's favorite. She was too protective and had no scheming. She didn't practice well and was killed by others. After hundreds of reincarnations, growing up suffering without the love of parents, hard-working and inspiring. In the end, under the arrangement behind the back of his family, he worked diligently, endured hardships and stood hard work, and finally cultivated and became an immortal. It also shows that it is better to have a backstage. It also shows that no matter how powerful parents are, they cannot pamper their children too much. Only by enduring hardship can one become a master.

The subject matter is great! There is no need to save the world, cultivating immortals is about being born in the world and aiming for immortality, so that's good! ! There is no problem with the overall story, but the connections are stiff and the logic is a bit far-fetched. Keep up the good work, author! !

A very good work, the lineage theory runs through it, and it also makes sense. I don't know why the rating is so low. Is it because the article is relatively short? Or is it the secular lineage theory that runs throughout? I really don't have much patience for stories that are too long, so I still prefer this kind of novella.

This novel has a good plot, tight story development, thrilling dangers, and not so much nonsense and psychological asides. The only shortcoming is that the writing level is a little lacking. For example, sick sentences like "What's going on" appear more frequently?

It's just a pity that the repetition at the beginning of each chapter is a pity

It's a very nice book and the content is wonderful [love][love][love][love][love][love][Like][Like][Like][Like][Like][Like][Like]💪💪💪💪💪💪💪💪💪💪See you in the next book

Five stars for encouragement. The advantage is that the taste of cultivating immortals is relatively serious, and the author is writing a very serious adventure story in the world of cultivating immortals. The writing style is refreshing, without any overly modern greasiness. I didn't use the cultivation of immortality as a shell to make up settings randomly. The shortcomings are poor writing skills, occasional procrastination in writing, and lack of priority in plot description. What should be described in detail is passed over in one stroke, but there are a lot of water words that can be briefly described [face covering] It can be read when you are bored and reading, and it is worth collecting.

It's the first time I've seen someone wearing this to go to the world of immortality. I suspect that the heroine was originally from the world of immortality and was sent there to avoid trouble eighteen years ago. Haha.

Fairyland, Ascension Pool. Fang Ruoyi opened her eyes, looked at her parents and brothers standing next to the Ascension Pool, and laughed. "Father, mother, eldest brother, second brother, third brother, fourth brother, I'm back!"

Overall it's good, pretty good, but there are too many repetitive paragraphs.

Nice! ! It took me several days to finish it! !

So pretty! I like it very much (ω). Come on! Looking forward to more updates [love]

It's particularly good. The author's fairy tales are the kind of stories where you go into a secret realm to find opportunities and fight, and there's a process. They're not the kind of stories that just give a general summary and then it's over. It's very exciting!

I quite like these settings. I have read a lot of novels about cultivating immortals without cp. This setting is relatively rare and the writing is good. The problem is not that big. I am still looking forward to the plot after the ascension. It is a pity that the author has not followed up after so long.

Very good, good-looking, good-looking

It's a pity that there is no extra story.

Beautiful, I like it very much

The subject matter is good, you can still watch it

Not bad, just to overcome the tribulation. Doesn't Lingyu have a protective barrier?

After a long period of practice. The heroine sang all the way from a mortal to regaining her memory and ascending to the fairy world.

Very pretty! I want to continue reading the author's works

A good article on cultivating immortals, simple, concise and engaging, worth reading!

It's great. The heroine has a positive and optimistic attitude towards life. She can change her own destiny with the blessing of the God of Luck. I hope she has a wonderful life.

I read Chapter 52, and I'm still very young. If it weren't for the heroine, I wouldn't be able to survive even one episode.

Not bad, so far it looks pretty good

It's good to watch, but it's a pity that there are no extras

There are no big ups and downs, and it's all done seriously.

It's pretty. It would be better if it were longer [blowing kiss]

It's very beautiful, but I didn't expect the heroine to be so powerful.