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I can only give it three stars, but the writing is quite good. The main thing is a bit confusing to me. In the introduction, I thought I was the master and the eldest apprentice, and then I continued to read. After so long, I have been able to accept a lot, and even two apprentices together. But after looking at the title, I flipped through a few pictures and saw that it was the master and the villain. , I have also read before that the male protagonist fell in love with a time traveler and the villain was a true attacker, but this one is different from the others. I read more than fifty chapters and then the top ten of the following chapters. I felt a little sorry for the great disciple in my heart. I downloaded it and watched it. It took me three days to comment.

In fact, I think the author's writing is quite good. Every protagonist and supporting character has a story line, especially the supporting characters are not written to end hastily like other novels.

I was amused from time to time while reading. The author's writing is humorous and interesting, and the plot design is very consistent. When I saw that all the parts that I thought were unreasonable were explained later, I suddenly realized that the system was late and why the apprentice was so bad as the male protagonist of the original work were all foreshadowing. I can only praise it, it is so imaginative!

It's okay. It mainly writes about the emotional entanglements of the protagonists. It has two male protagonists and a holy father. It's a bit like a fairy tale.

I like it. I came here from other places. When I read it, I felt like reading a comic script. I already had the picture in my mind. It was warm in the early stage. From the underworld chapter onwards, the plot became more compact and more exciting. I like the master very much. He is cowardly when he should be cowardly and brave when he should be brave. He not only takes good care of the young apprentices he has accepted, but is also very good to every apprentice of the original owner. Some readers don't like this character, just because he protects the eldest apprentice. But don't forget that the master has always believed that the death of the "protagonist" will lead to the collapse of the entire story world. In order to prevent the world from collapsing, this character cannot be allowed to die easily. And judging from the whole story, the eldest apprentice represents an important part of the demon world, and this part is indispensable for the master to conquer the six realms later. When you see the later stage, you will know why the big apprentice is so bad. It has to do with the methods of the final big boss.

How to put it, it's a typical partial case of a pair of unreliable parents favoring the elder and abusing the younger, causing the younger to take revenge on society... After reading the whole story, the most annoying of all the characters turned out to be the former god and queen who only had a few scenes, followed by the father and son named Feng, and then Sun Pingyi! The most pitiable thing is the former master, who didn't understand anything, did nothing and suffered the malice of others, and then turned black. Darkening is good, it's me, and I turned black too... So I don't think the ending given to the former master by the author is good! I hope the author will write a sequel or open another book, and give the former master someone who will love him wholeheartedly... Come on, author!

The plot is very good, flowing smoothly, not abrupt or bloody. It's just that the writing style is a bit immature. You don't need to deliberately highlight the full emotions of the characters or describe them carefully. Just write them under specific circumstances. Except for the deliberate description, which is a bit embarrassing, everything else is perfect (✧∇✧)

This book is really great! It only took me 4 days to read it. ˶╹ꇴ╹˶This book not only contains love, but also friendship and family ties. The author's character creation is very successful, and the overall story logic is also very smooth. (◍＞◡＜◍) Ayu is so cute and excellent ૮₍˶ᵔᵕᵔ˶₎აThe love between the two protagonists is also perfect ٩(๛ ˘ ³˘)۶♥Their story originated from a little boy who jumped into the arms of his destined person and risked everything. Ayu's love for Ajia (Yu Hao) became concrete when he knelt down 4,000 steps for him. He exchanged their fates; Ajia's love for Ayu is engraved in his bones, and he suffered the pain of death for him. Even if he lost his memory, he would still love him subconsciously. What's more, knowing that his lover died for him, his black hair turned white ໒꒰ྀིᜊ꒦ິ^꒦ິᜊ ꒱ྀིა (I was so moved) The author also inserted a little knife in the middle, but it disappeared quickly, so you can feel free to rush! The author is very considerate and arranges a good follow-up for everyone ⸝⸝ʚ̴̶̷̆ ̯ʚ̴̶̷̆⸝⸝Really hurry up and read it!

Super exciting, read it in one go

Anyway, I really like ヾ(*ΦωΦ)ツ

Moreover, the plot of the story is full of ups and downs, with many unexpected twists and turns. I really enjoyed watching the Fairy World and Demon World chapters. The interaction between the master and his apprentice was very interesting and touching. I feel that the author is very good at describing emotional dramas. I recommend you to read this book!

I now know what it means to have an extremely smooth narrative [Shy] It's really good to read, the characters are very logical, and the story line is very good, and this is probably the only book that I could pick up after abandoning it for a while and still think it's good to read. (I feel so sorry for the original Qing Yuchen, oh my god [crying])

It's really good. There's a story too. But the main character is a good mother? If you like it, you can watch it

Very pretty, not bad

Very good, I like it

So pretty, so heartwarming

Each character has its own characteristics

This book is also quite good to read. The author of the emotional drama is well written, the characters have distinct personalities, and the foreshadowing is good. However, the deputy CP's emotional drama is less, but it has a beginning and an end. Fei Jia and Hou Qing are very easy to get along with.

This article is very good, it is both sweet and sad, and it also has a lot of funny points that made me laugh. Even if there are misunderstandings, they can be solved quickly. This is my favorite thing. [Learned][Learned][Send heart]

I feel that the content is similar, but the subsequent development is indeed very different. It's very interesting. I like it. Fortunately, I didn't miss this wonderful book because of the rating.

It's very beautiful, maybe it's not rated, that's why it's so low, but it's good

I really like this book [sending my heart]

Good-looking, rich in content, not ridiculous

It's quite a long book, well divided into categories, and the plot is also good😄

Good looking, no nonsense, highly recommended

A useless bedtime reading

I like it very much, I think it looks good,

Linked together, it looks good.

Very beautiful, very beautiful

Very good. I think it looks good