After Winter Cole finally escaped from the laboratory, he set fire to Cole's ancestral home, making headlines in one fell swoop. After escaping, he ran to the slums overnight and became close friends with the dark kid next door. He thought his life would be spent in such an ordinary way, until a man suddenly appeared and told him that he was not human...
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The man: "You are not a human being. In fact, you are a human machine..."
Winter: "..."
Man: "Listen to me, I know it's hard to believe, but
You are truly a human machine! ! ! "
Introduction 2
Winter worked hard to raise the big and small snakes, and then suddenly disappeared...
Twenty years later, Professor Snape looked at Winter, who was still a teenager:...
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Two male protagonists: man and machine × Snape
*ooc advance warning
Reader comments
In the very heartwarming story about raising a cub, the characters of Snape and Eileen are completely non-OOC. They speak in every word, use harsh words, are very sarcastic, and sometimes make a few cold jokes;
But starting from chapter 16, it made my heart feel a little uncomfortable. Snape has been hurting the protagonist's heart, but from the perspective of the character, it is completely reasonable, because Snape is such an awkward, arrogant, and low-self-esteem character, covering himself up with a poisonous tongue; and the protagonist's setting is like a human machine and does not understand emotions, so he has always tolerated and tolerated Snape. It seems that the protagonist is just like Snape's nanny, wiping his butt all the time;
Snape has learned black magic and has become obsessed with it. He started to hurt the protagonist again after more than 40 chapters. I can understand that the young man Sif was arrogant and felt that he could control it and would not hurt the people around him or cause huge damage. But the reality is that his emotions became more and more extreme and he lost his temper. Judgment, rationality, and even began to vent negative emotions towards the protagonist. I know that people always hurt those close to them unscrupulously, which is understandable, but I am the protagonist raising the cubs. Seeing Sif hurt the protagonist like this, my heart aches and suffocates for the protagonist who does not understand emotions [crying]
[Alleged spoilers]
good! Chapter 53: Beginning to gain enlightenment and develop emotional lines (not together)
Sev was just acting as Malfoy and Voldemort, so you can rest assured here, but he didn't really break with the protagonist or learn black magic.
The first book review is dedicated to this novel.
It's a really great novel. I've been in a literary drought recently and can't read anything interesting. I'm probably just unlucky. The novels I read are heavily influenced by AI. But this one is really made with great ingenuity. The relationship between Si Jiao and Winter is really good, with cause and effect. In the previous scenes, either the relationship scenes started too early, there was no foreshadowing, and it was too abrupt, or there were not many emotional scenes that were completed in full. This is really one of the most satisfying emotional lines.
Moreover, the development of this story is of a very comfortable kind, relaxed and bland and full of surprises. It is not too bland and boring, and it is not too exciting or artificial. At the same time, with foreshadowing, it is interesting to fill in the holes later and make people suddenly realize.
Now it's tied. It's really a stock with great potential. It doesn't have any bad points, but the update is a bit slow, but this small flaw is not worth mentioning. I really look forward to their follow-up story!
(This is one of my favorite novels in HP! I don't know why there aren't many people, but it's really, really good!)
By the way, the character creation is also very successful.
This Sect is one of the best in fan fiction. Others feel weird and dark. In the beginning, it didn't have the character that a child should have. It was like forcing an adult's soul into a child's body. In my opinion, this teaching is like a child growing up and becoming an adult.
It's so good-looking, so good-looking, and the daily life of Severus and Winter is really good-looking, very interesting, so sweet, so sweet, so sweet. I just hope that the author will update it in the future and not write about knives. Just let them live happily like this [blowing kiss]
It's really rare that I've read the whole book, and I still have more to say.
In some places, the typing problem may not be expressed clearly, and in other places, the logic may be problematic. Maybe four stars, but I still give this book five stars.
If the logic is not clear, there is only one word. There may be a little more words, but it does not affect the viewing.
It's so beautiful. Snape's poisonous tongue is particularly well described. I really like this pair. The emotional descriptions are particularly delicate, and the characters' inner struggles are perfectly written. Looking forward to the following plot, I really like this young couple, come on boss [blowing kiss][blowing kiss][blowing kiss]
Boss..., It looks good. I look forward to this bite of rice every day when I come to Western Persimmon. It's delicious, boss. The plot is well written and the image of Snape is also well created. He is not written as a silly, sweet kid. He has his own temper and his own thoughts. It's very delicious, boss... Are you still updating it? [Fear][Fear][Fear]
The reading process is very comfortable, the plot is very natural and smooth, and it is not awkward at all. It is true to its originality. I really have had enough of those Sri Lankan teachings that focus on cool articles. They are so embarrassing that I can't stand it [laughs awkwardly]
In the very heartwarming story about raising a cub, the characters of Snape and Eileen are completely non-OOC. They speak in every word, use harsh words, are very sarcastic, and sometimes make a few cold jokes; But starting from chapter 16, it made my heart feel a little uncomfortable. Snape has been hurting the protagonist's heart, but from the perspective of the character, it is completely reasonable, because Snape is such an awkward, arrogant, and low-self-esteem character, covering himself up with a poisonous tongue; and the protagonist's setting is like a human machine and does not understand emotions, so he has always tolerated and tolerated Snape. It seems that the protagonist is just like Snape's nanny, wiping his butt all the time; Snape has learned black magic and has become obsessed with it. He started to hurt the protagonist again after more than 40 chapters. I can understand that the young man Sif was arrogant and felt that he could control it and would not hurt the people around him or cause huge damage. But the reality is that his emotions became more and more extreme and he lost his temper. Judgment, rationality, and even began to vent negative emotions towards the protagonist. I know that people always hurt those close to them unscrupulously, which is understandable, but I am the protagonist raising the cubs. Seeing Sif hurt the protagonist like this, my heart aches and suffocates for the protagonist who does not understand emotions [crying] [Alleged spoilers] good! Chapter 53: Beginning to gain enlightenment and develop emotional lines (not together) Sev was just acting as Malfoy and Voldemort, so you can rest assured here, but he didn't really break with the protagonist or learn black magic.
The first book review is dedicated to this novel. It's a really great novel. I've been in a literary drought recently and can't read anything interesting. I'm probably just unlucky. The novels I read are heavily influenced by AI. But this one is really made with great ingenuity. The relationship between Si Jiao and Winter is really good, with cause and effect. In the previous scenes, either the relationship scenes started too early, there was no foreshadowing, and it was too abrupt, or there were not many emotional scenes that were completed in full. This is really one of the most satisfying emotional lines. Moreover, the development of this story is of a very comfortable kind, relaxed and bland and full of surprises. It is not too bland and boring, and it is not too exciting or artificial. At the same time, with foreshadowing, it is interesting to fill in the holes later and make people suddenly realize. Now it's tied. It's really a stock with great potential. It doesn't have any bad points, but the update is a bit slow, but this small flaw is not worth mentioning. I really look forward to their follow-up story! (This is one of my favorite novels in HP! I don't know why there aren't many people, but it's really, really good!) By the way, the character creation is also very successful. This Sect is one of the best in fan fiction. Others feel weird and dark. In the beginning, it didn't have the character that a child should have. It was like forcing an adult's soul into a child's body. In my opinion, this teaching is like a child growing up and becoming an adult.
It's so good-looking, so good-looking, and the daily life of Severus and Winter is really good-looking, very interesting, so sweet, so sweet, so sweet. I just hope that the author will update it in the future and not write about knives. Just let them live happily like this [blowing kiss]
It's really rare that I've read the whole book, and I still have more to say. In some places, the typing problem may not be expressed clearly, and in other places, the logic may be problematic. Maybe four stars, but I still give this book five stars. If the logic is not clear, there is only one word. There may be a little more words, but it does not affect the viewing.
It's so beautiful. Snape's poisonous tongue is particularly well described. I really like this pair. The emotional descriptions are particularly delicate, and the characters' inner struggles are perfectly written. Looking forward to the following plot, I really like this young couple, come on boss [blowing kiss][blowing kiss][blowing kiss] Boss..., It looks good. I look forward to this bite of rice every day when I come to Western Persimmon. It's delicious, boss. The plot is well written and the image of Snape is also well created. He is not written as a silly, sweet kid. He has his own temper and his own thoughts. It's very delicious, boss... Are you still updating it? [Fear][Fear][Fear]
The reading process is very comfortable, the plot is very natural and smooth, and it is not awkward at all. It is true to its originality. I really have had enough of those Sri Lankan teachings that focus on cool articles. They are so embarrassing that I can't stand it [laughs awkwardly]
Yes, yes, this tastes great.