A Certain Magical Index: I Became a Girl in Academy City

Brother Moba, this is the episode I dream of being like🤤

The writing is indeed good, and it can be seen that the author has carefully read the original work. It's just that at the beginning, the heroine wanted to confess her love to the leader and felt that she couldn't accept it. It's not that she disliked the leader, it just felt a bit subtle. It would be better if it was Lily.

Let's just say that if I become a girl and look good, the leader of the Demonic Forbidden City will be a good choice. Even if I don't change, I will choose to have a close relationship. When refreshing

Originally, I had read too many Shuangwen, and my brain was almost gone. When I first read this book, I felt that it was not enjoyable anywhere. But then I realized that even if you know the plot, after all, you have walked from the outside into the inside, and everything cannot go smoothly. However, the reason why you, the author, are not available now may be that some details in the early stage were not handled well. Because I was listening to the book at work, and I automatically skipped the things I didn't want to hear. Unexpectedly, I started to work hard later, and I just stayed up all night to read it. After all, it is a fan work, and the lower limit is still guaranteed. On this basis, the author's plot adaptation is also good. I am 25 years old, and I am not as good as before. Staying up all night is quite painful. Anyway, keep it up! Come on! !

There is no black left!!! To be honest, after a comprehensive search among Zuo Fans, there was almost no one there. Otherwise, the author was biased. Not only did he not disparage Zuo Fan, he also highlighted Zuo Fan! The author favors Zuo Fang more than the animation! The animation has deleted more than ten aspects of Zuo Fang's performance, and the author has mentioned Zuo Fang's most impressive highlights!

It's good. It's a rare original novel that doesn't follow the original novel blindly, but is willing to explore the characters that Hippo took care of. The only thing I'm a little dissatisfied about is that the author is from the Shangfeng Party and I am from the Shangyin Party (funny)

The battle of wits and the restoration of the plot are both decent, but the protagonist only has LV4 in the early stage, which is very insufficient, especially when facing the environment in the later stage where the combat power is broken. I hope it can be strengthened later. It is a book that is closer to the original work and makes people feel comfortable reading it. I hope I can keep writing.

I have read one of the most in-depth books in the Demon Forbidden fandom [Like] The main text starts after the third chapter. The first three chapters are a big exaggeration, which is a bit discouraging. I like this book very much. The author will update it soon!

It's so good. The author is great. I have been reading your novels on the planes coming back from abroad in the past few months. Don't stop updating. I like this book very much. It fits the world view of the Forbidden City very much. I respect the original work very much. It is really comfortable to read.

Regarding the pace of plot development, I personally don't like fanfics that go straight from invincibility at the beginning to the end, so I was quite surprised to see that there are only a handful of Forbidden fanfics that start at a level lower than lv4. At present, the protagonist of the latest chapter does not break the settings of the original work and reach a higher level. Instead, he uses a more reasonable method to improve his strength. If I say that the fans who respect the original work the most, no one should object. (I won't say who the fan next door is. He laid out hundreds of chapters of scientific methods to improve strength. You don't have to practice the method of cultivating immortals. It's like you just finished cultivating.) The setting of the protagonist in the article is quite rare. He is actively pulled in by people from the world, although it is an accident. It is not difficult to see from the opening events and the main supporting characters that there is actually something wrong with the protagonist's psychology, but unexpectedly it fits the character style written by Hippo, and the psychological activities are completely like those of a local. Let me also say that no one who respects the original work the most has any objections. The author has a very detailed analysis of the settings of the new things in the article. In fact, it is very friendly to a super fan like me who has not read the novel in full. It also proves the author's understanding of the forbidden world, so there are basically no hardware flaws. One last time, I would like to say that no one will object to the fandom that respects the original work the most. So far, the plot basically follows the original world line. I don't know if there will be an independent storyline in the future. As for the protagonist's emotional line, I hope the author will carefully consider it or simply cut it. I would like to give some advice to the author personally. The timeline of the Forbidden Game passes very quickly, and the plot line is also very simple. This is the fundamental reason why most of the Forbidden Gamers do not live long. In fact, the author can add some original scenes to it, or end some events in advance so that some characters can return to daily life and interact with the protagonist in advance. The original work is so fast that the fans can't be comfortable (there is no need to respect the original work in this regard, Hippo CS is a pure time management master). In addition, it is not recommended to omit the scientific side of the plot. A large number of readers who watch the Magic Forbidden fanfic have basically only watched the Magic Forbidden anime and Super Cannon, and are much more interested in the scientific side than the magic side. Although the later stages of the Magic Forbidden are basically all kinds of world-destroying magic, but try to write a little bit of the scientific side of the plot, even if it is just daily. Finally… Update soon! ! !