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Brother Moba, this is the episode I dream of being like🤤

The writing is indeed good, and it can be seen that the author has carefully read the original work. It's just that at the beginning, the heroine wanted to confess her love to the leader and felt that she couldn't accept it. It's not that she disliked the leader, it just felt a bit subtle. It would be better if it was Lily.

Originally, I had read too many Shuangwen, and my brain was almost gone. When I first read this book, I felt that it was not enjoyable anywhere. But then I realized that even if you know the plot, after all, you have walked from the outside into the inside, and everything cannot go smoothly. However, the reason why you, the author, are not available now may be that some details in the early stage were not handled well. Because I was listening to the book at work, and I automatically skipped the things I didn't want to hear. Unexpectedly, I started to work hard later, and I just stayed up all night to read it. After all, it is a fan work, and the lower limit is still guaranteed. On this basis, the author's plot adaptation is also good. I am 25 years old, and I am not as good as before. Staying up all night is quite painful. Anyway, keep it up! Come on! !

There is no black left!!! To be honest, after a comprehensive search among Zuo Fans, there was almost no one there. Otherwise, the author was biased. Not only did he not disparage Zuo Fan, he also highlighted Zuo Fan! The author favors Zuo Fang more than the animation! The animation has deleted more than ten aspects of Zuo Fang's performance, and the author has mentioned Zuo Fang's most impressive highlights!

It's good. It's a rare original novel that doesn't follow the original novel blindly, but is willing to explore the characters that Hippo took care of. The only thing I'm a little dissatisfied about is that the author is from the Shangfeng Party and I am from the Shangyin Party (funny)

The battle of wits and the restoration of the plot are both decent, but the protagonist only has LV4 in the early stage, which is very insufficient, especially when facing the environment in the later stage where the combat power is broken. I hope it can be strengthened later. It is a book that is closer to the original work and makes people feel comfortable reading it. I hope I can keep writing.

I have read one of the most in-depth books in the Demon Forbidden fandom [Like] The main text starts after the third chapter. The first three chapters are a big exaggeration, which is a bit discouraging. I like this book very much. The author will update it soon!

It's so good. The author is great. I have been reading your novels on the planes coming back from abroad in the past few months. Don't stop updating. I like this book very much. It fits the world view of the Forbidden City very much. I respect the original work very much. It is really comfortable to read.

Regarding the pace of plot development, I personally don't like fanfics that go straight from invincibility at the beginning to the end, so I was quite surprised to see that there are only a handful of Forbidden fanfics that start at a level lower than lv4. At present, the protagonist of the latest chapter does not break the settings of the original work and reach a higher level. Instead, he uses a more reasonable method to improve his strength. If I say that the fans who respect the original work the most, no one should object. (I won't say who the fan next door is. He laid out hundreds of chapters of scientific methods to improve strength. You don't have to practice the method of cultivating immortals. It's like you just finished cultivating.) The setting of the protagonist in the article is quite rare. He is actively pulled in by people from the world, although it is an accident. It is not difficult to see from the opening events and the main supporting characters that there is actually something wrong with the protagonist's psychology, but unexpectedly it fits the character style written by Hippo, and the psychological activities are completely like those of a local. Let me also say that no one who respects the original work the most has any objections. The author has a very detailed analysis of the settings of the new things in the article. In fact, it is very friendly to a super fan like me who has not read the novel in full. It also proves the author's understanding of the forbidden world, so there are basically no hardware flaws. One last time, I would like to say that no one will object to the fandom that respects the original work the most. So far, the plot basically follows the original world line. I don't know if there will be an independent storyline in the future. As for the protagonist's emotional line, I hope the author will carefully consider it or simply cut it. I would like to give some advice to the author personally. The timeline of the Forbidden Game passes very quickly, and the plot line is also very simple. This is the fundamental reason why most of the Forbidden Gamers do not live long. In fact, the author can add some original scenes to it, or end some events in advance so that some characters can return to daily life and interact with the protagonist in advance. The original work is so fast that the fans can't be comfortable (there is no need to respect the original work in this regard, Hippo CS is a pure time management master). In addition, it is not recommended to omit the scientific side of the plot. A large number of readers who watch the Magic Forbidden fanfic have basically only watched the Magic Forbidden anime and Super Cannon, and are much more interested in the scientific side than the magic side. Although the later stages of the Magic Forbidden are basically all kinds of world-destroying magic, but try to write a little bit of the scientific side of the plot, even if it is just daily. Finally......... Update soon! ! !

I like it very much. I hope it will be updated more slowly and not be permanently cut in half or have a hasty ending.

It's rare to find a Magic Forbidden fanfic, and I feel good about it so far It may look awkward in some places in the early stages, but the plot later on is pretty good.

Update soon; by the way, when will the author improve the protagonist's strength? On the magic side or the science side? Are you planning to elevate the protagonist to a master like Alice Aberration, who is the most powerful one-eyed demon? Probably, no, probably pigeon? [What]

The author has his own understanding of the book of raising children. The protagonist travels through time and really plays the role of butterfly wings. At the end of the third volume, he has a showdown with Aleister and is promoted to vice chairman [smile]. It is still a surprising way to say goodbye to the first three volumes.

This book can be regarded as a rare one. After all, there are not many fan novels about the Forbidden City, and the author also understands it very thoroughly. It is the most beautiful fan novel about the Forbidden City that I have seen so far. It has original characters, does not affect the main plot, and even has blackening.

The writing is very good. Although I have only watched the anime, I can tell that the author knows the original work very well. Although the author said that it is not a good article, it is okay to read. I don't feel that there are many times in the comment area silently shouting Doh. Let me remind you in advance of the plot that may be considered a surprise to others. The protagonist is pretending to be single, the heroine and Kakimi, and the heroine and Touma. There are scenes of ambiguous plots between the heroine and Kakimi. I don't really like the plot between the heroine and Kakimi. If they really fell in love with each other in the middle, I probably wouldn't be able to watch the latest chapter. I was also shocked by the confession between Saiko and Uiharu in the middle. [Full]

The heroine is male and female, which is in line with the aesthetics of the one-size-fits-all party [laughing]

It's so good. It's my first time to read a novel about Demon Forbidden. It effectively alleviated the emptiness I felt after reading the novel [laughs]. I'm great [admiration] How long have I been watching?

It takes time to polish your writing, and you'll do the rest. There is a saying that goes like this, tomato products are in the fandom The quality of the book is considered extremely rare gold in Tomato. If you can accept non-splendid writing, then the more you read, the more you will become addicted to it. 🍅It is rare that it is not unfinished, but the non-shuang writing will probably dissuade some passers-by. The character of the protagonist is fully developed in three big chapters. The emotional impact at the climax is very strong, and the rhythm of the plot is also well grasped. The original simplicity is conveyed without missing anything. The originality is also full of fun and highlights. The daily aspect is excellent, and it can even be said to be the advantage range of this book. The chapters that foreshadow the recovery must be at the climax of the story, so chapters such as 930, the ending, and the decisive battle must be ranked high. And as the shaping continues to deepen, the later chapters will naturally have certain advantages compared with the early ones. Final Chapter > Chapter 930 > One-Eye Chapter > Anbu War Chapter (Excluding Queen vs. Amakawa) > Gremlin Chapter > God Ascension Chapter > Three Battles Chapter > British Chapter > Daiha Star Festival Chapter ≈ First Chapter > First Chapter of First Edition The Gremlin chapter can be regarded as the bonus of getting a decisive battle. Although there is the Friendship Breaking Fist in the three-stop chapter, it feels very weak because the pull is too long, and the effect of the fist is not that good. This is probably why many readers ask if there will be more fist fights in the future/when will Kihara Amagawa really change back to Tenkawa Palace (to be honest, Kihara Tenkawa or Tenkawa Palace is no longer important in the middle and later stages, and it basically has no impact if you look at it) The revised ANBU chapter is very good, leaving aside the part where Shokuhou Mikoto confronts Amakawa. The first and second battles are also written very well. The interaction between Amakawa holding Mei and two bullets, and the space ability user When I read it before, I felt that the British chapter had a slight decline in perception, but objectively speaking, the British chapter is also quite good, just because the first two chapters happened to be the climax of 930, but the previous chapter was the Indian card chapter where the perception fell drastically. The Daihasei Sacrifice chapter is considered a point drop for the queen line, otherwise it is quite good. The reason why the Anbu chapter can ignore the point drop is because the other parts are much better, and the Daihasei Sacrifice chapter, as an early chapter, has an inherent disadvantage in shaping. Let's not talk about the overwhelming zombie-fighting in the first chapter of the original version. Now the first chapter is pretty good in terms of the introduction of supporting characters, novice levels, and handling of boosts. As for the character design of the protagonist, I think the first chapter is almost boring. Maybe it's missing some inner monologue? This chapter is overall okay.

It's okay, the plot design is very good. I have only watched the first season of Super Gun and Magic Forbidden before, and it connected the plot of Hippopotamus. Even if I haven't watched it, I basically understand the plot. The character design is a bit flawed. I always feel that the protagonist's psychological changes are too fast and a bit lacking. Overall, it's okay. I hug Tianchuan Palace, who is quite cute. Have some Tianchuan clip beauty stickers

The real forbidden fanfic

It may not be qualified as a web novel, but it is qualified as a Forbidden Fan.

So far, among the peak series of fan fiction that I have watched, none of them are too np. She looks more and more like Kihara, looking forward to the personality correction punch

Among the current Tomato novels, it is the fan novel that best fits the setting of the original novel "Forbidden" [Send Heart], it is passionate and beautiful

The writing is good. It can be seen that the author has done a deep research on the original work. He has a clear research on the power system of the original work. I don't know why the score is so low. But what if this kind of semi-follower follows the latest version of the original work? But I don't know if the original work is about to be finished. It has already been written until Chuangchuang 13, so there shouldn't be any appointments again, right? Judging from this, there should be at most 8 or 9 volumes of the original work before it is finished. I also admire the original author for writing such a complicated power system but it hasn't collapsed much after so many years.

I really enjoyed reading it. It's a very interesting Demon Forbidden fanfic. It's a pity that I won't get married. When I finish it, I'll write some Lily, Marry, and Harem IF lines.

Yes, it would be great if the author is willing to do research.

Except for the few chapters at the beginning where the heroine wants to "sneak attack" the leader, which is a bit weird (), after reading further, the writing is quite good. In Tomato, the score is much higher than it should be. Hmm... I read it from the beginning and I feel that after the changes, the pace of the previous plot has become faster. Isn't it a bit strange to enter the plot directly at the beginning? What is the author's idea for the changes?

God of Gods, the only book that saved Apple from his second child😭 There is also a talk about the creation of a covenant, check it out! Resurrection!

It's rare to find a fan of A Certain Magical Index, and it's the kind of person who has actually read the complete original work. I must support it.

Such high-quality fan fiction is really rare on Tomato. It should be the best Magical Forbidden fan fiction on Tomato except for the fixed number deviation.