Magic: How to Feed a White-Haired Dumpling Correctly

This is the first time I read this kind of story about masters and apprentices. The characters and other aspects of the female protagonist and male protagonist really impressed me. The writing is also very good, but the rhythm is not very good. Next came the sharp sound. To be honest, the reason why no one reads your book may be due to Shark Arm Platform. You wrote the dream part shortly after the beginning to lay out some things, but I feel like you are throwing something directly into the face. It is too sudden and the amount of information is too large. I am afraid that these few chapters of yours have turned away a lot of readers who are looking for leisurely daily articles. Next comes the characters. There are a lot of characters in the academy part. Most of these characters have no role in advancing the plot. They are more of a chat topic for the male and female protagonists (they don't even have any effect on the relationship progress of the male and female protagonists!!!). The final result is a chapter that contains a lot of information but not many useful questions (it really gives me a headache to remember the names, but seeing these characters now, there are not many useful ones) However, these problems are all from the first volume. After the second volume, these problems are basically solved, but sometimes there are inexplicable transition problems. When I see some places, I will flip forward to make sure I have missed it again. Finally, I still hope that my voice can help you improve. In some places, my judgment may be subjective. No matter what, I hope you can keep writing, because I really like your works, come on [like]

I've watched it all along the way, the growth of the male protagonist, the progress of the female protagonist, your aunt's smile in front of the screen, the super ↗↘appetizing↗stomach↘appetite↗but particularly active foot-skating "author"😡When will the male and female protagonists confirm their relationship! Not sweet enough, needs to be sweeter. Even though I was busy with work, I never tried to collect books, just for the happy ending that every goblin desires... I know the author is writing it now, so I won't force him to post the draft. But if this continues, I will change my job to become an undead skeleton💀💀💀 When will the sun shine into my heart?

It's nice to read, the writing is very fresh and refined yet humane. Xiao Xingyan is also cute and cute haha, and Xiao Lingyi, the white-haired dumpling, is also very cute ~ Dui! And there's also little Dumbao~! How shameless! So sweet~! And wow, don't be too tired, it doesn't matter if you update later~ I've seen it all, so why don't you give me a like? It's pitiful.

Give yourself a five-star rating

This book should use the story lines of the male protagonist and the female protagonist to drive the main plot. The plot is very interesting, and the heroine is a loli, silly, silly, and very cute. [Sinister smile]

Why does such an excellent Lolita novel have such a low rating? It shouldn't be like this I have read 600 chapters so far. There are no major problems in the whole story. The author is also active. As for stopping updating if there are no results Don't want that kind of thing All in all, this book is very good (I am not a lolita person) Recommended (I'm not very good at writing reviews for the first time)

I originally planned to read the latest chapter before writing, but I couldn't help myself and rated it (because I wanted to see the duration ο(=•ω＜=)ρ⌒☆(cross out). A stable update every day and never-ending updates (currently) are better than many novels I have read, so you, the author, are simply my superman (｡•̀ᴗ-)✧( fog As for the plot, this article is more about daily life, and the supporting characters are well written. They all have their own stories and choices (such as Lord Hawthorne, Lao Xu). It is considered a good novel in Tomato. At least I see that there are no poisonous points now, and the score of seven points is really low. Evaluations are inevitably subjective. If you like a slow pace and a more everyday person, you can give it a try. Finally, cheers to the author. Although no one will read it, I will try my best to see it to the end!

Good looking [like] Now when I read a book on Tomato, I dare not hope that there will be no poisonous spots. I can only hope that the poisonous spots will appear later. Not to mention that I haven't seen any bad points yet, the character descriptions are also good, so it's a very good book. There are just too few people. Is it because there is not much promotion? Logically speaking, if the quality was not constantly updated, there wouldn't be so few people, right?

Is it pure love with a single heroine? I don't want to see swords and cows

First of all, give a five-star review (*≧∪≦) to support the author in writing a better story! I have finished reading the first volume. The overall writing style and plot are very good, and there are no major bad points. It makes me feel very relaxed while reading. But I think there is a little problem (personal feeling): some of the foreshadowing is not clearly written, and it seems a bit abrupt. Okay, I'm going to continue reading. Finally, I like Bai Mao Danzi (super loud)

It's okay, but the plot jumps around a lot, which makes it feel weird to read, and it's not very smooth. The Riddler often makes me feel dizzy, but the daily writing is very delicate, but it's a pity that it doesn't have much space. Overall, Lolita is great!

If you take a quick look at the number of readers, it's really pitiful [face covering] Some new books are read by 30,000 to 40,000 people. Overall, this book is very good, so good that I don't know what to say. The writing style is beautiful, the writing is good, and the characters are distinct. Some readers thought that the early pacing was not properly controlled, but I thought it was okay and did not appear to be lagging or too fast. [Eat melon] If I have time, I'll try to see if I can publicize it to the outside world. Can you help me summarize the advantages? I can't wrap my head around it [laughs] How long have I been reading now [Eat Melon] Let's take a look

So wonderful! I always feel that the author might stab me in the ending

I'll give it a five-star rating too~ It's still pretty good so far.

The story is quite good and the author's writing is good, but why are there so few people reading it? It's just like pearls and jade covered with dust! Come on, author! There is no need to ask about the spring breeze, when the stars come into your dreams!

When I first started watching it, there weren't too many plots between the male and female protagonists, and there were various scene-viewing switches in one chapter, and the Riddler was very foggy. The viewing experience was not very good, and it made me want to sleep. It took too long for the male protagonist to graduate from a trial. I hope it will be better in the future. I will give it five stars when the time comes. I saw that there is no single female protagonist in the tag, and I was a little scared. Looking at the comment section, it should be a single female protagonist, right? I hope there won't be any ambiguous male-female pairings later.

Poke xp, non-toxic, anyway, I like it very much, I felt a knife when I read it, and there is a chapter about a woman who finds it difficult to assume the role of the protagonist

It's great, one of the best Western fantasy books!

It's very interesting. Just as the author said in the Easter egg, I will keep reading this book as long as there are more updates. I'm also very emotional.

The detailed description and character description are quite good (at least better than many books I have read). I like the images of the male protagonist and female protagonist. In short, it is very beautiful~ But why doesn't anyone watch it? Our review is just to look at the reading time~~~

I hope there can be more daily life, I like the interaction between the male and female protagonists

After reading a little bit, I think it's okay. I'll review it after I see the chapter where the relationship deteriorates. I still like little Avelia the most [laughing evilly]

There's not much to say, I've been raising books before, sorry!

It's quite sweet, but the advanced combat power appeared too early. I thought that the Forbidden Curse would be invincible for a while. A lot of unfriendly units above the Forbidden Curse appeared in a dozen chapters (although they were in a dream world, but they could still cause damage). It would be better to move the appearance of this advanced combat power to a few dozen chapters later, and write more daily to consolidate the style.

The author writes very well, but... The update speed is not as fast as I can read (just kidding)

I don't care if you think it looks good or not, as long as I think it looks good.

Woohoo, I've been short of books for so long and finally found something good [crying]

What a very nice book

It's obviously pretty, but why are there so few people [face covering]

Haokang Aikang, come on Cake Cake Now that I've seen 269, it's not yet the teaching and training session that I've been thinking about for a long time. Quickly tell me which chapter the major changes begin. Take a look at the duration