Invasion of the Void Realm: I Stay Alive by Writing Carefully

The author's writing is quite good, but I personally prefer Zhou Yan. If Zhou Yan is not mentioned at the end of the review, I will not continue reading. Although Zhou Yan is a bluffing person, his character is not bad. Even though he was afraid of his teammates who were injured and lost their ability to fight, he went to save his teammates regardless of his own safety. When faced with the protagonist, he would not treat the protagonist as a bait. When the protagonist was running slowly, he took the initiative to go back and pull the protagonist with him. Xiaobai did not look back for the protagonist. When the living door appeared, Zhou Yan pushed Brother Shi into the door and was able to go back to save the protagonist. He not only saved the protagonist three times, but also gave the protagonist special items, and in the end did not let the protagonist return it to him.

After reading 200 chapters, overall, it's pretty good. Advantages: Each copy has its own originality, the overlap rate is low, and it does not give people the feeling of "I seem to have seen it somewhere". The characters are three-dimensional and full. The personalities, characteristics, and secrets of the main supporting characters are slowly unfolded as the plot progresses. The occasional bit of ink given to the secondary characters makes the plot more attractive without dragging on. The author said in the comment area that "every character is his own protagonist and has his own things to do." The author is working hard in this regard. Although some parts are a little awkward, the meaning is already there, and I can feel the growth of other characters. I hope the author can maintain it and not neglect the protagonist or other main characters. Disadvantages: Some of the plots are rather clichéd, and they always like to use the faults of certain characters to promote the development of the plot, which makes readers angry and disgusted with these characters. There is a copy that contains too many inner dramas, too much. Maybe I wanted to write something funny, but I didn't find it funny, but rather nagging. Generally speaking, the flaws do not hide the advantages. Brief comments on some characters (try to avoid spoilers): Lin Xuwen (Protagonist): A college student. Due to unknown reasons, his health is worse than that of normal people. He chooses a non-frontal combat pen as a contract prop, as in the title of the book. He has many strange methods and is stronger. He is kind-hearted, and influenced by Bai Xiao and Shi Lei, he is willing to save others when he can save himself. He always keeps a small book in his heart, but he "holds grudges" but never "revenges", except for bad guys. Zhou Yan: The protagonist's classmate, the main supporting character who appeared in the first chapter, is currently weak and has not yet contracted props. He is careless, bleats, squeals when in danger, likes to hug thighs, and is also a bitch. He sometimes ignores his own safety to save others. He is not a bad person, but he is very annoying. In the early days, the author also liked to use his careless personality to promote the plot, which made this character disgusting. Later, the frequency of this character's appearance was reduced. It's a pity. In the first dungeon and the protagonist rescued each other, I quite disliked them. Bai Xiao: The same schoolmate of the protagonist, a contract prop-assisted type, strong in strength but weak in appearance. He likes to hide himself, but he can't hide it for long. Always on the way to making money part-time. Xu Qiuyi: The protagonist's schoolmate, contracted item attack type, extremely strong, and can fight the dungeon boss head-on. What is the reason for being cold and indifferent inside the dungeon and rejecting people thousands of miles away, but being sunny and friendly outside the dungeon? Chen Donglin: Official personnel, defensive type with contract items, strong strength. He is free and easy and doesn't like newcomers who are holding back in the dungeon, but he will still provide some help. Shi Lei: The person who appeared in the first dungeon was tall and tall, and actively helped other newcomers. Other than that, he never appeared again. The author laid a foreshadowing for this mission later on, and I don't know whether to fill it in or not.

Nice! I just like watching this kind of protagonist be cautious and calculating. The kind of story where the main character is a hot-tempered character is fun to watch, but it quickly becomes boring. The rhythm is good, it's not just this arrangement or that arrangement, there's also fighting. The characters are also quite rich, everyone has their own personality, and there are no cannon fodder or villains that are very commonly described. For example, a woman who looks down on the protagonist is eventually slapped to death, or a man who is jealous of the male protagonist is slapped to death, or a man who does not listen to the male protagonist's advice is slapped to death. If such a large number of villains and cannon fodder really affects the perception, it will make people feel ordinary. I will continue to catch up on updates, come on! It's really painful to keep up with updates, and apartment 18 is also very slow to update.

The foreshadowing is okay, but I don't know what the point of the author's emphasis on the protagonist's crispy college student several times is. How can most college students be so useless? If you are weak, you can add some physical exercise plot. Repeating it many times will make you feel disgusted. I am currently reading the chapter about the castle. These chapters are too poisonous. Readers can skip them if they don't want to read them. The protagonist can be robbed of his space bracelet by a new girl who has ill intentions towards him and the protagonist already knows about it. . ? I don't quite understand it, I'll read it later and I will continue to follow up on the review.

I feel really good

It's okay, but one version is too short. Is there a longer one? Even if it is not too long, even a medium-sized book is fine. Many types are large or medium-sized, and there are small ones. But I hope the author can write better. The writing is good. How can I say this? Just put it in, it's over. Just very

The story is novel, almost no logical loopholes, group portraits

It is recommended to design the image of the "Wraith Spirit" to be more terrifying, give the protagonist more self-protection ability, and increase the world view.

Come on, it looks great 🤔🤔🤔

It's so well written. The protagonist's character is a bit quiet and doesn't like to talk. He looks ordinary but is surprisingly reliable.