Death by Hunger: Ping Sheng's Narrative

In fact, I posted this book review in November, but because the group leader poked some wounds in my past, I posted it again to gain a sense of presence and to waste his life for revenge. First of all, this if line is the most reasonable one in the original work. Liangsheng has been a bandit for many years, so he should get up early on that day to find Man Sui. Instead of staying in the inn and sleeping so late. Therefore, the starting point of this writing is in line with my psychological expectations and I particularly like it. The writing is reasonable and the language is plain. The characteristic of the language is the detailed description of the small details between the two (who understands Mansui's little thoughts, so cute). I think the most worthy of scrutiny is the ending where there are too many knives on the date, and the person doing the knives is a little confused. So much so that I specifically joined the group to criticize the group leader for why I saw fellow fans being stabbed like this. I hope the knife is so uncomfortable and the candy is so sweet that I feel like giving it 5 stars and keep on making more~ The updates are so damn slow and I'm so imitated by the fish next door, I'm going to explode with you.

The author's Liangsui is more in line with the character of the original work, and I think the emotional changes are handled relatively well (the author's writing style is indeed good). Some of the bad endings are indeed pretty cool. I don't know when we can see the author's Liangsui meet again. I really like several chapters of Liangsui's Steamed Bun Shop. It's a dull but satisfying daily life. It's a pity that in such troubled times, such days can't last long. I hope that when Liangsui meets again, the author won't finish it in a hurry and can write a little more about this kind of daily life. After watching a lot of "Hungry to Death" movies, I think this one is definitely in the top three, or even the first.

It's very good. It controls the psychology of the two people just right, but there are some things that need to be paid attention to such as time, but it doesn't hurt. It would be good if it can continue to be smooth like this [laughs] The story is about to reach its climax, so I would like to warn all readers, just hold back any bad plot that comes to mind, and don't say it out loud, in case the author really adopts the idea one day.

It's good. In fact, there is always an atmosphere of sadness among Liangsui. Especially after settling down, this atmosphere becomes more obvious. With this atmosphere, the characters are more full-bodied. The author is thoughtful.

The fanfics are very good. There are very few people who fail to follow up. The characters are also well developed. The inner conflict of Liang Sui in the front is very real, but after the sword is finished, it is time to give out the candy. It is very interesting. I hope the author will continue to persevere and never stop updating [Send my heart][Send my heart]

This is a Hungry Death fanfic that handles the complex emotions between Liangsui and Liangsui well. The book rewrites the big-hearted Liang after Mansui disappeared in the original work, successfully making up for the heart-wrenching regret of the fireworks. The two-person perspective enriches the inner emotional details of the two people, but prevents the plot from seeming protracted. The self-created characters have a good connection with the original team. Yu'er, Yixian and Jinzheng are all portrayed with flesh and blood and penetrating into the characters. The storyline is equally exciting, including the thrills and farewells of the swarm of giant insects, the stable life at the Eryue Mantou Shop in Chang'an, and the subsequent night attack on the defenders of Xi County, all of which are fascinating. It's a pity that the author has gradually lost the motivation to write, and this book has been updated monthly. I also hope that the author will be diligent in coding and finish the book as soon as possible. Compared with other Hungry Death fan fiction, this book ranks fourth in my heart (if it can be updated frequently, it will be number one [shy]). The portrayal of Liang Sui in the article is more consistent with the original work, which I like very much. Secondly, there are storylines, some of which are drawn from the original work and history, and some of which are original. It is good to be able to rewrite history without departing from the original work, and to incorporate your own inspiration.

The writing is very good, and the psychology of Liangsui is well controlled. The descriptions of trivial matters in life and supporting characters are simple and true, making people feel able to immerse themselves in the story. Finally, thank you to the author for letting me see such a wonderful story. Come on, stop updating the supplements [crying]

The writing is very good, I hope the author can continue writing [laughing] It's not enough. I want Liangsui to be well [almost crying]

This is the first time I have seen this kind of early encounter. There are too few now, and I am really looking forward to the subsequent plot. (In addition, the author's psychological descriptions in writing are quite excellent, and his good work deserves to be seen by more people) [Crazy][Crazy][Crazy] I've finished watching it, and I'm looking forward to the plot behind it. It's so good [love] [love] [love]

Haokan is one of the best Chinese-language novels I have ever seen.

Write a book review, everyone. I'll go, it's so beautiful, how come it's so beautiful [shy]

Super pretty, but be careful with knives [laughing][laughing][laughing][laughing][laughing][laughing][laughing]

I strongly opposed your husband's withdrawal from the literary world.

I have been looking for it for so long, and this is almost the one that best restores the characters, and the minute details and psychological activities are done in detail.

Maybe I don't have any idea about good books, but I think this is a good book. I think the characters are well created. Many fanfics are almost meaningless. This one is very good. The writing is very good and the plot is very good. It grabbed me firmly. The author is also very good. The ending should be he. Come on.

The writing is delicate enough, I must give it a 5-star praise [like]

Beautiful, looking forward to the follow-up.

Super beautiful, super beautiful

Looking forward to meeting Liangman [crying][crying][crying]

Support! ! Although I like to read sweet stories, if the beginning is all sweet, I might not be interested in the rest of the book. The transformation of Ryoho's relationship in this book is one of the most natural ones I've ever read in a fanfic, and I'm still excited to read it later! ! Mouth melon! ! Support oral hygiene! ! !

There has been a book shortage recently, so I read this one with gusto. It is my favorite among the fanfics. 😘So pretty

The description of the psychological activities of the two Liangsui is really good, and the writing style is very delicate. Please give your best to the author and keep it updated [please ask for more updates]

The psychology of the characters is very, very delicate, and the emotions are very rich and realistic. Come on, author! [Blowing kiss]

This kind of writing is really fascinating. It's an excellent article, and the cutting skills are top-notch. Whether it's a real knife or a heartwarming scene, I feel very emo[face-covering][face-covering][face-covering]

It's well written, but too lazy [shy]

Good looking, good luck to the author

It's pretty, it's quite pleasing to the eye anyway.

It's okay, just a bit bland

Okay, the plot is serious, not saccharine, nor too sharp.

The content is good, but it's a pity that it's not available all year round.