Online Games Are Coming, and My Teammate Is Actually Myself
网游降临，我的队友竟是我自己
- Status
- Ongoing
- Length
- 158k Words
- Genre
- Urban
- Subgenre
- Urban High Martial Arts
- Audience
- Male
- Updated
- 1y ago
- Source
- Fanqie
Stats
5.8Score
61Chapters
4.6kReads · all time
网游降临，我的队友竟是我自己
It was okay at first, but it felt boring when the clone suddenly started talking. The nature of the clone's speech changed and it became a word-count tool. This clone said something and the other clone said something. Maybe for the author, this kind of interaction can write more words, but it is very uncomfortable for the readers. It is best if the clone is unconscious and has no thoughts like a summoned beast and listens to the protagonist's thoughts. For technical issues, just add skills, such as awakening combat awareness, combat instinct, etc.
Well, it's really good. The main drawback is that the other settings are fine, which is the talent upgrade feature. It's too specific to the protagonist. Multiplying it by ten times for each level is too much. Even if you want to kill 100 million at the beginning, I have nothing to say. But if you start with 10, it will be the most later. Even if the entire Pangea continent is killed, I probably won't be able to get it together. This is very uncomfortable.
A few flaws, but not bad.
Very well written, no need for eunuchs