One Piece: Zephyr's Son

The book is okay, but the author has forgotten Uta.

I can't stop writing until now. I've read a lot of reviews, some of which I like and some of which I don't like, but it's a valuable experience for young authors. Although the data is a bit bleak, I'll try my best to keep writing. I hope that the first book will have an ending. At least it will be right for my friends who have always supported me. Something happened. I don't know what I wrote in the recent update. I'm very sorry. I will try my best to think about it later. The first book is about to reach its climax and the finale. I will keep writing. Thank you to the friends who have always supported me. Thank you 😘 😘 😘

This book is worth reading, the characters are well drawn and the structure is good. I would like to give a suggestion to the author to expand the development of space fruits. Be practical. For example. Cut off a piece of space to make your own base camp. Can live. No one can be found. It also has space to store things, so you don't have to worry about being mired in fantasy. One Piece itself is a fantasy. A gelatinous fruit turns into the sun god Nika. You think it is very imaginative. So it doesn't matter if it's a bit fantasy, as long as it's not invincible. 🤔

The book is pretty good, except for the fact that it doesn't work well if you don't touch any girls in the early stages (it has multiple heroines) and there are only Maginot and Hancock in the early stage. The station scene is also good (I remember that the early stage was almost the same as the other Saikaiwang). Basically, in the pirate world, everyone who has a favorable impression is alive, and people like Whitebeard Kaido have been saved. But for Luffy's awakening, there should be another one. After Luffy's 5th gear, Joeyboy's soul came out, and then he used the Soul Soul Fruit ability to collect Joeyboy's soul, turning Luffy into the sunny and funny person he was in the early stage.

It's a good book. It rewrote many of the main characters' bad life experiences in the original play, saved some people who were supposed to die in the original play, and changed most people's plot experiences into the plot the author hoped for, so it's okay to use a label on the homepage to make up for the regrets. The author looks at it from his own perspective and changes some of the plots he doesn't like to make up for his regrets.

5 Stars to support the author... Those who say that the mother came out to help is not helpful, I will directly criticize it! This is the most reasonable approach by the author! The most logical and humane way to write it... Let me ask you, a 3-year-old child locked her powerless mother at home to fight against the bad guys alone. What should the mother do after hearing the gunshot? Hiding at home and shivering, waiting for your 3-year-old child to protect you? Or rush out, even if you know you are useless, but you have to stand in front of the child even if you die? As a mother, thank you! Then, he said that the wife of an admiral cannot be like this... I would like to ask, what about the wives of the two top powerhouses Roger and Rocks? Did Roger's wife have no fighting ability, so she held back her life, then completely injured her body, and finally died in the hospital bed within a few years?

The content and plot are good, and the plot is very imaginative. One star is deducted because there are too many harems. Why don't you put all the women who have appeared in One Piece and even their names into the protagonist's harem? It's like you've never seen a woman before.

A very nice novel. I have read many pirate novels. This is the only one I have seen to the end. The plot is coherent and the description of the whole book is very clear. It can be seen in every chapter that the plot is written for the purpose of liberation.

The content is still good, and everyone supports it. It would be a pity if he stopped writing.

It's quite good, but it's not enough to watch after watching it.