What? the Female Ghost Taught Me How to Practice

This is the first book of a new author, Cultivation of Immortals. If the writing is not good, I would like to ask the leaders to give me some pointers. I can correct it if possible. The main thing is to accept the suggestions. I will work hard to write it [Working on the manuscript][Working on the manuscript][Working on the manuscript]

I almost gave up on the first part, but the second part is really exciting. Hold on, everyone, you won't be disappointed later. Come on, author, update soon.