A Charming NPC, He Is Driven Crazy by His Beauty

No, why did the male protagonist in the first world still have an emotional description when he saw the original female protagonist? Was he affected by the plot? (Okay, I'm more concerned about this. Besides, I saw that he was kissing Shou later, and he almost hit home plate. There is a feeling that if Yuan is not around, he can be with the original heroine. . . I'm also really curious. Originally, I had an emotional entanglement with someone else, but later fell in love with Shou. After the world plot was restarted, was he alone, or was he replaced by a slice of Gong? Maybe the author wanted to express the male protagonist's resistance to the plot in that paragraph? But in fact, there could be a little more psychological description, such as the disgust towards this inexplicable attention, and it would feel like I wouldn't care as much as I do now.

I really like the character design. For me, the character design is greater than the writing style. I can see that the author's writing is still very immature, but the writing is good. I look forward to improvement, but I would like to make a small suggestion (Laijia is not a guide to writing). The character design in F4 on the first campus should be a wealthy family, right? Which family is the leader in a certain city? There will be the richest man, right, or someone in power. The author seems not to exaggerate the life of a wealthy family enough. For example, in In the first twenty chapters, if you go shopping, as far as I know, VIPs can go to the box to watch the models on the catwalk [Laughing and crying] A wealthy lady will not be entangled in buying a bag. A 16w bag is better, and an 8.6W watch is really too cheap. The entry-level must be 15w or above. If it is the level described in the article, it is normal. If the first gift is not customized, it must be a limited edition of one million. (Mainly because it's really dramatic) In the first few chapters of the otome game, it's really incredible that 300,000 can be in the top three of the game list. Not to mention Shunhuonuan, a krypton gold game with a title of 300,000. In reality, some otome games may not be on the list if you charge a million. In this regard, I suggest that the author can look at various lists and refer to real-life luxury prices. There is no overbearing president asking the waiter to take the clothes. It's so exaggerated after the service, but it makes people feel that they are out of character. It feels like the ordinary rich second generation does not have the sense of top wealth that the author wants to describe. If you are afraid that it will be too expensive and unrealistic, you can actually not mark the price. For example, the piano in an aristocratic school cannot be only 86w. Even if it is not a Steinway, it has to be in the millions. The reality will only be more exaggerated [Sending my heart] The character design is really good

The author is so sincere and explains the formation of the protagonist's character in detail, so reasonable. In the Desert Island Survival Chapter, I don't know what the protagonist is going to do at all. While saying harshly in my heart, it's best to just stand by and watch what happened to him like in the previous life. On the other hand, a group of people with a good attitude tried to please the people who had hurt the original owner in the previous life, and finally ended up with them.

I jumped to read it. I feel that this is not a 1v1, but a 1v attack. The author's writing is not bad. I hope there will be more academy f5 type 1v1 next time. I like it. I give it to you with five stars~~~~

It's good-looking. I just like Xiaoyu's personality. He's so cute and silly. He doesn't take the initiative or refuse, and of course he's not responsible. Ha, she likes to tease people but doesn't realize she is beautiful.

I watched the first few worlds and they were quite interesting [give my heart], but I read the comments on abo that there is a childbirth plot in that world, and I suggest writing a title plot, including Lei, and I personally don't like this very much [face covering]

I feel that the first world is not very understandable. Among the other worlds, I like the world of vixen the most. [Cool] I want to find something similar. Also, I feel that there can be a side story to explain that Tang Jingxuan has always been with Lan Yu. That would be better. Otherwise, if it ends like this, it feels like Tang Jingxuan is dead.

How it ended, it gave me a feeling of one death and one life. That is, the zero was very conscious but the one was dead. So maybe after 0, I can only fall into memories, and I haven't written whether the following 0 will follow 0 again [face covering]

It's very interesting to watch, but if you want to watch it, I suggest you start watching it directly from the second world. The first world felt weird, and the most incredible thing was that the guys were a little unclean. Of the four guys, two had hugged other women, one had hugged another woman, and the other seemed to have a central air conditioner to help others talk. Then I found it quite annoying. Of course, many people also gave negative reviews because of this. In fact, I just want to say that it is very disgusting to attack the current Internet articles and this topic like this. However, the author later made no errors of this nature. Later, I thought the writing was quite good, but it was suitable for the kind of Beibei who likes plot, because the main line of each world is not the emotional line, but some career lines. And every line in it seems a bit frustrating. I think the author probably wanted to write a story about a happy career and love, but the writing wasn't very good. However, the author's imagination is quite good, and his writing style is a bit immature compared to other authors, but it is also super, super good-looking.

From a personal perspective, it's a very good book. It may suit my taste and eyesight. I also find some books with high ratings difficult to swallow.

It's beautiful, beautiful, really beautiful. I really like the big book [sending my heart]! Of course, my favorite small world is the "vixen in the world of immortality"! Really like this world! Very well written! ! ! [Blow a kiss][Flow a kiss][Flow a kiss] I hope to write more beautiful little worlds! [Sending Hearts] I will always support you! [Blow a kiss][Blow a kiss][Blow a kiss] I hope you continue to work hard! At the same time, you should also pay attention to your health~! [Sending Hearts][Sending Hearts][Sending Hearts][Blowing Kisses][Flowing Kisses][Blowing Kisses] I really like the big letters [Sending Hearts][Sending Hearts][Sending Hearts]

The overall writing is okay, but I feel that the writing in each world is a little rough and could be more detailed. I feel that there are many small points or the foreshadowing is not well expressed.

Super pretty babies [admiration] In the first world, I thought it was a mindless story, but it turned out to be such a twist! ! ! ! ! ! ! It's really beautiful! ! ! ! ! I hope the author will update more. Come on, come on! ! !

It's very interesting. The author is also trying his best to HE in every small world. Basically there are extra chapters together. The whole text is free of charge. Don't worry.

It's pretty cool, but there are a lot of repetitions. And why does it end with Tang Jingxuan sleeping while Lan Yu goes on a mission. I don't think this book is perfect, but it gives people a good feeling. Great support for the author.

It's very interesting, the content is novel, the plot has ups and downs, the baby is really lovable, the personality is cheerful and cute, come on, the author, work hard to get more updates.

What's super nice is that the cover would be nicer, and except for the aristocratic one in the first small world, the rest of it is still very nice. The last one about returning to the plane, I think it can be longer. Then there is the first small world. Zhang Jie is quite wrong. It looks quite confusing, but not serious. The rest of the world is very nice and super sweet. Anyway, these worlds revolve around the two of them. Although Gou fell asleep in the end, his soul may not always be silent in this world, and Shou continues to do tasks. They will definitely meet each other in the thousands of rivers. Regarding the situation of several 1v people, I all understand that they are fragments of Gou [laughing and crying], and why the vampire type is not there in the 1960s. I think there are quite a lot of votes. I also like these two types! ! ! !

I belong to the type where the more I write, the better I get. It was a little awkward at first, but then it went quite smoothly. A sweet, no-brainer. The rating is so low, it scares me. The last one I read had a rating of 9.4, But it was actually not as good as this one. If you like heartthrobs, you can read the sweet story, it's not a loss.

I like interstellar, cultivating immortals and fake young masters

Very nice! I love this kind of popular article about babies that the whole world loves!

It's really good-looking, there are no brainless characters, it feels like everyone is independent [love] [love] [love] [love] [love]

I half-read it, because I read half of each story event, and then skipped half to the ending. The baby fish is really cute, and 036 is also very good. The author's writing style is really good, not bad, and the article is very good. Their story is not over yet, and we can also look forward to the next story.

Baby Yu is so cute, and the plot is so interesting. It would be nice if each plane grew a little bit longer [Adoration][Adoration][Adoration]

I haven't finished watching it, but I think the third world is quite interesting.

It's very interesting, but there are too few chapters. I hope there will be more chapters next time🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰

A few people think it's pretty good-looking. After all, the rating is so low.

It's too little, not enough to read. I hope there can be more, it's quite nice. Please add more! !

Super invincible and beautiful. Recommended for everyone to watch👀

Love watching it, but remember not to think too hard while watching it.

Super beautiful, super recommended, heart-throb