Confession Was Rejected, the Show Is About to Begin

Okay, I just want to see the feeling of Su Yao who refuses the male protagonist's confession due to unclear feelings, but the relationship with the male protagonist is not too bad. Later, when I see that there are many women who like the male protagonist, I get anxious and regret it. It was obviously me first. (The relationships in most regret stories are too rigid and have annoying male characters. It doesn't even feel like watching the heroine regret it)

The original ending was too brutal. I couldn't accept it, so I wrote an ending that was in my heart [almost crying] [almost crying] [almost crying] After Luochen and Bai Shixuan returned from Tokyo, they spent a warm time in school. But the good times are temporary Later, Bai Shixuan, who was supposed to be cured, relapsed again, and she was forced to return to Tokyo for treatment. More than a year later, there was still no news coming back from Tokyo. During this period, Luo Chen kept asking the Bai family about Shixuan's situation. The answer from the Bai family was still that she was under treatment. Bai Shixuan's 20-year-old limit will soon be reached Luo Chen's fear became more and more intense, and his desire to go to Tokyo to find Bai Shixuan became more and more intense. Finally, Luo Chen also got on the flight to Tokyo. After a day-long flight, Luochen arrived at Tokyo Airport. The noisy environment at the airport was like Luochen's panic at this time. He wanted to find Bai Shixuan quickly and wanted to know Bai Shixuan's situation. According to Bai Yi's positioning, Luo Chen found the hospital where Bai Shixuan was located. As soon as he entered the door, the smell of disinfectant hit his face. Bai Shixuan, who used to be lively and cute, was lying lifelessly on the hospital bed and had not yet woken up. Luo Chen felt like his heart was piercing the knife at this moment. Then Bai Yi took the lead and said, "Luochen, you're here. Shixuan will be very happy to know about it." After saying that, he patted Luochen on the shoulder and pushed out the door, leaving space for the two of them. Luo Chen looked at Bai Shixuan on the hospital bed and was unable to speak for a long time. The thousands of words he had thought about before coming here could not be said at the moment. He quietly sat next to Bai Shixuan, held Bai Shixuan's little hand and said, "Sakurai-chan Sister, I came to see you. The cherry blossoms outside are blooming so beautifully. When you wake up, we will go see the cherry blossoms together and go out to play together." After saying this, Luochen's tears flowed out of the corners of his eyes uncontrollably and fell on Bai Shixuan's hand. A long time passed, during which Luo Chen unconsciously fell asleep beside Bai Shixuan. Maybe it was because Bai Shixuan was by his side that he felt a little at ease. Suddenly, Bai Shixuan felt that Luo Chen was beside her, and she slowly opened her eyes. Seeing that Luo Chen was really by her side, Bai Shixuan was very happy. She had always dreamed that Luo Chen would appear next to her. Looking at Luo Chen's sleeping face, Bai Shixuan didn't have the heart to wake him up, so she kept looking at him quietly. Luo Chen woke up after a while, looked at Bai Shixuan who had been looking at him and said, "Ms. Sakurai, it's really great that you're awake. I miss you so much." After hearing this, Bai Shixuan's face turned red and she said, "I miss Luo Chenjun so much too." Then Bai Yi and the doctor opened the door and came in. The doctor said, "It seems that the new medicine is working. Congratulations, Miss Bai, you are very lucky." Luo Chen couldn't control his tears after hearing this. He hugged Bai Shixuan and started crying. Bai Shixuan also smiled and hugged Luo Chen. A few days later, Luo Chen and Bai Shixuan were walking in the park holding hands. The cherry blossoms in this season were particularly beautiful. When the wind blew around them, the cherry blossoms fell with them, forming a beautiful picture. Bai Shixuan was the first to speak, "Luo Chenjun, we can finally be together forever. After I recover, we will go back to college together and do a lot of things together." Things I have done before." Bai Shixuan's smile was still so beautiful. The beautiful Luo Chen's eyes kept falling on Bai Shixuan's face for a long time and could not move away. "Okay, I am also looking forward to doing many things with Miss Sakurai, but before that I have one more thing to say to Miss Sakurai." Bai Shixuan seemed to have guessed what Luo Chen was going to say, and her face turned red. "Then what do Luo Chenjun want to say?" Luo Chen looked at Bai Shixuan firmly and said, "Shixuan, private woman, private life, private family." " Bai Shixuan hugged Luo Chen happily and said, "Luo Chenjun, I love you.これからもずっとにいさせてください. " Falling cherry blossoms act as a backdrop for the embracing lovers (End)

After seeing Chapter 50, I'll give it five stars first. The Su Yao line seems to be well written so far. It's not because the male protagonist has a girlfriend that he regrets it, nor is he being a licking dog. The male protagonist did not dislike Su Yao because he failed to express his love. When he was in the Bai family, he described Su as "the girl he likes" instead of "the girl he once liked". When he went to college, he said that Su Yao would not necessarily not fall in love. It is enough to show that both Su Yao and the male protagonist think that the other person has always been a good person, and if one of them takes the initiative, things will fall into place. However, the harem line is really difficult to open. The male protagonist has no cheats to make him rich and powerful, nor does he have the temperament of a scumbag. The female protagonists have no reason to be separated from him. I hope the author will think carefully about how to make a smooth transition to the harem. The author really prefers white, but unfortunately white is not very to my liking.

If I didn't read more, this book could be given 4 stars. If I could collect everything that needs to be collected, it would be worthy of five stars. The male protagonist is relatively sane. Bai's description is good, but Bai's inner feelings could be explained a little more to enrich the character. As for Yao, I hope to continue to naughty. It's good to read the story of [Shy] Jiang, who loves to watch naughty. I just don't understand how the male protagonist maintains a harem [laughs]

I've finished watching it. It's actually pretty good, but it ended unfinished for some reason. I like Bai Shixuan very much. She is just like Eri Yi, the perfect Bai Yueguang in my mind. I hope that all readers and authors will meet the Bai Shixuan in their hearts in the future.

What do you say about Su Yao line? It's just such a twist😋

Nice schoolbag But don't write a knife out of some little monsters who are suspected of eating five-eye fried noodles.

A bit interesting It's just that the heroine's journey from shyness to familiarity is still a bit stiff.

I just discovered that the author is actually second on the list of this book! [Cover face]

Well, it just hurts to see life span limited by disease [smile]

Just give me full marks for nothing The author's writing is good, but the be in the ending was too uncomfortable [crying][crying][crying]

Come on, give it to me. This book is very good. Come on, the author.

Bai Shixuan deserves five stars

I don't quite understand Su Yao's emotional line. I mean, the male protagonist saved someone and Su Yao fell in love with him [what]. Watch it again when you have time, and give it five stars if you understand it. (The first girl likes it very much)

This book is well written, and the heroines are all well portrayed. At the same time, there are no surprises and no stomachache in the book. It's just that Su's emotional line is a little unclear. I'll read it again when I have time. (My diploma is not very good, so the book review is not very good, but the book is really well written)

The story about multiple girls is quite interesting, and the author is good at writing it. I look forward to the relationship between Luo Chen and several girls in the future.

Emotions are portrayed very delicately

You must stick to it, Lao Deng

Who is the first female protagonist? Whoever the male protagonist is with first, the rest will be uncomfortable, right? OK is an acceptable ending

I love Eriyi. What you wrote looks so similar [crying][crying]

It must be five stars. I don't feel stomachache when I watch it. Even a picky person like me can watch it. The author works hard to update it and I would like to read it.

It's very beautiful. Can it be changed to five female leads and a senior Churou?

It looks good, please keep writing.

Good-looking, good-looking, good-looking, good-looking

Good-looking, good-looking, good-looking

Good-looking, good-looking, good-looking

(ʘᴗʘ✿)Hahahahaha good!

So sweet, my girly heart [shy]

Beautiful and detailed description

I came from the previous book [Smile] It's not too much to give a five-star review.