Fairy? Witch? Come Home and Take Care of the Baby!

I have read two of the author's books and know the author very well. The advantages of the book are obvious, and so are the disadvantages. The author is very good at writing emotional lines, especially the heroines. Each one is very attractive and basically has everything I want to read. I like every heroine in the two books, so there is no need to worry about this. The problem lies with the male protagonist. I understand that the emotional line needs some twists and turns. If the female protagonist wants to be perfect, she can only wrong the male protagonist. But you can't make the male protagonist too indecisive. Growth can be reflected by making mistakes and then reflecting on and correcting them. However, a male protagonist who is not decisive will destroy the sense of substitution. In addition, the male protagonist feels a bit unmatched. This book has been improved a lot compared to the previous one, but it is still a little bit. I hope that a little bit of writing can be spent to strengthen the male protagonist's (intelligence or achievements). @ Tired night without sleep

Among the many assembly-line novels, this one is really old-fashioned but has new ideas. It can be considered unique. Finally, there is a novel that seems to be almost non-toxic, logically connected, and the protagonist's IQ is not offline. The author is also actively replying. Keep it up, author. I love reading it! [Laughing] The author must persevere. It's not easy to find a good book.

Fortunately, I discovered another masterpiece in a poor place like Tomato. At first glance, you can see that the author has a lot of experience in writing, and the progress of the main plot is very stable and not slow (of course, many people who have read too many Tomato Industry cool articles will feel it is slow). Around the fifty chapters, everything that should be explained is also explained. The design of the heroine(s) is not too cliche, and the protagonist's life experience is also written in a very special way. Next, let's see what the story will be like as we slowly enter the big plot. Hin is good, come on~

First of all, this book is very provocative. It may not be suitable for those who want a mindless and enjoyable novel. The protagonist does not have the ability to kill without thinking. The highlight of this book is mainly the teasing of several female protagonists. The characters and portrayal of the female protagonists are very good. I personally like multiple female protagonists and don't like to read novels without female protagonists, but I have found many female protagonists who are either stallions or the same female protagonists. This book is one of the few in Tomato that has multiple female protagonists but is not portrayed in a stereotyped manner. The plot of this book is driven by the heroine. If you are going for the heroine and want to read Sweet Daily Life and Shura Field, this book is definitely a good one. Those who simply want to read Cultivation of Immortals may find the plot to advance slowly due to too many interactions. The problem with this book is mainly the plot at the beginning. My personal journey is that when I saw something like soul traveling, I thought that Fairy Qingmei's love was not for the protagonist, but for the original character. I immediately wanted to quit. After searching carefully, I found that it was similar to the evil god Yun Che who traveled through another world and then came back. Therefore, the original character is the protagonist and has not changed. Then I continued to watch, and overall it was relatively stable, but I always felt that some of the plots were too classic and cliched. However, as I watched it, I found that the author seemed to like to bury the foreshadowing in some very classic plots. I will tell you later that the plot of this classic is not demented, but deliberately expressed in this way and has a plan. Maybe it's because of these two points that it's easy to put readers off at the beginning. I endured it a few times and finally read on with the mentality that there was something wrong but not fatal. However, looking at the author's description of the little clam spirit at the beginning, I can still see that he has a certain character description skill. He can write very cute without speaking. I personally like this kind of detailed description of characters. I like the detailed description of characters like the evil god (of course it is a description of a girl, Tomato Shenhe misunderstood me). After Ziteng appeared, I felt that I was in a good place and the character creation was effective. As for the female protagonist, the characters are all likable, and there are many details of the character's language that can make readers feel comfortable. For example, when the male protagonist's clan members ask for help from her in times of crisis, Fairy Qingmei will deliberately look at the male protagonist without speaking and listen to his opinions, even if the male protagonist has not revealed any identity or strength to outsiders. At the same time, except for Qingmei, who has already met at the beginning, there is no plot in which the person around him is discovered to be talented and is taken away to develop alone. The male protagonist always has someone accompanying him, and he will not be lonely at all times. It is still very reassuring and comfortable to watch. I dare not say whether there are any problems with the plot design, but personally, when I like the female characters created by the author, I will no longer look at the plot with a critical eye. Of course, at least the basic logic I personally think is okay, at least there is nothing particularly surprising, it basically justifies itself. I then found a few more books, which were rated and read by many people, but they were too mindless, the basic logic was not good, and the character creation was a mess. I didn't understand why those books were so popular, so I came back to write a book review. In short, I think the summary of this book is that if you have the mentality of reading the characters of the second game, then this book is worth reading. For example, the emotional value mentioned by the second game is definitely full. Unfortunately, it is indeed easy to persuade people to quit in the early stage. This is also an indisputable fact. It is not wrong to give a low score, but it will be very comfortable after reading a little bit. If you have an appetite, it will take about an hour or two.

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It's very similar to a novel I read before, except that the world view of that book was too big and the author couldn't finish it and stopped updating it. When I see a book of a similar type again, it really feels like a reunion after a long absence. I don't want to follow the new book too fast. It's good to keep the current rhythm. In terms of multiple female protagonists, there are almost 5 female protagonists in just over a hundred chapters. The progress in the emotional line is too fast. For example, Ning Yuyao did not describe how she fell in love with the male protagonist. She just kept writing that she loves the male protagonist very much and can give everything. But for the readers, there is a lack of a process. Another example is Sister Lier, who shares the hardships with the male protagonist and helps the male protagonist to practice. I think the relationship generated under this situation is much better than Ning Yuyao's emotional line. Of course, my favorites are Ioto and Wisteria. Although they have less scenes than the previous two, they have distinct personalities. Especially Wisteria, what she did after seeing the memory of the male protagonist made her character more plump. She says one thing, thinks another, and behaves another. She is so cute [shy]. In a word: more updates, love to watch [admiration]

Please update the author a lot. I like this book very much. I hope the logic and storyline can be deepened. The writing style has a lot of room for improvement. Overall, the character creation and emotions are very good. You can add a little knife to arouse the reader's emotions. I will never forget this book [Blow Kiss][Blow Kiss]

Harem novels still have the same tone, but after reading this book, I still want to continue reading. Compared with some books on Tomato, they are at least smoother and more comfortable to read, making people want to continue reading. I hope the author can be more innovative and the subsequent plots should not be too cliche [Chigua]

It's pretty good (I like it personally). The main character of each heroine is well described. It's not like some harems where you don't know where to go after taking the others. The plot is quite funny and has many jokes. [Asking for explosive updates][Asking for explosive updates]

Nie Qingshuang and Mei Yu'er hope that they will accept them in the future. If these two do not accept them, the fun will be half as much.

It's a more traditional version of cultivating immortality, and is worth watching if you like emotional dramas. I prefer this kind of thing. Upgrading and clearing dungeons is secondary, but I hope the male protagonist will have absolute strength as soon as possible.

This book is okay for Tomato Harem, and Bu Jia can read it. Don't look at it, the bad point is that it is linked to the harem in the previous book, the protagonist is very tangential. Decide whether you want to watch it or not. Big Thunder does not have small poisons constantly, and the spirit of resistance to poison and resistance is exhausted. You may need plate armor to watch this. I will say goodbye first.

Nice. The portrayals of many female protagonists are very delicate I can't stand it anymore, I feel a little watery afterward. I can't quite understand it. .

The pace is quite slow, and to be honest it's not suitable for follow-up reading. It feels very satisfying to read 700 chapters in one go. There is a small chapter about every 30 chapters, which is updated monthly (). You can see that the author has an outline. I feel like I can watch one section in one go, but the updates are a bit too slow. At present, the heroines are probably Yao'er, Zhuli, Qingteng, Scorpion, and Maomao in the early stages. Then each heroine will bring one more, Yao'er will bring one, Ivy will bring out Wisteria (I really like this one), Mao'er will bring out Fox, and Zhuli will bring out one (or three? Only Scorpion is left, we can't bring those two fools...

The description of this emotional line is really wonderful! The author uses delicate brushwork to portray the endless twists and turns of love in a profound way. From the initial heartbeat to the subsequent entanglement and struggle, every emotional ups and downs are as if they happened in real life, making readers feel as if they are actually involved. This emotional tension not only shows the beauty and complexity of love, but also makes the characters come alive on the page. The author's accurate control of emotions makes the whole story full of appeal, making people immersed in it and deeply feeling the charm of love.

Overall, this book is okay, but there are still some flaws, the plot is draggy, and some places are a bit toxic. However, the image of the heroine is relatively well-shaped, and a few can be so three-dimensional, so they are considered relatively good harems. But the male protagonist is very frustrated, just like the male protagonists in the author's previous books. Those who want to read some exciting stories can leave. This book is more in line with my personal taste, but the 4 stars are mainly because the updates are a bit slow.

As a novel with multiple heroines, it is very qualified. Each heroine has a complete emotional line. The characters are delicately carved and vivid. The plot is also very interesting, unlike the boring and cookie-cutter fantasy plots.

The last time I saw a harem cultivating immortal novel with such comfortable writing and such vivid characters was Entertainment Spring and Autumn. Depending on how it develops in the future, the lower limit will definitely not be lowered. Come on, author.

It's really a girl's video, a bit frustrating. Maybe I haven't been able to eat the soft rice of a rich woman, so I can't empathize with that feeling. But it looks pretty good, and it's okay to pass the time. There are mostly love chapters, and I feel like I have a succubus physique.

The author is a rare novel about cultivating immortals. The writing is good and the jokes are appropriate. I personally like the plot that focuses on the emotional development of the male and female protagonists. It just hit my xp. The author works hard to update every day.

The look and feel of the book is good. It can be seen that it was written with thought. I personally feel that it is good. There are no bad points, but the progress is a bit too slow. Some unnecessary character plots can be omitted. The main plot should be pushed faster, otherwise there will be some ink stains. I am optimistic about this book [please update]

It's indeed quite good. There are so many articles about cultivating immortals, which I think are relatively good. But what makes me very strange is why such books are not popular. Am I the only one who likes to read them?

Very well written. The plot has ups and downs, is funny and novel, and every ending is reasonable and unexpected. Each heroine is successfully portrayed and has her own personality. The writing style is natural and unique, and the writing is very smooth. But the way the male protagonist handles some things is a bit awkward and contradictory, and the plot in some places is a bit nonsensical. To sum up, it is a good work.

It's okay, it's not Liu Beiwen (skip all the process), the plot needs to be polished, and there are some typos, but it doesn't affect the viewing. After the update, it will be stabilized and I can only keep the book. If you don't mind the insignificant points in it, you can have a good impression (for example, some people take dignity too seriously, I can only say that they are still too young and have experienced too little). The rating is not unique, you can think it's okay and don't care too much about other people's thoughts.

It's a good book. Tomatoes are rare. Each heroine has her own personality. The emotional line is described very delicately. The relationship aspect is very good. The protagonist's strength improves very slowly but the plot development is very compact, so the protagonist is always unable to deal with problems with his own strength. However, this may also be related to the soft-fan style of this book. Those who don't like it may feel that the protagonist is a bit aggrieved. Overall, it is a very good book.

I didn't win. This is a good author for the people. He can write such cute things about scorpions. The little fox also writes very well. It's better than the fox monster articles I specifically searched for. Good reviews! ! ! Nothing surprising! Highly recommended

Scanned, the writing is okay. As for the heroine, except for the little scorpion's mother, they are all qcqs, complete with sea, land and air, human wife and her master, cat, dragon sister, fox, scorpion mn, vine sister, female sword spirit. There should be new species in the follow-up. Except for being a bit sadistic, they are all good. They often rely on being seriously injured to deepen their relationship. Although they can be resurrected with the guarantee of divine power, they rely on eating soft food in the early stage, and rely on their father-in-law to be the best in the world in the later stage.

This is a rare good book in 🍅. After all, 🍅 focuses on fast pace. Readers who like to savor it slowly highly recommend reading this book.

I have to say that this emotional scene is definitely the best among the Tomato Harem novels. [Send your heart] [Send your heart] [Send your heart] [Send your heart] [Send your heart] [Send your heart] Although the first hundred chapters are a bit bad, the following ones are very good. But the villain is ridiculously strong, and the word "gou" doesn't seem to be in the protagonist's dictionary.

It is indeed written very delicately and has plenty of emotional drama. I suggest that the author not write about the Shura field too frequently and add some other dramas appropriately.