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I have read a lot of fictitious novels, and this one is rare and good-looking, but it is very sweet. The little brother is not well-behaved, but he can also have bad tastes. Wu Xie is not a holy mother, nor is he a little white flower. He can drink and be scheming. A blind man can do anything for money, but he can also pay back money. He does not owe any favors and is very noble. It's not that everyone is blind and believes in the heroine as soon as they meet, and they like the heroine as soon as they meet, but it's not like other heroines who always help but still get doubts, or it's a natural transition. The heroine is also super cute, she doesn't do anything at all, she's very well portrayed, she's just cute, but she's also very cerebral and clear-headed. Even a lot of holes have been filled in. Can you blow it up?

I really like the heroine. That's the feeling. I see that in other genres, the heroine is basically written as a sacrificial type. To put it bluntly, she is a nanny [vomit]. So the author writes very well, but can you write ten chapters a day? [Blowing Kiss] [Adoration] (The author said he wants to score points)

So pretty! ! ! I like this setting and the heroine has a great personality! I just want to find this kind of fanfic where the heroine is a player and has a real player mentality! Player ➕ System ➕ Hidden Identity ➕ Lao Jiumen ➕ Tomb Raider Notes is great! ! The author please update to the end! I love it so much! ! Tied

The writing is very good. If you are willing to copy it and read it several times from the beginning, you will find that the author has foreshadowing everywhere, and the more you read, the more interesting it becomes. For example: I bought the book with the blood of Qinglong at the beginning of the month, and later found out that the Queen Mother of the West was my biological mother. It's very much like my mother and I can't see my father. It's linked to Yue Yue's bloodline, and it's also the reason why Lu Shen took action against Yue Yue first. There are many other things. It's really a very good and excellent novel. It's enjoyable to read carefully, and it brings laughter to relax the stress of the day if you read it in detail. [Like] [Like] [Like]

It is in line with the original character design, not OOC, the heroine is not a virgin, not a nanny, all members are rational, have online IQ, have normal brains, are very strong, and have no female competition. I read a lot of articles about innocent virgins and idiots, about amnesia and idiots, about gangsters who want money, about rude and shameless people who get to the bottom of the heroine's secret protagonist group... I was so angry that I finally read a normal article. In this article, the personality charm of all members is online. Although tomb robbers commit crimes, their quality and accomplishment in the industry are also very high. It's a pity it's not finished. The logical emotional line is also very good. A sentence comes to mind... When a fish swims in the water, it has both its tail and its head.

Emm, actually the first few chapters are quite awkward, but it gets better later on, but the author may be a novice when it comes to writing. The heroine's character is a bit contradictory, and the plot is so tedious that sometimes it gives me a headache to watch, especially the part where she is in love with Er Erhong. The heroine is written to have the illusion of being a bitch, and her mood is uncertain, which is a bit hard to watch, but overall it's very interesting to read, so go for it!!!

I think it's pretty good. It's much better than some fanfics. The character design isn't too bad. This low score may be deliberately suppressed by the official.

It's good, but sometimes it may feel a little sluggish. Everyone's descriptions are very careful, but sometimes there are too many psychological descriptions, maybe half a chapter of a person's psychological description. The progress is very slow. I have seen more than 400 pictures, and it feels a little bit away from the theme of tomb robbing. But it's not much. After all, there are many private settings. In terms of emotions, it's okay so far, but there is little sense of pulling. There is little sense of pulling and ambiguity. For example, when the heroine kisses Er Erhong, it feels like just an ordinary kiss. There is nothing that makes people want to scream. At present, watching the heroine and these few kissing makes me not too happy, and I am a bit distracted. But the plot is really good, but it is really too slow! But if you don't abuse women, you won't abuse them at all. Let's see again.

It's so good and spicy♥️♥️♥️♥️This novel is written very rigorously and delicately, and the heroine is great. I like it so much. After reading it for a day, I would read and reread some passages over and over again. I haven't stumbled upon them yet. I have more than 60 books on the bookshelf of stolen novels. This is the first time I have seen such a novel that suits my taste. At the beginning of this year, I wanted to see the main character with high martial arts and normal emotional development, but I couldn't find it. I was really surprised when I clicked on it today. , I also read this book a few days ago but didn't care because it didn't get a high score. This book really deserves a high score. I have read more than 50 pages now, because it is so satisfying that I cherish every word of it. I still want to sigh again, how can the author write so well? ! ! 💕💕💕💕💕

The Queen Mother of the West is still alive, and she is also the hostess. She is also very smart and a king. She is so powerful. This kind of person can quickly master many things in modern society in modern life. However, the protagonist group is a tomb robber. This kind of empress character feels inconsistent. She also said that she wants to study the secret of Zhang's birth for her daughter. Both mother and daughter seem to be a little defensive, so they can only look behind. I open up the plot lines to various worlds and see what the heroine, Queen Mother Ma Xi, is going to do, but there is a feeling that she is not worthy of her. After all, she is a feudal empress. This is modern society, and she cannot be given another chance to establish a country. There is always a feeling that she is overqualified, but for now, it is still a book worth reading. I hope the author will continue to work hard and the story will become more and more exciting.

It's really good-looking, and the characters are not OOC. It's my favorite among the stolen fanfics I've read so far. The writing is very good. The heroine in this article is finally not a selfless dog-licker, nor is she a pitiful little girl who suffers from a deep hatred and suffers a lot of wounds. The heroine is strong in all aspects, loves herself the most, and doesn't abuse her. Every couple of CPs are very good, and she has lived a life of chasing updates every day.

At present, it seems that this is not a nanny story. The heroine is more egoistic, because she does not understand the original work of Pirates Bi, she just has a good impression of it and is not busy with it. Wang Yueban is also a good brother, and his relationship with his sister is also very good. And the characters in it are not OOC! ! Very comfortable to watch. The characters in it are not silly and sweet, they are very realistic, feel very consistent with the original work, and are not OOC. For example, Wu Xie is a hormone. For example, the campus goddess is very beautiful and the boys around her admire her. Wouldn't she also pay attention and like her? Anyway, so far I think the emotional description is pretty good. There is no such thing as falling in love at first sight and falling in love to death, it has to be her. Oops, even though I've only read a few chapters, I felt really comfortable reading it. It's rare to see such a comfortable novel. Moreover, the heroine only cares about her own family and does not act as a nanny for the protagonist group. But it must be different from the original work, otherwise, how else would it be called fan fiction? The heroine is neither a good person nor a bad person. It's just that I've been a little mentally exhausted by the truth and lies. (At the beginning of the month: A contradictory good guy, not completely bad guy, hiding a faint sense of death and a slight sense of madness. God knows, this is really a sweet heroine.) After having the system, it has the flavor of the fourth natural disaster. There are a lot of foreshadowings and private settings that can be savored carefully. The emotional line is very delicate! ! Especially the heroine is slow, and it's really nice to watch when the other party is confused and even in the Shura field. The people inside are all flesh and blood and very smart. ❗This overall article tends to be enjoyable! ! A charming Otome harem type. The female protagonist is awesome, strong in martial arts, and smart. It's a cool story about strong women. But sometimes I can be a little bit sadistic, emotionally. Oops, I can't help it. The first one to see the Queen Mother of the West is so handsome. She is a big woman! ! The beginning of the month is Fatty Wang's spiritual support, and Fatty is also the spiritual focus of his Niu Niu. ❗I got a little tired of seeing Siguniang Mountain in the middle period. Emotionally, it's like a Shura field, and it's a bit tiring to fight back and forth. Then there are fewer highlight moments for the heroine. Fatty appears less often because clouds appear. The female protagonist has also become more tender. In the early stage, it was quite satisfying to treat them all as NPCs and not care about their feelings, but hey, maybe this is the price of having multiple male protagonists. Then this book is more specific and will describe the psychological state and psychological description of the characters. It's just that the pace is slower. And those two systems are so annoying. It always passes without saying a word. Although the plot requires it, it has been 10 years. . . . A little annoying, a little frustrated. Well, there may be some reasons, which will be explained later. If you don't come back, you'll die. Hey ε=(´ο｀*))) Well, I'm a little tired of it. How can I put it, the plot development is too tedious. If you skip reading, it is easy to miss a lot of things. .

It's really rare to see an author who has delved so deeply into the original work. I cried to death [sending my heart]. Moreover, the description of the characters from different angles is very smooth, and there is nothing too abrupt. The interpretation of the protagonist is very good, and there is no awkward routine. In summary, I have found a treasure, but there are not many updated chapters. When I first saw it, I wanted to abandon the article, but luckily I didn't.

It's really, really good-looking. The characters are drawn in detail and three-dimensionally. The logic makes sense. The development of events is also very natural. The author's writing style is really good. It's one of the few great-looking stolen fanfics [Love][Love][Love]

My favorite tomb robber fandom is one that doesn't lick, is not a follower, has reasonable intensity, is logical, and has its own life and ideas. There were a lot of descriptions in my mind at the beginning, but it got better later on. I have finished updating the first copy of the paradise, and I hope that the subsequent plot will not collapse and can be updated stably.

It's beautiful, I really like the author's thinking The plots are very reasonable. You won't fall in love at first sight. They all have experiences. I love them so much (⑉°з°)-♡ The heroine's character is also very good (✪▽✪)

It's very interesting. I read this novel on two different accounts. Anyway, I really like it. It's also one of the higher ranking among the many stolen fanfics I've read. I really like the heroine's character, and the Iron Triangle King Fatty's involvement is also very important, and the plot is not that awkward. The importance of the heroine's character in my heart is still rising. I really like to watch this kind of normal heroine, not the kind of pervert, nor the kind with a mother's heart (it's not that I hate perversity, it's just a bit uncomfortable to watch)

It's a good read. To be honest, I haven't even read this book yet. Today I suddenly thought of giving it a rating. The main problem is that it's too slow. It feels more delayed as you get to the back. However, the teacher has written so much and the writing style has always provided a lot of foreshadowing. Most of the characters are not OOC to the point of being unreadable. I think it's a very good one among fans, it's still okay🉑

My wife is very detailed in her analysis of the life background, psychology, and behavior of each character. She also helped me read the original work in full, and only focused on the various fan stories to learn more about the lives of the original characters [love] (although some people say that there are too many behavioral and psychological descriptions, but I think the rhythm of the plot is very good. After all, the full text is free, so if you don't like it, you can just move your finger and scroll through it) The heroine pretends to be a sweet girl, but only shows her heart to the people closest to her, such as her brother. In the early stage, she treated the plot characters as NPCs, and used everything for their benefit just to show favor to them and let them protect her brother. (I ate this brother-sister relationship. Before I clicked on it, I thought how delicious it could be? I was wrong when I clicked on it. The half-year-old boy tried his best to bring up his sister. She has already become his spiritual support. It feels a bit crazy.) The female protagonist is confused because she is afraid of being an unnamed cannon fodder. She has lived in fear of being killed and replaced since she was a child. She has a sense of calm madness. She treats various NPCs who pass by the plot, which is equivalent to the fourth natural disaster. If they block the road, they have to be chaotic and neutral. I haven't seen it yet and I don't know what kind of growth there will be in the middle and later stages (looking forward to ✌︎' ֊') The pace of the emotional line is a little slow for me. The plot description is quite sweet, but there are too few kisses. XX I hope there will be more hehe

Although I just arrived at 158, I'm still urging you to update. Jiejiejiejiejiejiejie So beautiful! It's our fourth natural disaster super moon🌙baby Cute contrast Qingqin is so delicious Hey hey, love is a bit cumbersome, but if you knock it down well, I like this kind of occupying the peak✨🌷💜 Our entire party is overjoyed▲～

It looks so good! ! ! ! ! ! I want to express my deep feelings to the author ᕬ ᕬ (˶•ꈊ•) ｡ﾟﾟ･｡･ﾟﾟ｡ ⁽⁽ଘ/͡ つ~☆ ﾟ . ｡ ﾟ ﾟ･｡･

The material is very novel, and the writing is very lively and interesting. Our new baby (づ￣ ³￣) is very good. He doesn't know the heart of the Holy Mother, and there is no filter that is too big for them. It is very popular. The author is also very nice and approachable. He always responds to our comments and updates frequently, three times a day. Love you, big [blowing kiss]

It's super beautiful, the heroine is very sensible, and the hero doesn't fall in love with the heroine directly at the beginning, but has a gradual transition process. I really like the author. I hope there will be no interruption in updates, and I hope the author will update 100 chapters every day. [Laughing][admiration]

Damn, please add Xie Jiu to the CP. His secret love character is really cool, but it's a pity that Xie Jiu has many concubines. Is this sand sea chapter a bit too long? It's so boring to watch

It's well written. Everyone's writing is very touching and feels very exciting. A few of them didn't make Nenniu Wufang's writing look like silly and sweet writing! [Send heart][Send heart][Send heart]

So pretty! And the heroine is not weak either. I just hope that there are as many chapters as possible in Er Er Hong. I really like the relationship between Er Er Hong and the heroine. [Adoration][Adoration][Admiration] The writing is great, especially the cps of Lao Jiumen and Er Erhong. I look forward to returning to the anti-Japanese scenes of Lao Jiumen.

It's really super good. I feel like I've read a lot of fanfics, but I still like this novel. But I have a very, very small suggestion for the author, which is to put some summaries or words at the end of each chapter instead of at the beginning of each chapter, because this will affect the reading experience, but overall it's really beautiful. Good luck, author!

Super good-looking, the heroine is not a love-minded, she is brave and resourceful, highly recommended, keep up the good work, the author

It's been a long time since I've seen such an orthodox heartthrob! A good heartthrob is a heartthrob who can be attracted by both men and women, but it is too unintelligent to have multiple people talking and listening to a book. Zhang Haike and Wang Can appeared as children for the first time, and all the voices after that were children's voices. It was so painful. The same was true for Chen Pi, who always sounded like an old man hahaha

It is a very special fanfic. The difference from other fanfics in the same series is that this one uses a lot of third-person explanations to explain the psychological changes of the characters, changes in the current situation, etc. It is very detailed, there are no twists and turns, and there is no deliberate suspense. The mental journey of each character is very complete, and the characters are also very three-dimensional. It is really good. It is rare to see this kind of fanfiction that does not ignore any character! ! ! ! Believe me, as long as you watch it, you will fall in love with every character, because they are described in detail and plumply.