[Double male protagonists] Gentle, tolerant, guiding type, yandere, paranoid, double-standard green tea subject
"Ah Mo, what you taught me... I will learn from it."
——The ends of Xie Nanchu's eyes were slightly red and pitiful, but the fingers hidden behind his back were stained with blood.
Shen Mo crossed into "The Swordsman" and became an unknown character in the book.
He has been obsessed with Dongfang Bubai in the book for many years, but he never expected——
When Dongfang Bubai was a boy, he was actually a poor little boy, Xie Nanchu, who was bullied by everyone.
"I want to hide him and let him grow up well."
Shen Mo decided to protect him and prevent Xie Nanchu from becoming the lonely and paranoid Dongfang Bubai.
But soon, he discovered that something was wrong——
Xie Nanchu said in front of him:
- With tears in his eyes, he bit his lip in grievance: "Ah Mo, they bullied me again..."
- Holding his sleeves with her fingertips, she said in a soft voice, "I'm scared when you're not here."
Xie Nanchu in front of others:
Stepping on the enemy's bones, he tilted his head and chuckled: "You deserve to touch him!"
Shen Mo: "... I was raised crookedly?"
Reader comments
They are really suffering [crying] [crying] A little bit cruel [crying] Nan Chu is the cutest cub, he is not dirty at all [crying] [almost crying]
Nan Chu met his moon, and rescued him and redeemed him step by step... Nan Chu's kindness only belonged to his moon, and he did not allow anyone to tarnish his moon. His moon stood unswervingly by his side, tirelessly showing his love for him... Dongfang Bubai still appeared, but the trajectory of fate changed because of Shen Mo's appearance. I hope Nan Chu and his moon grow old together, happiness 99
Pure love [I'm about to cry] [I'm about to cry] They are so miserable. Whenever life is peaceful and comfortable, what comes is the coming darkness... The heart is tortured and hurts [crying] [crying]
Ah Qing is really sad. [Crying] Wen Yanqi lost his lover, it hurts to death...
Damn, let's just say, is Shen Mo from the top or from the bottom? If I don't know, I will have trouble sleeping and eating.
As I followed this novel to the end, sadness, happiness, helplessness, and all kinds of emotions flooded my heart. I have many beautiful memories, and the most unforgettable one is every moment I saw Nan Chu and A Mo happily together. Seeing them happy, I felt like I was happy too. As a reader, this is actually my first time reading this type of novel. However, seeing such a wonderful work in my first attempt really makes me feel very grateful to the author. Thank you for letting me see such a wonderful plot, brilliant characters and detailed descriptions! ! ! (My expression may be inaccurate in some places, please forgive me)
It's really interesting. It's the first time I've seen this kind of fanfic about Dongfang Invincible with two male protagonists. When I watched the TV series before, I particularly liked the character of Dongfang Invincible.
The storyline is really different. I met Dongfang Bubai in his youth, protected him, and felt like a nurturing person.
I particularly enjoyed watching the tug-of-war between the two protagonists. The ending was so touching. The last sentence, "We have a family," really made people cry.
I am very impressed by the author's writing power, which makes people fall deeply into it. After reading it, I can't calm down for a long time. I hope the young couple will always be 99
[love][love][love]
Save me from the book shortage
The book also depicts Dongfang Bubai's inner world very delicately.
From his initial wariness of Shen Mo to his gradual dependence and trust, every emotional change can be traced.
It also cleverly incorporates elements of the original work, such as the power struggles and overt and covert struggles of the Sun and Moon God Sect, all of which are cleverly interspersed, making the whole story full of freshness.
That's it. Jujujujuju looks great. I really don't like writing reviews. This is the first time I write such a long review for this book. The first thing I do on Tomato every day is to see if our Nan Chu baby has been updated. I originally didn't like the gentle and aggressive hexagram, so I just relied on the author's baby to give me a wave of comfort [blowing kisses]. Real friends, I'm done reading it. Although you may find the first two chapters a bit boring, the background laid out by the author is very reasonable. It's not the kind of inexplicable time travel. Later, I will talk about the relationship between A Mo and Nan Chu step by step and the changes in their relationship. And I really like the beautiful, strong, cold and arrogant beauty who only reveals her true feelings to you... I really recommend you to watch it! ! !
This book is indeed very good-looking. He wrote a different Dongfang Invincible. Everyone inside is of flesh and blood. There are sweet love, sour emotions, and stories of life-and-death abuse. Through these words, people can feel a real world, as if they have really redeemed the lonely and paranoid Dongfang Invincible, and reshaped a new Dongfang Invincible with love. Although both protagonists are on the road to injury and injury. But there are also many sweet stories. Sweet and sour. Really nice to look at. The author keeps up the good work. I just hope it won't be too cruel in the next book. My favorite part is when A Mo exchanged blood for Nan Chu, it was the most heartbreaking moment, but in the end, because A Mo exchanged blood for Nan Chu, Nan Chu was able to go to A Mo's world, transforming from illusion to reality. Perfect finish closure.
It's very beautiful. I want to keep watching it. The young couple has such a sweet relationship, but their life experience is a bit bumpy, but it's really very beautiful! I just wanted to read this book when I opened Tomato recently, and I look forward to more excellent works from the author [Sending my heart]
If I want to see a sweet modern side story about a young couple, I beg the author [send my heart][send my heart][send my heart]
Super pretty! So sweet, so sweet. Ah Chu is white and cut into black. It is a glutinous rice dumpling with a black heart. Every time I see Ah Chu acting coquettishly towards Mo Bao, my heart becomes soft. I hope that the plot will not be cruel. The little girl cannot stand the cruelty. At the sweetest moment, I am caught off guard by a big knife😭
Shen Mo and Nan Chu are both top-notch sweethearts, I really like them. He likes Nan Chu, who is willful, angry, crying and laughing. Although life treats him badly, he still works hard to live, which is really great. He likes Shen Mo, who is kind, gentle, super capable, and has a strong core. Nan Chu is his bottom line. At first, I was still thinking about what Shen Mo could do as a doctor in the world of martial arts. The facts tell me that he can really do a lot. He is an amazing person. He really created a home for Nan Chu, taught him how to be a man, and gave him the courage to embrace life. Nan Chu is really a very cute baby. When reading novels, I often wonder why fate is so bad for him and how a person can suffer so much. Whenever he sees a happy place, he has to worry about what bad things will happen next. It is really difficult for him to live a plain and happy life. But in that place, there are poor people everywhere, the two brothers from the Tong family, the three from the Yun family, Shu Yu, and shopkeeper Wen, there are so many that the Little Balsam Gua Concentration Camp belongs. It's funny to say that I was originally not the only person who doesn't read abuse stories. I misunderstood the author's sentence "last resort" in the comment section for "no abuse", so I came in with confidence. After I fell in love with the protagonist, I couldn't leave. I still can't figure out how I got it wrong in the first place and became so blind. Maybe this is fate, after all, apart from making me feel distressed, it is really good-looking, and it is really not sad in terms of the emotional line, there is no blood, no misunderstanding, both of them have long mouths, it is really good, and the plot line also has a good ending in the end, spreading flowers! Finally, I would like to give my best wishes to Shen Mo and Nan Chu~ The little confectioner and Dr. Shen will have a good life, live a happy life, and grow old together!
Wow, author, your writing is really beautiful, very beautiful (๑•.•๑) But why are there so few ratings? ⊙ω⊙Every time, I gave them sweet dates and a stick. I thought their lives would be better, but every time they gave me a slap in the face, it was okay. In the end, they were both really good. It's a pity that there is no extra story. I also want to know how is the other world? But if there is no extra chapter, can the author make one?
A rare Dongfang Invincible fanfic.
The male protagonists Shen Mo and Nan Chu are really a pair of little bitter gourds, sweet but a little cruel. Fortunately, they are still together in the end. Woohoo.
The author's writing style is very nice, and he handles many details very well ~ It's great, great, great, great
Will the protagonist become stronger later? I've watched half of it and it seems like the main character has always been an ordinary person.
Mo's doting on Chu seemed to have no reason and no bottom line, which was enviable. Mo Zhen is the first salvation. When will the initial illness be cured? I'm anxious
This world, and I am fortunate to be an audience of their stories, do not focus on one emotional line to write, but are real group portraits, with the epitome of everyone's joys, sorrows, and joys, so they appear real. Past experiences are blended into the present, but they do not completely determine the present. All the choices, persistence, or abandonment of the characters in the book make them more vivid and closer to me.
I came across this book by chance a month ago on a recommendation. It is indeed a wonderful story. Whether it is the emotional development between the two protagonists or the various characters in the world, it is very delicate. The fighting scenes are also described as if you are actually there. The author's writing skills are really solid. It's a rare good book in Tomato. It's a pity that I didn't read it earlier [face covering]
The author's writing style is really good, and it is no exaggeration to call it a treasure. Although I know that life in Jianghu cannot always be peaceful, every time I encounter ups and downs in the plot, it still makes my heart hurt [I'm about to cry] [I'm about to cry] I hope that the protagonists and babies will have a better time in the future
So will Nanchu still become Dongfang Invincible? ? ? It's all tied, but there's no sign of it yet [grievance] [grievance] [grievance]
I came to comment after reading Chapter 100. The first chapter is very sweet, and the author's writing style is also very good, and I can feel very delicate emotions. However, the mood of the Gu worm plot around Chapter 100 is too low, which makes people feel very uncomfortable. Personally, I feel that since he will become the Invincible Dongfang in the future, he should not feel so serious and desperate, but several times it gave me the feeling that the male protagonist was watching him dying, so I feel that this is the reason why the score is relatively low. This part is too depressing.
Don't know why the rating is so low. But it's really pretty. People who watched it cried and laughed. , I really feel for our little Nanchu. , But fortunately he met the best. Lin Mo. I rarely give reviews, but this one is pretty cool.
Suddenly I saw it was around 4 o'clock in the evening
I've been reading it for a while, and the writing style is beyond words. It really makes people's eyes light up every time. It's amazing! ! The portrayal of the characters is also realistic! ! I love it so much😍I hope you can keep writing! ! Like it very much! ! !
It's very well written, but the middle part is really sad, so sad, so sad. I really love and hate the author at the same time. I love the author for giving them souls, but also hate for writing them so miserable. It's really sad. And Ah Qing, I can't talk about it anymore. I want to cry when I talk about it. I went to eat and cried so much that I starved to death. Really feel bad
The writing is super good, and the characterization is also very detailed [Adoration]. The sweetness is just right, but the knife was also caught off guard. When I cried, it was heartbreaking [crying]
So wonderful! ! ! ! The main article is highly recommended! ! !
The plot is not watery at all and the content is very substantial! ! !
It's good to read. I'm waiting for your sweet article from the author.
Saved me from the book shortage [laughing]
Very pretty! ! ! Update soon! ! The best book I've seen on Tomato recently! ! ! ! ! ! ! Don't stop! ! ! ! Looking forward to the ending! ! ! ! ! ! !
The writing is very good, I just hope there will be more "girl" scenes later on. It would be better if he could realize his ideal.
OMG don't let go of this ancient text. Great love. The author writes very smoothly and authentically.
The story structure is very reasonable, has a strong sense of fate, and the description of emotions is particularly delicate~
They are really suffering [crying] [crying] A little bit cruel [crying] Nan Chu is the cutest cub, he is not dirty at all [crying] [almost crying] Nan Chu met his moon, and rescued him and redeemed him step by step... Nan Chu's kindness only belonged to his moon, and he did not allow anyone to tarnish his moon. His moon stood unswervingly by his side, tirelessly showing his love for him... Dongfang Bubai still appeared, but the trajectory of fate changed because of Shen Mo's appearance. I hope Nan Chu and his moon grow old together, happiness 99 Pure love [I'm about to cry] [I'm about to cry] They are so miserable. Whenever life is peaceful and comfortable, what comes is the coming darkness... The heart is tortured and hurts [crying] [crying] Ah Qing is really sad. [Crying] Wen Yanqi lost his lover, it hurts to death...
Damn, let's just say, is Shen Mo from the top or from the bottom? If I don't know, I will have trouble sleeping and eating.
As I followed this novel to the end, sadness, happiness, helplessness, and all kinds of emotions flooded my heart. I have many beautiful memories, and the most unforgettable one is every moment I saw Nan Chu and A Mo happily together. Seeing them happy, I felt like I was happy too. As a reader, this is actually my first time reading this type of novel. However, seeing such a wonderful work in my first attempt really makes me feel very grateful to the author. Thank you for letting me see such a wonderful plot, brilliant characters and detailed descriptions! ! ! (My expression may be inaccurate in some places, please forgive me)
It's really interesting. It's the first time I've seen this kind of fanfic about Dongfang Invincible with two male protagonists. When I watched the TV series before, I particularly liked the character of Dongfang Invincible. The storyline is really different. I met Dongfang Bubai in his youth, protected him, and felt like a nurturing person. I particularly enjoyed watching the tug-of-war between the two protagonists. The ending was so touching. The last sentence, "We have a family," really made people cry. I am very impressed by the author's writing power, which makes people fall deeply into it. After reading it, I can't calm down for a long time. I hope the young couple will always be 99 [love][love][love]
Save me from the book shortage The book also depicts Dongfang Bubai's inner world very delicately. From his initial wariness of Shen Mo to his gradual dependence and trust, every emotional change can be traced. It also cleverly incorporates elements of the original work, such as the power struggles and overt and covert struggles of the Sun and Moon God Sect, all of which are cleverly interspersed, making the whole story full of freshness.
That's it. Jujujujuju looks great. I really don't like writing reviews. This is the first time I write such a long review for this book. The first thing I do on Tomato every day is to see if our Nan Chu baby has been updated. I originally didn't like the gentle and aggressive hexagram, so I just relied on the author's baby to give me a wave of comfort [blowing kisses]. Real friends, I'm done reading it. Although you may find the first two chapters a bit boring, the background laid out by the author is very reasonable. It's not the kind of inexplicable time travel. Later, I will talk about the relationship between A Mo and Nan Chu step by step and the changes in their relationship. And I really like the beautiful, strong, cold and arrogant beauty who only reveals her true feelings to you... I really recommend you to watch it! ! !
This book is indeed very good-looking. He wrote a different Dongfang Invincible. Everyone inside is of flesh and blood. There are sweet love, sour emotions, and stories of life-and-death abuse. Through these words, people can feel a real world, as if they have really redeemed the lonely and paranoid Dongfang Invincible, and reshaped a new Dongfang Invincible with love. Although both protagonists are on the road to injury and injury. But there are also many sweet stories. Sweet and sour. Really nice to look at. The author keeps up the good work. I just hope it won't be too cruel in the next book. My favorite part is when A Mo exchanged blood for Nan Chu, it was the most heartbreaking moment, but in the end, because A Mo exchanged blood for Nan Chu, Nan Chu was able to go to A Mo's world, transforming from illusion to reality. Perfect finish closure.
It's very beautiful. I want to keep watching it. The young couple has such a sweet relationship, but their life experience is a bit bumpy, but it's really very beautiful! I just wanted to read this book when I opened Tomato recently, and I look forward to more excellent works from the author [Sending my heart] If I want to see a sweet modern side story about a young couple, I beg the author [send my heart][send my heart][send my heart]
Super pretty! So sweet, so sweet. Ah Chu is white and cut into black. It is a glutinous rice dumpling with a black heart. Every time I see Ah Chu acting coquettishly towards Mo Bao, my heart becomes soft. I hope that the plot will not be cruel. The little girl cannot stand the cruelty. At the sweetest moment, I am caught off guard by a big knife😭
Shen Mo and Nan Chu are both top-notch sweethearts, I really like them. He likes Nan Chu, who is willful, angry, crying and laughing. Although life treats him badly, he still works hard to live, which is really great. He likes Shen Mo, who is kind, gentle, super capable, and has a strong core. Nan Chu is his bottom line. At first, I was still thinking about what Shen Mo could do as a doctor in the world of martial arts. The facts tell me that he can really do a lot. He is an amazing person. He really created a home for Nan Chu, taught him how to be a man, and gave him the courage to embrace life. Nan Chu is really a very cute baby. When reading novels, I often wonder why fate is so bad for him and how a person can suffer so much. Whenever he sees a happy place, he has to worry about what bad things will happen next. It is really difficult for him to live a plain and happy life. But in that place, there are poor people everywhere, the two brothers from the Tong family, the three from the Yun family, Shu Yu, and shopkeeper Wen, there are so many that the Little Balsam Gua Concentration Camp belongs. It's funny to say that I was originally not the only person who doesn't read abuse stories. I misunderstood the author's sentence "last resort" in the comment section for "no abuse", so I came in with confidence. After I fell in love with the protagonist, I couldn't leave. I still can't figure out how I got it wrong in the first place and became so blind. Maybe this is fate, after all, apart from making me feel distressed, it is really good-looking, and it is really not sad in terms of the emotional line, there is no blood, no misunderstanding, both of them have long mouths, it is really good, and the plot line also has a good ending in the end, spreading flowers! Finally, I would like to give my best wishes to Shen Mo and Nan Chu~ The little confectioner and Dr. Shen will have a good life, live a happy life, and grow old together!
Wow, author, your writing is really beautiful, very beautiful (๑•.•๑) But why are there so few ratings? ⊙ω⊙Every time, I gave them sweet dates and a stick. I thought their lives would be better, but every time they gave me a slap in the face, it was okay. In the end, they were both really good. It's a pity that there is no extra story. I also want to know how is the other world? But if there is no extra chapter, can the author make one?
A rare Dongfang Invincible fanfic. The male protagonists Shen Mo and Nan Chu are really a pair of little bitter gourds, sweet but a little cruel. Fortunately, they are still together in the end. Woohoo. The author's writing style is very nice, and he handles many details very well ~ It's great, great, great, great
Will the protagonist become stronger later? I've watched half of it and it seems like the main character has always been an ordinary person.
Mo's doting on Chu seemed to have no reason and no bottom line, which was enviable. Mo Zhen is the first salvation. When will the initial illness be cured? I'm anxious
This world, and I am fortunate to be an audience of their stories, do not focus on one emotional line to write, but are real group portraits, with the epitome of everyone's joys, sorrows, and joys, so they appear real. Past experiences are blended into the present, but they do not completely determine the present. All the choices, persistence, or abandonment of the characters in the book make them more vivid and closer to me.
I came across this book by chance a month ago on a recommendation. It is indeed a wonderful story. Whether it is the emotional development between the two protagonists or the various characters in the world, it is very delicate. The fighting scenes are also described as if you are actually there. The author's writing skills are really solid. It's a rare good book in Tomato. It's a pity that I didn't read it earlier [face covering]
The author's writing style is really good, and it is no exaggeration to call it a treasure. Although I know that life in Jianghu cannot always be peaceful, every time I encounter ups and downs in the plot, it still makes my heart hurt [I'm about to cry] [I'm about to cry] I hope that the protagonists and babies will have a better time in the future
So will Nanchu still become Dongfang Invincible? ? ? It's all tied, but there's no sign of it yet [grievance] [grievance] [grievance]
I came to comment after reading Chapter 100. The first chapter is very sweet, and the author's writing style is also very good, and I can feel very delicate emotions. However, the mood of the Gu worm plot around Chapter 100 is too low, which makes people feel very uncomfortable. Personally, I feel that since he will become the Invincible Dongfang in the future, he should not feel so serious and desperate, but several times it gave me the feeling that the male protagonist was watching him dying, so I feel that this is the reason why the score is relatively low. This part is too depressing.
Don't know why the rating is so low. But it's really pretty. People who watched it cried and laughed. , I really feel for our little Nanchu. , But fortunately he met the best. Lin Mo. I rarely give reviews, but this one is pretty cool. Suddenly I saw it was around 4 o'clock in the evening
I've been reading it for a while, and the writing style is beyond words. It really makes people's eyes light up every time. It's amazing! ! The portrayal of the characters is also realistic! ! I love it so much😍I hope you can keep writing! ! Like it very much! ! !
It's very well written, but the middle part is really sad, so sad, so sad. I really love and hate the author at the same time. I love the author for giving them souls, but also hate for writing them so miserable. It's really sad. And Ah Qing, I can't talk about it anymore. I want to cry when I talk about it. I went to eat and cried so much that I starved to death. Really feel bad
The writing is super good, and the characterization is also very detailed [Adoration]. The sweetness is just right, but the knife was also caught off guard. When I cried, it was heartbreaking [crying]
So wonderful! ! ! ! The main article is highly recommended! ! ! The plot is not watery at all and the content is very substantial! ! !
It's good to read. I'm waiting for your sweet article from the author.
Saved me from the book shortage [laughing]
Very pretty! ! ! Update soon! ! The best book I've seen on Tomato recently! ! ! ! ! ! ! Don't stop! ! ! ! Looking forward to the ending! ! ! ! ! ! !
The writing is very good, I just hope there will be more "girl" scenes later on. It would be better if he could realize his ideal.
OMG don't let go of this ancient text. Great love. The author writes very smoothly and authentically.
The story structure is very reasonable, has a strong sense of fate, and the description of emotions is particularly delicate~