[Completed] [No black male and female protagonist, no female rivalry, ghost hunting story, dead male protagonist (villain)]
As soon as Xu Ling came through the book, the villain grabbed his neck. The system said: "He is your target." Xu Ling: "Your uncle, I don't want to capture the villain."
System: [Welcome to the world of the immortal cultivator novel "Demon Demon". There are three rules for passing through calligraphy. One, it is not allowed to dismantle the official match. Second, major plot points in the book are not allowed to be changed. Third, do not violate the settings in the book. Now, you can proceed with your strategy mission.
Xu Ling was unwilling to do so. Who would be willing to attack someone who had just killed him? So the system placed her when the villain Cheng Ai was five years old. The five-year-old Cheng Ai looked like a cute dumpling with milk, but Xu Ling kicked him away and picked up a stone to hit Cheng Ai on the head.
System: "Cannot kill capture target!"
Xu Ling: "The villain in this book was killed by the protagonist at the end, so no matter what I do now? He won't die, right?"
Reader comments
It's beautiful and novel. The heroine doesn't feel sorry for the raider from the beginning. She takes revenge when she has a grudge. She is really a normal person. However, it feels like the heroine is about to collapse and keeps wanting to go home. She still can't. The system is like a human trafficker and has only a little use. Idiot.
Come on, it looks good!
It looks good, but I strongly hope that Senior Brother Qi Zhen can have more roles. I like him. If the heroine insists on having an official match, I hope that Senior Brother Qi Zhen can be in the role. Also, don't make Cheng a crazy person who kills anyone who the heroine talks and laughs with. This is really shocking, so I hope there won't be [Sending Hearts]
The author is great, it's very interesting, and it's one of the better articles among the fairy tales. Is it possible for the heroine to bring the hero back to modern times at the end? I'm old and can't bear the abuse. Or maybe a double ending is fine. [Adoration] [Adoration] [Adoration] [Adoration] [Adoration]
Okay, I'm done spreading the flowers😢 Because I followed so many serials in a row, my memory is a bit intermittent.
Let's talk about what I like first - ① In the early stage, the female protagonist is the lower position in the male protagonist's emotional line due to lack of fighting power. In the later stage, the male protagonist will dedicate everything to what he does.
②The male and female protagonists of the original book (Yang Shu? Lin Ruqing? The names are easy to remember) are really good characters. They have always stood by the heroine's side to support her. They are very responsible. Unfortunately, the words about the sworn relationship between the five people are a bit short, because I expected the five people to have a deeper bond. I like Zhao Tang's character.
Disadvantages:
❶The male protagonist seems to be excluded from all relationships from beginning to end, and his impression is not deep. I can't say I hate it, nor can I say I like it, so I don't have much feeling for the abusive male protagonist. 🤔It would be better to say that when I read this book for the first time, I felt that the male protagonist did not have much role, nor did he get rid of his own destiny. He was strong but seemed to exist entirely for the female protagonist. The most memorable points are probably the four conflicts with the heroine.
Originally considered an advantage, why do I think it is a disadvantage? Because according to my point of view, it is too sad. There is only this meaning of existence. The flat person among the written characters is not happy for the heroine when abused, and the love line is also a single arrow, which is even considered a career line for the heroine. It is more like a coming-of-age story for the heroine than a romance, but it is not considered a big heroine. This is partly because the heroine did not gain strength through her own efforts and just finished the story in the book in advance. Moreover, the psychology of the characters also feels too generalized. I personally think that the relationship between the male and female protagonists should be more twisted ((()
So this is actually a complete message home(?) Or more like a pretty painful nightmare.
The character of the heroine is so immersive. I like it so much. The process of completing the task is not all smooth sailing and is full of ups and downs. It is so exciting. You are so good at writing and it aroused my interest! ! ! I hope you won't interrupt the update [blowing kiss]
This book is very distinctive, each character has a unique highlight, and all the characters have high IQs. For example, the senior sister Li Xiangzhu is calm but lively, and is very responsible as a senior sister; the heroine Xu Ling is just and kind, has a smart mind, sees problems thoroughly, and thinks things through; the second female lead Lin Ruqing is also just and kind, and her IQ is not inferior to that of the female lead; the second male lead Yang Shu, although she seems dissolute and rude at first, but In fact, he is just and brave, he can correct his mistakes when he realizes them, and he has an above-average IQ; the "villain" Cheng Gai also has good intentions and an above-average IQ; his master, Tiankui Sect Master, not only accepts death, but also cares and cares for Cheng Gai; the small character Zhao Tang is also resourceful, has an open-minded and optimistic attitude, and has a perseverance spirit. When you come into contact with her, you will find that she is very worthy of being liked. The whole book has a clear structure and rich emotions. It is a good book.
Where is the Douyin account of the human trafficking subsystem? Send it out and let me expose it online. It's true that you are born under a unified system but not raised under a unified system.
It can be seen that the author has deep magic power, but it is not that kind after all. The female protagonist is White Lotus, and the male protagonist is something like that. He's not brainless. Well, it's not easy to find a book that I can read now [crying]
I really like the subject matter of this book. I feel that it leaves a lot of room for my imagination. It is different from what I have read before and it also makes me think. It is very well written and I can feel the reasons for the heroine's emotional changes during that period.
It's good to read. The author will update it soon. I hope the heroine can go home soon, forget everything for a while, and live a good life [Sending Hearts]
First of all, I'll give it to readers who want to read it. It's a bit long, so you can simply look at the contents of the previous numbers (it's a summary) and then some of your own understanding and thoughts.
1. I have very upright views and am very kind-hearted, so I am not suitable for babies who like those who are decisive and decisive.
Because the protagonist almost traveled through time just after finishing the college entrance examination, and there are some environmental reasons that will cause internal friction.
But I don't think this is a shortcoming, because such a protagonist is very normal and in line with normal people, very real, like a living person (it is precisely because she is in line with normal people that she will be soft-hearted, and will have shortcomings and lose control of her emotions)
2. Regarding the protagonist's emotional line, it is considered open-ended. Personally, I think it is he (the two were not together when the protagonist was in the world of cultivating immortals, so there is some progress in the extra story)
In the later stage, I found the male protagonist quite similar to the protagonist's dog. I was very happy to see it (although it has something to do with the protagonist's darkening, I quite like it when the protagonist turns dark)
3. In the early stage, the protagonist is in a lower position, so his feelings for the male protagonist are more complicated. I won't go into details about the spoilers. However, you can refer to some romance redemption articles.
4. The system actually has another background (the system brings him here without the consent of the protagonist and counts him as abducted, and he should take revenge later. The protagonist has this idea)
5. There will be some typos in the author's writing (because the three-dimensional work may be busy, but it will be corrected and it is not a big problem)
6. Because the author is a novice, his writing may not be particularly good, but the author is quite serious and it can be seen that he is very careful.
(Some personal views and ideas are not accurate. If you have different ideas and opinions, please feel free to discuss them together)
A very good book, much better than many 9-rated books. The kind of redemption story that starts with being nice to others is boring if you read it too much. It makes you drool when you see a handsome man. It's hard to finish reading. The heroine is right. Why do you have to sacrifice your love to conquer others in order to go home? The story of a girl who graduated from high school was abducted by the system's human traffickers and she tried to find a way to return home bit by bit. It's great.
It's so good. It's so hard to find a book that I like to read. I used to read novels without skipping a beat of this one. The author must work hard to update. I beg you, author, please stop updating. 😧
If I were the heroine, I would have gone crazy and wanted to die
It made me feel bad to see the second senior brother being fucked like that by that princess, and I also understood why the heroine in other novels traveled through time and became a female supporting character to prevent the original heroine from disturbing the senior brothers who were practicing the ruthless way. It's so well written that I really want to cry. You're such a great author.
Very nice! The heroine is very emotional and reminds me of Li Susu [crying]
The writing is great, and the heroine has a very upright mind, unlike other novels. The emotional portrayal is also more delicate.
New book, I will be an old fan from now on🌚
It's quite good. I hope it doesn't stop me from reading. I've read several books that have made me feel sick.
There are still very few novels that are perfect in all aspects, and the details are a bit awkward. Overall, they are quite interesting, but I can't stand them anymore.
Looks good, but I'm still a little confused
I love reading it. I hope the author will update 100 chapters every day [shy]
It looks good. I like it if the main text is not together. The extra chapter also gives everyone a good ending. The author is also trying to make up for the mistakes. Finally, let's give Cheng Qiao and Xu Ling a similar open ending. Of course, my open ending is of course he [top post]
The plot has ups and downs, and the subject matter is relatively novel among the novels I have read. But I really like Qi Zhen, but it is a pity that he is not the male protagonist.
It's so good, I can't get enough of it [Blowing Kisses]
It's okay to write more.
It's okay, come on
We are all writers
The baby is well written. Although I am clumsy, the baby is really great and smart [Like][Blow kiss]
Different settings. If you are tired of looking at those settings, take a look at this.
If I get my attention, I will continue to follow up! I'm looking forward to the follow-up, author, come on!
The writing is super beautiful, beautiful and beautiful😍
It's beautiful and novel. The heroine doesn't feel sorry for the raider from the beginning. She takes revenge when she has a grudge. She is really a normal person. However, it feels like the heroine is about to collapse and keeps wanting to go home. She still can't. The system is like a human trafficker and has only a little use. Idiot. Come on, it looks good!
It looks good, but I strongly hope that Senior Brother Qi Zhen can have more roles. I like him. If the heroine insists on having an official match, I hope that Senior Brother Qi Zhen can be in the role. Also, don't make Cheng a crazy person who kills anyone who the heroine talks and laughs with. This is really shocking, so I hope there won't be [Sending Hearts]
The author is great, it's very interesting, and it's one of the better articles among the fairy tales. Is it possible for the heroine to bring the hero back to modern times at the end? I'm old and can't bear the abuse. Or maybe a double ending is fine. [Adoration] [Adoration] [Adoration] [Adoration] [Adoration]
Okay, I'm done spreading the flowers😢 Because I followed so many serials in a row, my memory is a bit intermittent. Let's talk about what I like first - ① In the early stage, the female protagonist is the lower position in the male protagonist's emotional line due to lack of fighting power. In the later stage, the male protagonist will dedicate everything to what he does. ②The male and female protagonists of the original book (Yang Shu? Lin Ruqing? The names are easy to remember) are really good characters. They have always stood by the heroine's side to support her. They are very responsible. Unfortunately, the words about the sworn relationship between the five people are a bit short, because I expected the five people to have a deeper bond. I like Zhao Tang's character. Disadvantages: ❶The male protagonist seems to be excluded from all relationships from beginning to end, and his impression is not deep. I can't say I hate it, nor can I say I like it, so I don't have much feeling for the abusive male protagonist. 🤔It would be better to say that when I read this book for the first time, I felt that the male protagonist did not have much role, nor did he get rid of his own destiny. He was strong but seemed to exist entirely for the female protagonist. The most memorable points are probably the four conflicts with the heroine. Originally considered an advantage, why do I think it is a disadvantage? Because according to my point of view, it is too sad. There is only this meaning of existence. The flat person among the written characters is not happy for the heroine when abused, and the love line is also a single arrow, which is even considered a career line for the heroine. It is more like a coming-of-age story for the heroine than a romance, but it is not considered a big heroine. This is partly because the heroine did not gain strength through her own efforts and just finished the story in the book in advance. Moreover, the psychology of the characters also feels too generalized. I personally think that the relationship between the male and female protagonists should be more twisted ((() So this is actually a complete message home(?) Or more like a pretty painful nightmare.
The character of the heroine is so immersive. I like it so much. The process of completing the task is not all smooth sailing and is full of ups and downs. It is so exciting. You are so good at writing and it aroused my interest! ! ! I hope you won't interrupt the update [blowing kiss]
This book is very distinctive, each character has a unique highlight, and all the characters have high IQs. For example, the senior sister Li Xiangzhu is calm but lively, and is very responsible as a senior sister; the heroine Xu Ling is just and kind, has a smart mind, sees problems thoroughly, and thinks things through; the second female lead Lin Ruqing is also just and kind, and her IQ is not inferior to that of the female lead; the second male lead Yang Shu, although she seems dissolute and rude at first, but In fact, he is just and brave, he can correct his mistakes when he realizes them, and he has an above-average IQ; the "villain" Cheng Gai also has good intentions and an above-average IQ; his master, Tiankui Sect Master, not only accepts death, but also cares and cares for Cheng Gai; the small character Zhao Tang is also resourceful, has an open-minded and optimistic attitude, and has a perseverance spirit. When you come into contact with her, you will find that she is very worthy of being liked. The whole book has a clear structure and rich emotions. It is a good book.
Where is the Douyin account of the human trafficking subsystem? Send it out and let me expose it online. It's true that you are born under a unified system but not raised under a unified system.
It can be seen that the author has deep magic power, but it is not that kind after all. The female protagonist is White Lotus, and the male protagonist is something like that. He's not brainless. Well, it's not easy to find a book that I can read now [crying]
I really like the subject matter of this book. I feel that it leaves a lot of room for my imagination. It is different from what I have read before and it also makes me think. It is very well written and I can feel the reasons for the heroine's emotional changes during that period.
It's good to read. The author will update it soon. I hope the heroine can go home soon, forget everything for a while, and live a good life [Sending Hearts] First of all, I'll give it to readers who want to read it. It's a bit long, so you can simply look at the contents of the previous numbers (it's a summary) and then some of your own understanding and thoughts. 1. I have very upright views and am very kind-hearted, so I am not suitable for babies who like those who are decisive and decisive. Because the protagonist almost traveled through time just after finishing the college entrance examination, and there are some environmental reasons that will cause internal friction. But I don't think this is a shortcoming, because such a protagonist is very normal and in line with normal people, very real, like a living person (it is precisely because she is in line with normal people that she will be soft-hearted, and will have shortcomings and lose control of her emotions) 2. Regarding the protagonist's emotional line, it is considered open-ended. Personally, I think it is he (the two were not together when the protagonist was in the world of cultivating immortals, so there is some progress in the extra story) In the later stage, I found the male protagonist quite similar to the protagonist's dog. I was very happy to see it (although it has something to do with the protagonist's darkening, I quite like it when the protagonist turns dark) 3. In the early stage, the protagonist is in a lower position, so his feelings for the male protagonist are more complicated. I won't go into details about the spoilers. However, you can refer to some romance redemption articles. 4. The system actually has another background (the system brings him here without the consent of the protagonist and counts him as abducted, and he should take revenge later. The protagonist has this idea) 5. There will be some typos in the author's writing (because the three-dimensional work may be busy, but it will be corrected and it is not a big problem) 6. Because the author is a novice, his writing may not be particularly good, but the author is quite serious and it can be seen that he is very careful. (Some personal views and ideas are not accurate. If you have different ideas and opinions, please feel free to discuss them together)
A very good book, much better than many 9-rated books. The kind of redemption story that starts with being nice to others is boring if you read it too much. It makes you drool when you see a handsome man. It's hard to finish reading. The heroine is right. Why do you have to sacrifice your love to conquer others in order to go home? The story of a girl who graduated from high school was abducted by the system's human traffickers and she tried to find a way to return home bit by bit. It's great.
It's so good. It's so hard to find a book that I like to read. I used to read novels without skipping a beat of this one. The author must work hard to update. I beg you, author, please stop updating. 😧
If I were the heroine, I would have gone crazy and wanted to die
It made me feel bad to see the second senior brother being fucked like that by that princess, and I also understood why the heroine in other novels traveled through time and became a female supporting character to prevent the original heroine from disturbing the senior brothers who were practicing the ruthless way. It's so well written that I really want to cry. You're such a great author.
Very nice! The heroine is very emotional and reminds me of Li Susu [crying]
The writing is great, and the heroine has a very upright mind, unlike other novels. The emotional portrayal is also more delicate.
New book, I will be an old fan from now on🌚
It's quite good. I hope it doesn't stop me from reading. I've read several books that have made me feel sick. There are still very few novels that are perfect in all aspects, and the details are a bit awkward. Overall, they are quite interesting, but I can't stand them anymore.
Looks good, but I'm still a little confused
I love reading it. I hope the author will update 100 chapters every day [shy]
It looks good. I like it if the main text is not together. The extra chapter also gives everyone a good ending. The author is also trying to make up for the mistakes. Finally, let's give Cheng Qiao and Xu Ling a similar open ending. Of course, my open ending is of course he [top post]
The plot has ups and downs, and the subject matter is relatively novel among the novels I have read. But I really like Qi Zhen, but it is a pity that he is not the male protagonist.
It's so good, I can't get enough of it [Blowing Kisses]
It's okay to write more.
It's okay, come on
We are all writers
The baby is well written. Although I am clumsy, the baby is really great and smart [Like][Blow kiss]
Different settings. If you are tired of looking at those settings, take a look at this.
If I get my attention, I will continue to follow up! I'm looking forward to the follow-up, author, come on!
The writing is super beautiful, beautiful and beautiful😍