
Becoming a Knight's Journey to Another World
成为骑士的异界之旅
- Status
- Completed
- Length
- 483k Words
- Genre
- Eastern Fantasy
- Subgenre
- European Fantasy
- Audience
- Male
- Updated
- 10mo ago
- Source
- Fanqie
Stats
310Reads
190Chapters
19Listens
26.8kReads · all time

成为骑士的异界之旅
I feel that the writing is good and makes people want to read it, but there are many problems. The biggest problem is that the introduction and content do not match. I thought it was about the restoration of the country, but it turned out to be a story about time travel and becoming a knight. I suggest you add in front of the introduction what kind of novel it is, whether it is a harem or pure love, what is the protagonist's personality, etc. There are no big problems in the plot, but it may be a bit too classic. Overall, I still like it very much, and I hope the author will continue to work hard.
See if there are any missing girls in the later stage. If you give away a girl, just give it 1 star. If there is no problem, give it 5 stars. It is best to add some yandere elements. Alas, I feel like I have to give it to a girl, so I'll give it 1 star.
It would be better for the protagonist to destroy the world by himself and get rid of the constraints of the immoral humanoid world forever.
It's okay, but why are most of the people talking about girls? Why do I feel something is wrong, author? Isn't this a plot for a female actor?
Well, the novel is pretty good. I recommend reading it.
Hmm... It looks okay 4⭐️
I can't be the only one who feels uncomfortable watching this [smile]