[Two male leads + secretly dark, psycho-in-the-making disciple × transmigrated-into-a-book shizun-bottom who only wants to survive + System + devoted to each other + happy ending]
Shen Qingxuan woke up inside an unfinished cultivation novel, as the cannon-fodder shizun who had already dug out his villainous disciple’s spiritual roots and thrown him into a mass grave.
The System appeared and ordered him to fix the plot and stay alive!
Shen Qingxuan was devastated. He’d already done every terrible thing there was to do. How was he supposed to fix anything now?
But for the huge reward, he went to the mass grave and carried his disciple back. Keeping his secret identity under wraps, he nervously raised the boy into a sweet, well-fed young man and frantically built up his favorability, hoping that when the truth came out, he’d at least be allowed to die quickly!
At first, whenever Shen Qingxuan coughed up blood, his disciple would risk his life to find rare treasures and present them to him with eyes full of adoration. “You saved my life, Shizun. It’s only right that I give my life for you.”
Later, he begged humbly, “Shizun, you weren’t lying to me, right? Could you keep lying to me?”
Finally, he went mad and laughed wildly. “Shen Qingxuan, since you don’t want my love and respect, how about you try my hatred?”
The idea is very good, and the author's writing style is also great, but there is not enough foreshadowing. The narrative pace in the middle and later stages is too fast. It can be seen that the author has a lot of ideas, but the amount of information in each chapter is too large, which makes people a little confused. Overall, it is a very good novel. I recommend reading it d(^^*)
Not bad, I just hope I don't dig too many holes and leave them unfilled!
It was quite interesting in the early stages, but after Chapter 70, I felt that the pace suddenly became faster, and there may be some disconnection (?). A lot of things happened all at once (and it seemed to have been planned in advance), and there was no foreshadowing in the past. The amount of information exploded. I agree with a statement in the comments. It was a bit confusing and hard to understand. But overall it's okay (?) If you like this character design, you can check it out
It's beautiful, but why is there no one there?
Very good looking, awesome! An ending I didn't expect
I think it's pretty
Needless to say, it looks good, take a look
Good-looking, good-looking, super good-looking
Good-looking, nice person
A bit messy, but nice