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Beg! Star! Dome! Iron! Road!
Is there any book about Star Dome Railway? Although it's hard to be stabbed in the back, the plot is still very good. I want to read it! *٩(๑´∀`๑)ง*
Ask the Original God to Be Betrayed
The male protagonist is hurt by love
Are There Any Bengtie Novels That Reveal Walter's Identity?
There Are No More Masterpieces in Comprehensive Comics. If You Don't Accept It, Let's Fight.
Are There Any Books About Star Rail That Cannot Replace the Original Protagonist?
Single Heroine, Traditional Fantasy, Sweet, Thank You! ! ! ! ! ! ! !
High EQ: Beng Tie Has No Masterpieces. Low EQ: I Recommend Some Good Books by Beng Tie.
Want to watch something similar to "Star Railroad: Is this Civet the Envoy of Fertility?" Book.
I Want to Read a Star Dome Railway Fanfic! ! ! !
Written with thought
Tomato🍅is the Single Heroine Lonely?
Is There No Bengtie That I Can Watch?
Want to Read a Really Interesting Book?
I want to watch content similar to "Beng Tie: Eating the Space Station in the First Three Minutes". You, come here, yes, it's you. Are you fed up with the same routines over and over again and want to find novels that are truly refreshing? Now that you have met it, take it and see it
What's Going on with Bengtie Lately? Nine Out of Ten Fanfics Have Been Scrapped, and One Is Unfinished.
I want to read a book like "Star Iron: Only after my death did Liu Ying understand love (Flowing Firefly)". Ah Qing is better😭😭😭
I've Recently Become Obsessed with Star Iron, Do You Guys Have Any Recommendations?
I want to read a book similar to "Star Railroad: Organization IX".
If There Is Any Broken Iron, Don't Hook the Stone!
Looking for a Book Where the Main Character Can Transform into a Half-Dragon
Is There Any Book About Someone Who Is a Star God or an Envoy? I Have a Serious Book Shortage!
I want to read a book similar to "Star Railroad: The Order of Nothingness Just Wants to Die".
Come and Have a Few High-Scoring Hits on Miyou. I'm Already Hungry.
As long as it's from Miyou, it's okay.
Looking for Quality Fandom from Bengtie! ! !
It's Very Necessary to Play Beng Beng Beng Characters in Other Worlds. I'm Starving to Death.
Genshin Impact Understands! Looking for High-Quality, Original Stories with Good Stories.
I want to read a book like "Genshin Impact: I turned into a yandere because I liked her too much".
Please Recommend Novels About Wearing Heavy Armor, Knights, and Defense.
The True Bengtie Fanfic Does Not Need to Regard Destiny as a Fantasy of Cultivating Immortals.
Want to watch something like "Beng Tie: What should I do if Ms. Black Tower looks at me like this?" Content.
Looking for a Book Where the Main Character of Beng Tie Is the Envoy of the Star God
Xingtie, Single Girl, Super Sweet Novel, Weiweidao (Such as This One)
I want to read a book similar to "Star Railroad: The Fish Sword Master is Taken in by Fu Xuan".
A book well worth tasting and reading carefully. At first I didn't want to click in because the title didn't look very appealing. But after reading a paragraph, I felt that this book was very different, the writing was smooth, and the overall look was very comfortable. There are many plots that I have conceived, and many places do not deviate from the setting. The author also has his own ideas. Finally, I summarize three points. 1. It does not follow the plot of the game. This is a good comment. Too many books follow the plot of the game and I am tired of reading it: 2. The protagonist's character is well developed, he has his own beliefs and pursuits, and he is happy yet serious. 3. The writing is solid and many details are described in detail and vividly. And the content presented is positive and uplifting.
The front looks good, but the back is a bit bland. Although it is very bumpy, it becomes uninteresting because it is repeated too many times. As a single-female protagonist, there are too few emotional scenes. I would say that the emotions come naturally, but it feels like the beginning and the end are written, and the process is not. Some of them are the insect plague war that is briefly mentioned, or she is following her around but has no sense of existence. I am a little disappointed that Liu Ying is not particularly comprehensive in shaping. Literary works still need a lot of process of emotional foreshadowing. Without details, it will not be sweet at all, as if real life has entered the marriage tomb. There are indeed quite a lot of original plots, but they seem to be a little obsessed with adding various original cavalry supporting characters. When writing the cavalry at each stage, there will be a lot less appearances of the protagonist and Liu Ying. On this basis, card pool characters will also be added, which makes the relationship between the protagonist and Liu Ying less dramatic. However, Mijia games seem to have this style, so it depends on personal taste. All in all, it is a good book with enough words. It is quite good for a free fast food. I highly recommend reading it. Personally, I couldn't resist reading it because I didn't see any intimate action or sweet scenes after reading more than 200 chapters. The first half is indeed very interesting.
The bad news: there's just a lot of fun, fictional historiography and very little Hoshitetsuhara drama to be found in the book. Good news: Praise Aha! This moment is joy! [Think]
Thank you to the author. It turned out that I had the Yin Body, Origin Stone Disease, Pamish Infection, Heavy Rain Syndrome, Vocal Cord Infection, Collapse Disease, Abstraction, Money Infection, Radiation Infection, Cyberpsychosis, Fear of Gas Inhalation, Homesickness, Urban Disease, Distortion, Slow Shock, Living Corpse Transformation, Anentropy, Witch Transformation, Madness, Honkai Disease, Out of Control of Extraordinary Persons, Hypothermia, Card. Germs, contact phobia, Harlan virus infection, worm infection, dark ether erosion, star scar syndrome, corpse cycle, pneumoconiosis, shock bomb disease, dragon disease, demon scale disease, ghoul infection, laughter virus infection, Flood infection, anti-life program corrosion, subspace corruption, I am all good after reading your novel (⌒▽⌒), can you please add more?
Show them all to me. Really, the original plot of Tycoan written in the first fifty or so chapters of Part 1 is really good. There was a time when I could afford such fine chaff. It can be said that it is completely on the level of Star Iron plot. Really well written. Absolutely fine chaff. If you ask me to say MiHoYo, if I get stabbed in the back in the future. I'm also on the author's side. [Understood]
A very nice novel Although it is said to be a single-female mainstream hotaru, but give more sweet plot, it will be the same as if there is no heroine [face covering] [OK]
It is said that one person (not counting the dead) protects the survival of the entire civilization. He should be qualified to be looked at by the Guardian Star God. Then the company representing the depositor will have a fight with the depositor. He should appear. It would be so much fun [laughter]
Great, the author wrote his own understanding of Beng Tie and a new story, instead of rigid copywriting, cookie-cutter romance, and boring Long Aotian. I'm following it, hoping to maintain this level.
There is only one year left before I have to support myself. Even though I have been prepared for it for a long time, I still feel scared. For me, the meaning of life lies in playing games and reading novels. Others read novels for fun, but I do it to get the emotions I want but don't have. To be honest, I am quite lacking in love. I can remember for a long time when others are kind to me, and when others do something excessive to me, I can treat it as if it never happened for a few days. I long for it because I have never had it, and I don't care anymore even if I am the one who gets hurt because I am afraid of losing it. Disguise yourself as a cheerful, carefree person who won't worry about trivial matters, and can talk to anyone with a smile. It seems that it is easy for others to get into my heart, but not even my parents. Longing to be loved but afraid of being loved, afraid of being deceived, feeling that one is not worthy of this love. I envy the characters in the novel, because they are loved by others, and it feels like they are loved by others. I like ordinary daily life
This book focuses on a relaxed, happy and sunny atmosphere~ Fairies and Yanzu, please comment, and you are welcome to point out any mistakes! Finally... Praise Aha! Ah ha ah ha ah haha, I will praise Brother Mask! Ah ha ah ha ah ha, I will praise Brother Mask! Ah ha ah ha ah haha, I will praise Brother Mask! Ah ha ah ha ah haha, I will praise Brother Mask! Ah ha ah ha ah ha, I will praise Brother Mask! Ah ha ah ha ah ha, I will praise Brother Mask! Ah ha ah ha ah ha, I will praise Brother Mask! Beautiful Mask Brother! Aha ah ha ah haha, I will praise Mask Brother! Aha ah ha ah haha, I will praise Mask Brother! Aha ah ha ah haha, I will praise Mask Brother! No one can predict why the mask will laugh. Joy is the privilege of intelligent creatures. Aha encourages believers to enjoy the joy of life and seek happiness from the blade-like turning of fate. No one can predict why he will laugh heartily. Joy is the privilege of intelligent creatures. Aha encourages believers to enjoy the joy of life and seek happiness from the knife-like turning point of fate.，,,It's so much fun, hahahahahahahaha, ahha, I feel it's so much fun, ahha, I have to tell Leng Lian, Brother Hammer, this is so much fun, hahahahahahaha, this is so much fun, hahahahahahaha, this is so much fun, hahahahahahaha, this is so much fun, haha，，，，，?，，Hahahahahaha! How can you scold ahha, ahha, cry, no, ahha, you can't cry, ahha, why should you cry? Ahhahahahahahahaha, it's so much fun, ahhahahahahahahaha! How can you scold ahha, ahha, cry? , No, ahha, you can't cry, ahha, why are you crying? Ahhahahahahahahahaha, it's so much fun, ahhahahahahahahahaha! How can you scold ahha, ahha, cry, no, ahha, you can't cry, ahha, why are you crying? Ahh Hahahahahahahahahaha, it's so much fun, ahhahahahahahahahaha! Ahha ahha ahhaha, I will praise Brother Mask! Ahha ahha ahhaha, I will praise Brother Mask! Ahha ahha ahhaha, I will praise Brother Mask! Ahha ahha Ahhaha, I will praise Brother Mask! Ahha, ahha, ahha, I will praise Brother Mask! Ahha, ahha, ahha, I will praise Brother Mask! Ahha, ahha, ahha, I will praise Brother Mask! Ahha, ahha, ahha, I will praise Brother Mask! Ahha, ahha, ahha. Haha, I will praise Brother Mask! Ahahahahahaha, I will praise Brother Mask! No one can predict why Pao will laugh. Joy is the privilege of intelligent creatures. Aha encourages believers to enjoy the joy of life and seek happiness from the knife-like turning point of fate. No one can predict why he will laugh heartily. Joy is the privilege of intelligent creatures. Aha encourages believers to enjoy the joy of life and seek happiness from the knife-like turning point of fate.，，，It's so much fun, hahahahahahahaha, ahha, I feel it's so much fun, ahha, I have to tell Leng Lian, Brother Hammer, this is so much fun, hahahahahahaha, this is so much fun, hahahahahahaha, this is so much fun, hahahahahahaha, this is so much fun, haha，，，，，?，，Hahahahahaha! How can you scold ahha, ahha, cry, no, ahha, you can't cry, ahha, why should you cry? Ahhahahahahahahaha, it's so much fun, ahhahahahahahahaha! How can you scold ahha, ahha, cry? , No, ahha, you can't cry, ahha, why are you crying? Ahhahahahahahahahaha, it's so much fun, ahhahahahahahahahaha! How can you scold ahha, ahha, cry, no, ahha, you can't cry, ahha, why are you crying? Ahh Hahahahahahahahahaha, it's so much fun, ahhahahahahahahahaha! Ahha ahha ahhaha, I will praise Brother Mask! Ahha ahha ahhaha, I will praise Brother Mask! Ahha ahha ahhaha, I will praise Brother Mask! Ahha ahha Ah haha, I will praise Brother Mask! Ah ha, ha, ha, ha, I will praise Brother Mask! Ah ha, ah ha, haha, I will praise Brother Mask! Ah ha, ah ha, haha, I will praise Brother Mask! Ah ha, ah ha, ah ha, I will praise Brother Mask! Ah ha, ah ha, ah. Haha, I will praise Brother Mask! Ah ha ha ha ha, I will praise Brother Mask! No one can predict why Chi will laugh. Joy is the privilege of intelligent creatures. Aha encourages believers to enjoy the joy of life and seek happiness from the blade-like turning of fate. No one can predict why Chi will laugh. Joy is the privilege of intelligent creatures. Aha encourages believers to enjoy the joy of life and seek happiness from the knife-like twists and turns of fate.，,，，，，,,，，，，?，， Ahhahahahahahahahaha! How can you scold Aha, aha, cry, no, aha, you can't cry, aha, why should you cry? Ahahahahahahahahaha, it's so much fun, ahahahahahaha! How can you scold Aha!
It's a very good book. I've read dozens of chapters. The setting is very complete, the plot is coherent and logical, and the characters have distinct personalities (whisper, I haven't read the back yet. Has anyone revealed how many chapters the emotional line develops? The old man next door is not that slow, leave me some thoughts)
Compared with the brainless novels on the market, the logic is more rigorous, and compared with the regular novels on the market, it is more brainless. I personally feel that it is quite good. In addition, it can be seen from the few words that the author should be a computer major student or a person working in the computer industry [I understand] [I understand]
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It's an excellent novel. This is the first time I've seen a theme about immortality. It also has elements from Grammer, about contacting immortality through breeding. How should I put it? I can only say that the author is very thoughtful and the content is also very interesting. Come on [blowing kiss][blowing kiss][blowing kiss]
The new plot at the beginning is really good. After reading so many Star Iron fanfics, I finally found one that doesn't just follow the protagonist through the plot of the game. The innovation of the plot is worthy of five stars, but the writing style is quite ordinary, making it a bit weak to read. There are no major problems so far and no poisonous spots have been found.
[Why everything hasn't disappeared yet] I had an orgasm just after watching this episode! Marvelous! Author, you write well! Placer gold won again, Lao Yang was happy and saw something good. On the 72nd day of March, he became the Seven-day Great Sage. Liuying? Fighting is fun! But I have to feel sorry for little Pam. The poor train conductor must have been frightened~ Ah, I almost forgot about our protagonist, if you are Tian Huilong, that's fine.
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I admire the first person to study star cores, because he might die One last time, time is starting to speed up "Stardome Train" "Pam" "Happy Man" "Black Marshal" "Black-skinned Big Sister" "Seven days a week holiday" "Star Core Hunter" "Rememberer" "Gushi's card draw" "The Luck of the African Emirates" "Combat Power Expansion" "Tang Da Ren" "No after-sales service" "I mourn for the dead" What followed me to the top of the tree was my desire for seven days off!
Don't tell me, it feels like Star Wars. It's not as twists and turns as Pinoconi, but it's definitely more than enough than Belloberg.
Finally here, finally together, the Emperor and Queen of Grammer, I love them so much! ! ! [Love][Sending Hearts]
The best Star Iron fanfic I have seen so far. The writing is smooth, the plot is natural, the characters are not stiff, and there are aha, hahahahaha. It has elements of joy, but overall it is not funny for the sake of being funny. It is of high quality and is recommended to be read.
The journey of Teck Saddle Star is very good. Although there is still room for improvement, it is just the icing on the cake. Before Chapter 55, I highly recommend reading it. As for after Chapter 55, I haven't read it yet. [Make faces]
I didn't know it before reading it, but I was shocked after reading it. Even though it's Star Iron, it has a bit of a variety comic feel. I'm really looking forward to the 5 million words that the author said [laughs evilly] (I wish the author continuous inspiration and a happy life)
It's pretty good, and the writing is okay. Although the background is Iron Collapse, I have written a lot of original works. It is not just a superficial story where I get on the train at the beginning and then write the plot without thinking. It supplements some of the pitfalls of Beng Tie, and the original plot is quite interesting, but there are too few.
I have read Chapter 47 so far, and I haven't found any problems. The plot, foreshadowing, etc. Are all okay. It's just that sometimes the characters are a bit OOC, but they change back immediately. There is no problem. It's also funny. Others are OOC for some reason. These are also okay. To explain it in a funny way, there is no problem. To sum up, the problem only appears in the character being a little OOC. The rest is considered excellent. If there are no problems after reading it, I will give it 5 stars + follow up. If there is any big problem, I will leave with 2 stars. My evaluation will stop here.
The plot is interesting, and the original copy is also very interesting. As for the writing style, sometimes it feels very literary, and sometimes it feels a bit dull [laughing and crying].
There are a few that surprised me in the first 25 chapters. The writing is actually very good and the expressiveness is very good. It is just that there may be a little less foreshadowing and mental journey. If it is better, it can make his thoughts more profound and the plot expressiveness more prominent. Summary: You can feel the shock in the early stage, it will not drag on for a long time, and there is no sign of weakness in the follow-up.
Good looking. Love to watch. More posts. I personally feel that the author really wrote about the flavor of rice Even if the protagonist's actions don't overlap with the main line of the train, But it just tastes like that It's not like the outrageous Collapse setting that starts early in some books. Overall, it sounds really comfortable. Whether it's Gramer or the Tyconium behind it It makes people immersed in it So the author please update quickly, I can do anything. Jpg [crying]
The comment section is quite interesting. It's full of frozen meat from Stars and Warhammer friends [laughing] The writing is good, surpassing more than 80% of the Tomato articles [laughing] These days, things are really going well, I hope it will continue to work
Eh! I have an idea. Let Liu Ying give birth to twenty children. The eldest will be called Linlian, the sixth will be called Lin Riemann, the seventh will be called Lin Rogge, the thirteenth will be called Linbert, and the most important sixteenth must be named Lin Lusi.