[Fantasy + System + multiple heroines + love rivals + slice of life + mildly yandere]
An endless bamboo forest, a cliff's edge lashed by fierce winds, and a man and woman who seem to be nestled close together.
“How far away is forever?”
Lu Zhimian lifted her delicate face slightly. Tears ran past the tip of her nose as her jade-like hand gripped the sword hilt. The three-foot blade reflected Li Ye's neck.
Li Ye said nothing. He had no choice.
Years later, standing once more at the edge of Swordwatch Cliff, the man stared silently up at the snow and rain filling the sky.
“How far away is forever, after all?”
He murmured to himself, then leapt.
…
Time passed, and everything changed.
In a dark, cramped cell, Chu Jinqiu pleaded tearfully with the man who had been tortured until he was barely recognizable.
“Senior Brother, please take pity on me?”
There was no answer. Li Ye merely glanced at her indifferently.
…
After an accident, Li Ye was reborn. When he opened his eyes, he found that he had transmigrated to another world and been bound to some sort of female-lead System. He was supposed to help the so-called female lead fulfill her glamorous life story?
As long as he completed the assigned missions, he would receive rewards and eventually return to the present day.
A crazed junior sister who loved him to the depths of her soul, a naive and adorable sword immortal, a cyber girl who lived for fun...
With no other choice, Li Ye found what could only be called a speedrun strategy. After living through five lifetimes, he finally completed every mission and returned to the present. But just as he was about to wipe the slate clean and disappear from their lives for good, he never expected them to follow him!
Standing at the crossroads where fate changed, Li Ye looked at the faces that made his heart race, sweating profusely.
W-wait! Everything that happened before was an accident! Just listen to my explanation!
I still won't give a low score. Let's talk about the criticisms of this book. Someone should post it in the comment area. First, the main plot is too slow. I am a reader who loves books. I think this book will definitely die at this speed, so I won't collect it. The second point is that the memories are too long, so it's okay to use interjections to specify them, but the length is too long. The interludes only need to talk about key points, and there is no beginning to end. Some past events can be written in the main line. One interlude is too long, and if you really want to write it, you can split it up and write it. What's more, you didn't explain who you are across the world, so you just wrote the memories, which is a bit nonsensical and illogical. The third point, still related to the first question, is that there are too many people and things in the real world before you write about rebirth. It's not that you can't write so many, but these should be dividing lines. It doesn't make sense. The branch lines are longer than the main line.
All the necessary elements are present. Shen Nong has tasted it and it is not poisonous and can be viewed. The early stage is more daily, and the later stage should be Shura field. It is mixed with stories between the male and female protagonists. Is there going to be a harem later? Awesome, love it
The memories are too long. If the memories of the five reincarnations are so long, I will say goodbye first. A brief description of the memories will be enough. It is better to focus on the present. Chapter 15 writes about a man eating peaches with tears on the roadside. It reminds me of when Jiraiya died. Naruto was also eating popsicles with tears under the street lamp. It is called heartbreaking. This paragraph is quite touching.
The writing is quite good, and the character of the junior sister is also well described. I hope it will be updated soon 🤦
To compose new words and express sorrow
Good looking, good looking, good looking, good looking, good looking, good looking, good looking, good looking, good looking, not enough, not enough, faster, faster, more
This writing is awesome. It's not at the same level as here. Why are there so few people reading it?
My first love was a bit heart-wrenching, the experience was too deep, and I don't know how I will write about it later.
It looks good, it works, come on, author
It feels good. I support the author.