[Fantasy➕System➕Multiple heroines➕Shura field➕Slight daily life➕Slightly yandere]
At a glance, you can see the endless bamboo forest, the cliff mouth where the wind is blowing, and a man and woman who seem to be cuddling intimately.
...
"How far is forever?"
Lu Zhimian raised his head slightly, tears streaked across the tip of his nose, his jade hand tightly grasped the hilt of the sword, and the three-foot green edge reflected Li Ye's neck.
Li Ye was speechless, he had no choice.
Many years later, the man once again stood at the entrance of Wangjian Cliff, speechless. He just looked up at the rain and snow falling in the sky.
"How far is forever?"
He muttered to himself and jumped up.
…
Times have changed, things have changed and people have changed.
In the dark and cramped prison, Chu Jinqiu begged the inhuman man who had been tortured for a long time with tears in her eyes.
"Senior brother, have mercy on me?"
There was no response, Li Ye just looked at her flatly.
…
After an accident, Li Ye was reborn. After opening his eyes, he found that he had traveled to a different world. What kind of heroine system was bound to him to help the so-called heroine complete the gorgeous script of life?
As long as you complete the so-called mission, you will receive corresponding rewards and eventually return to the present world.
The crazy junior sister who loves him to the core, the cute sword fairy who doesn't care about the world, the cyber girl who advocates fun...
In desperation, Li Ye found a way to speed up his journey. After five lifetimes, he finally completed all the tasks and returned to the living world. But when he was about to clean up and escape from their world, he didn't expect them to come after him?
Standing at the crossroads of alternating fates, looking at the faces that made his heart palpitate, Li Ye sweated like rain.
Wait, wait, what happened before was all an accident, please listen to my explanation!
Reader comments
I still won't give a low score. Let's talk about the criticisms of this book. Someone should post it in the comment area. First, the main plot is too slow. I am a reader who loves books. I think this book will definitely die at this speed, so I won't collect it. The second point is that the memories are too long, so it's okay to use interjections to specify them, but the length is too long. The interludes only need to talk about key points, and there is no beginning to end. Some past events can be written in the main line. One interlude is too long, and if you really want to write it, you can split it up and write it. What's more, you didn't explain who you are across the world, so you just wrote the memories, which is a bit nonsensical and illogical. The third point, still related to the first question, is that there are too many people and things in the real world before you write about rebirth. It's not that you can't write so many, but these should be dividing lines. It doesn't make sense. The branch lines are longer than the main line.
All the necessary elements are present. Shen Nong has tasted it and it is not poisonous and can be viewed. The early stage is more daily, and the later stage should be Shura field. It is mixed with stories between the male and female protagonists. Is there going to be a harem later?
Awesome, love it
The memories are too long. If the memories of the five reincarnations are so long, I will say goodbye first. A brief description of the memories will be enough. It is better to focus on the present. Chapter 15 writes about a man eating peaches with tears on the roadside. It reminds me of when Jiraiya died. Naruto was also eating popsicles with tears under the street lamp. It is called heartbreaking. This paragraph is quite touching.
To compose new words and express sorrow
The writing is quite good, and the character of the junior sister is also well described. I hope it will be updated soon [face covering]
It looks good, it works, come on, author
My first love was a bit heart-wrenching, the experience was too deep, and I don't know how I will write about it later.
This writing is awesome. It's not at the same level as here. Why are there so few people reading it?
Good looking, good looking, good looking, good looking, good looking, good looking, good looking, good looking, good looking, not enough, not enough, faster, faster, more
It feels good. I support the author.
It's still okay. Keep working hard. Let's see how we deal with the first love in the future.
It is divided into two story lines: campus life and fantasy world. It is well written and feels like watching the TV series "Let's Watch the Meteor Shower" and "Legend of Sword and Fairy" when I was a kid.
Just by reading the story of Junior Sister, you can feel that the author has written a story in a big way. The characters are well created and it is wonderful to watch. The threshold is slow and the rhythm of memories is interspersed to pick the readers. I feel that the author's fast-paced novels will also be very exciting. I like it very much.
Chapter 16 Junior Sister Chapter Begins
The writing is very good, the plot is top-notch, and it's beautiful to watch.
Memories are fine, but can you push the main line of the article about returning to the city?
I still won't give a low score. Let's talk about the criticisms of this book. Someone should post it in the comment area. First, the main plot is too slow. I am a reader who loves books. I think this book will definitely die at this speed, so I won't collect it. The second point is that the memories are too long, so it's okay to use interjections to specify them, but the length is too long. The interludes only need to talk about key points, and there is no beginning to end. Some past events can be written in the main line. One interlude is too long, and if you really want to write it, you can split it up and write it. What's more, you didn't explain who you are across the world, so you just wrote the memories, which is a bit nonsensical and illogical. The third point, still related to the first question, is that there are too many people and things in the real world before you write about rebirth. It's not that you can't write so many, but these should be dividing lines. It doesn't make sense. The branch lines are longer than the main line.
All the necessary elements are present. Shen Nong has tasted it and it is not poisonous and can be viewed. The early stage is more daily, and the later stage should be Shura field. It is mixed with stories between the male and female protagonists. Is there going to be a harem later? Awesome, love it
The memories are too long. If the memories of the five reincarnations are so long, I will say goodbye first. A brief description of the memories will be enough. It is better to focus on the present. Chapter 15 writes about a man eating peaches with tears on the roadside. It reminds me of when Jiraiya died. Naruto was also eating popsicles with tears under the street lamp. It is called heartbreaking. This paragraph is quite touching.
To compose new words and express sorrow
The writing is quite good, and the character of the junior sister is also well described. I hope it will be updated soon [face covering]
It looks good, it works, come on, author
My first love was a bit heart-wrenching, the experience was too deep, and I don't know how I will write about it later.
This writing is awesome. It's not at the same level as here. Why are there so few people reading it?
Good looking, good looking, good looking, good looking, good looking, good looking, good looking, good looking, good looking, not enough, not enough, faster, faster, more
It feels good. I support the author.
It's still okay. Keep working hard. Let's see how we deal with the first love in the future.
It is divided into two story lines: campus life and fantasy world. It is well written and feels like watching the TV series "Let's Watch the Meteor Shower" and "Legend of Sword and Fairy" when I was a kid.
Just by reading the story of Junior Sister, you can feel that the author has written a story in a big way. The characters are well created and it is wonderful to watch. The threshold is slow and the rhythm of memories is interspersed to pick the readers. I feel that the author's fast-paced novels will also be very exciting. I like it very much. Chapter 16 Junior Sister Chapter Begins
The writing is very good, the plot is top-notch, and it's beautiful to watch.
Memories are fine, but can you push the main line of the article about returning to the city?
Very well written, good writing, keep at it✊