The Outcast: Returning to Shangqing

I only posted two chapters in one day to let other writers know about it. I thought we were even more incompetent. Listen to me, I posted ten chapters in one day [Thinking][Thinking]

In fact, it's not impossible to have two male protagonists [laughing evilly][laughing evilly][laughing evilly]

Overall it's good, the writing style is good, but as the netizen said, the plot has basically not changed much. The author can try to add some of his own ideas and innovative plots later, come on.

The person who wrote the fanfic "Under One Person" should have the highest level of life cultivation. Moreover, the main character's strength is never because of the Seven Kills Order but the life cultivation level of the past twenty years. When I read it, I really felt that even if I don't learn from the Seven Kills Order, the life cultivation level of the protagonist, coupled with Maoshan's extremely wealthy family, is nothing more than a few more years of hard work.

It's so beautiful. Not only did the author perfectly restore the plot of the original work, but the character settings also made great changes from the original work. Our protagonist is a good brother who is as loyal as Song Jiang. He has always been inseparable from the original author Zhang Chulan and took care of him. Moreover, the author's setting of reducing the influence of the protagonist in order not to affect the development of the original work is really great, and it is a five-star review. Rave reviews, rave reviews

The writing is very good, the male protagonist's perspective has no CP, the genius flow, the characters basically have no OOC, the character design is relatively restored, and Zhang Chulan is a good friend, although it is not consistent with the plot, but the original story is almost saved, such as Tian Lao, Chen Duo, Liao Zhong, Er Zhuang, Ma Xianhongzhi Like this, the male protagonist also has a relatively upright outlook on life, is decisive in killing, and is not merciless at all when he really takes action. The male protagonist has more handsome lines and highlights. I really like the male protagonist's lines against Quan Xing when Quan Xing attacks the mountain. Overall, I can give it an 8 or above. The current score is a bit low.

It's funny, but also a little boring. It's funny because some of the content is really funny, but it's boring because you can tell the follow-up development just by following the main line.

This book should be considered good among fan fictions. Although the protagonist has been following Zhang Chulan and there is no innovative plot, compared with other fan fictions, the language of this book is very humorous and will not make people feel boring. The protagonist is very powerful, but it felt a bit sloppy when writing about crushing Wang Lu. Overall, it's a good fanfic. Give me five stars for encouragement, I hope the author can create some original plots

It's very good, especially the recent plot. The author has something special and can bring the content of the plot to the eyes. The content of the article is vivid and the characters have distinct personalities. This expresses my admiration for this book (

There have been improvements, it's obvious that the author wanted to write the plot up, and the chapters have really gotten better recently. To be honest, if I continue to read a lot of daily life, it may really go away. I have read too many novels in the daily life series before, and now I don't want to spend time at all. It may gradually evolve into opening it and reading the title and leaving. Although this is also my personal opinion... But the author's attitude of trying to change is very good. I recommend watching it.