About Traveling to the Late Ming Dynasty and Meeting Man Sui's Life

It's a very good fic. Before Chapter 47, it felt like a journey of a thousand miles at the end of the Ming Dynasty, but later on it felt more fragmented. After all, the awakening system was introduced, and it felt a bit cool. But it's not bad because Mansui was very pitiful in the original story. It's good to make Mansui happy in the fic. The author is also very brave and perseverant. In a fic with more than 1 million words, he even killed the protagonist in the original story. I feel very conflicted about Liang as a character. Shield, so I think the protagonist has changed. It's not a big problem for me. Mansui's portrayal is good. Although it feels different from the original work, I thought about it. One is facing the father-killing enemy who is several years older than me, and the other is facing a boy who is one year older than me and has always been gentle to me. So I think it is normal to have different attitudes towards people. Generally speaking, it is good-looking and can be read as a small "sweet" novel.

As the old saying goes, yes, there is no system. Continuing the previous knife skills is perfect. The system came too suddenly, but it was also a bit ironic. But at that time, the protagonist's starting template was really not very good. Without cheating, I still couldn't figure out how to strengthen it to compete with Liang. So far, I think it looks good to me, better than those who always confess to Liang Zai. Because I really don't know how to forgive the revenge of killing my father, and we can still be together after forgiveness. Maybe my thinking is too feudal and I can't understand it. It's hard to find a book that is not by Liangsui, it's rare, and it deserves five stars [top post] [please update]

So far, it seems to be one of the better among late Ming dynasty fics. The storyline and the story itself are okay. After reading the introduction, I was wondering what kind of system-flowing novel it was, and then I was killed. . . All in all it's not bad, except the author is a bit short. (As an author, don't you deserve to sleep? Why don't you get up and update me! [Please update])

The early foreshadowing has done a good job in shaping the image of the protagonist, and it intuitively puts an era of cannibalism in front of us.

This is the first Hungry Death fanfic I've read. I thought it was a normal performance, but I didn't expect it to be the ceiling of the original male protagonist × Suisui [face covering] [face covering] [face covering] [face covering]. I thought that the male protagonist was good enough (but it was not poisonous, as the protagonist grew up and forgot the memories of his previous life), but I didn't expect that other fans wrote more good male protagonists. I admit that the original work is a tragedy. But I hope the fanfic is not a tragedy. Even if it is a brainless and cool article, I will give it four stars. If it is written, I will push it if I see it. To be honest, I didn't like the male protagonist Liang that much in the original work. I went to play it just for Suisui [laughing evilly]. However, the ending of the story kept me awake at night, even though I knew that such an ending was a sign of respect for Suisui. But I still hope Succubus Spike has a better ending, otherwise I won't read the fanfic. I hope the author can write like a god and be inspired by a spring. By the way, the stories written by Ryo x Suisui are generally short stories, although they are very interesting, but if you read them too much, you will become a bit bored, not to mention that my sense of Ryo is really not that good. So far I have read only two books by Ryoho. This original × Suisui one looks more natural and comfortable. Maybe my sense of conscience is too poor. It may also be due to personal taste. Come on, I just caught up with the latest chapter. Although the main story of starvation and death has been written, it is not boring. Junsui loves to read it [laughing evilly]. She deserves a good ending. Personally, I still hope to write after Chongzhen's 17th year. Or I can write the plot for a few more years after the first year of Dashun, and then I can start the second part or the next volume. Go and practice immortality [laughing evilly]

Yes, the previous description made me feel very strong, and the feeling of despair was quite real. There was a slight fragmentation before and after the system appeared, but the plot in the latter part was very complete. Overall, it is about four and a half stars, which is quite good.

The characters have distinct personalities, are not limited by the plot of the original work, and are top-notch among fan works [please update]. Looking forward to new work Score, score, this book is being targeted by the authorities

Great, come on, although there are a lot of typos, things will be much better later on. The previous article is more hard-core, more realistic, and more cruel. I quite like it. After all, it fits Mingwei's worldview setting. People who like the following video may think it's pretty good, but people who don't like it may think it's a failure. You can make up your own mind. Come on, author

Before watching: Okay, the heroine is Man Sui After reading: mad, I shouldn't imagine that the novel about starving people will be sweet. But in short, it's very beautiful and the description is very detailed. It really depicts the era of cannibalism, but the knife is a real knife.

The description of the escape part was particularly good. I felt desperate while watching it. I happened to be a little hungry. I felt like I was involved in it [face covering]

It feels like a very good second creation (｡･ω･｡)ﾉ♡ (The following content is my humble opinion, please do not attack maliciously) =_=[Separating line]=_= First of all, the plot of the characters in the early stage is very good, but is it a bit slow to enter the main plot of the original work...? I feel that it may be a bit torture for readers who come here just to see the second version of the original main story () (Although just looking at the plot of the early characters seems worthy of such a long chapter) =_=[Separating line]=_= The second step is to enter the main plot. Judging from the content so far, the plot is still good. However, the content seems to be more biased towards detailed daily descriptions, which does not seem to be suitable for the main line advancement speed of the original work (?) (This refers to the fact that people nowadays like fast-paced content, and I feel that too much tendency to describe daily life will lead to low traffic...) =_=[Separating line]=_= Finally, I look forward to the subsequent plot developmentヾ(≧O≦) Whether it's for daily life or to speed up the main plot of the original work, I will continue reading~ So please, the author, please don't stop updating... Please! This is really important to me! QAQ

As for human nature, the author has a very good grasp of it. Basically every step of the protagonist's steps is very reasonable. He is calm in dealing with things and is not a virgin. The description of the environment and refugees can also reflect the sinister nature of people's hearts in the years of famine. It is the best book about the years of famine and people's hearts that I have ever seen. [Eat melon]

This is my first time reading a Hungry Death fanfic. Generally speaking, the writing is very good. There is nothing so nonsensical. The events after time travel are also in line with the situation at that time. However, it is a bit clumsy. I look forward to the author's future plots.

It looks good, I love reading it, what can I say about this book... In fact, I have never played this game myself, but I couldn't help but read it, and then I got into it. Although the protagonist doesn't have any powerful plug-ins or abilities, I really like this character, and the description of the story background is also quite popular. I was ready to play this game in two days. I just read the ending of the game mentioned in the review... And then I didn't want to play it immediately. The main reason was that I didn't want to see Mansui die, and one of the four endings is alive. If you really play it, you will have to sleep for two days, but the author has a strong sense of the plot of the emotional line in the book, and you can also feel that Mansui's character is not willing to owe too much to others or to be taken care of all the time. The protagonist is indeed a portrayal of many people in reality, that is, the kind of mood that wants to take care of others wholeheartedly, but forgets to consider other people's wishes and feelings. Overall, I feel that the rating of this book is still a bit low. It should be higher. Anyway, it is very good-looking, and... The author will update soon!!! However, Zhang Yan's death is still a pity. Although it did pave the way for the protagonist's several encounters with Mansui, I just feel that this way of death is a bit too tragic, and I feel that the trigger condition of the system is indeed a bit uncomfortable, which means that you are not there when I need you, and you come only after the person is gone, and some of the things given are a bit... How should I put it, maybe similar It's a charity, it's just a bit uncomfortable to watch, but it's just my personal opinion. If you don't like it, just pretend you haven't seen it. Don't scold me. Thank you... A few days later... Ah!!!! Because of this book, I bought a game and played it. Damn it!

The revenge for killing your father is not so easy to repay. When the second male lead, "Good", killed innocent people indiscriminately, leading to the death of the heroine's father, I knew he would not have a good ending. Many people believe that the best ending is for the second male lead Liang and the female lead Man Sui to "disappear". But should our popular heroine "Mansui" be depressed all her life? So the male protagonist of our fanfic, with the mission of making the female protagonist happy, makes his debut. This article is that kind of fresh and sweet, the story has ups and downs, and the ending is he. Finally, I wish "Peace to Suisui"!

The writing is very good, the escape, daily life, the growth of the protagonist, and the characterization of the characters are all quite good. The fact that multiple time travelers can be used as MPCs is not a bad point. The existence of the system can also be accepted, otherwise it will not be easy for the two children in terms of weapons and food. Maintain level 9 points+

The writing is really good. Those knives were all foreboding, or the author's writing was more or less foreshadowed and not too abrupt. I originally came here to watch it for fun, but ended up finishing it and stayed up late to catch up on it. Just a little pressure

I feel it's better looking than most Hungry Death fandoms. Although it's a bit slow in the early stages, it's better because the main character has a full image, and the encounter with Mansui is not abrupt. The back part is also very sweet, very natural, and very good-looking. I recommend it.

It looks better, but the content after the system is a little different from the previous one, and the style becomes very everyday. It doesn't look bad, but if you want to see the drought background and escape, you have to be mentally prepared. After all, it will feel different if it is cheated.

In it, the protagonist is the best in the world and eats his brothers. The heroine is almost trampled to death by the protagonist at the beginning. The previous words are all nonsense, but in fact, it tells a story of brotherhood and love. A great book, the best love story I have ever heard.

This is the best book about death by hunger that I have ever read. Although it is frustrating in the early stage, it is really refreshing when it is supposed to be good, and it is really sweet when it is supposed to be sweet (//∇//). Although it is a bit poisonous, it can be ignored. It is good-looking, so good-looking.

I highly recommend this book. It fits the dark side of human nature in the story of starvation and death. It also shows the brotherhood. The author has a good idea. I like it.

Look, it's considered to be the best quality batch among the Hungry Death fans.

This book is really well written and perfectly reflects the desolate feeling of the late Ming Dynasty [Like][Like][Like][Like][Like][Like][Like][Like][Like][Like][Like][Like] This is the first time I read it so seriously. I skipped the background-like stuff in the previous chapters.

The book is very good-looking, with good details, and the main plot is well advanced. It is not mindless, the protagonist has grown up, the heroine is not a flower vase, the supporting characters have been shaped, and the daily writing is quite good, not as bad as the author said. The second is the data mentioned by the author. In fact, fan fiction is quite niche on Tomato, let alone a fan fiction for a game. And the introduction is not very attractive, it looks like the whim of an author. But the book is indeed very good. I can only say that the title, introduction, and the first three golden chapters are not very good. Fortunately, I had the patience to watch the back part. It was really beautiful. I was very sad to see Zhang Yan die, and I was also happy for Man Sui. If the title of your book was changed to "A Great Drought in the Late Ming Dynasty, Picking a Man-Earned Ear as a Wife," it might be more attractive, haha, but it feels like it goes against your original intention of writing this book. After all, this book came up on my recommendation three times. I read it yesterday because I was bored, so I stayed up all night and got up to work. I finished it in two days. I can only say that my writing skills are there. If you want to write about the growth of characters, it will be very interesting. It will also be very interesting to write about the sweet love of a single woman. I hope the author will not end up with a bad ending, give Mansui a good ending, and also give himself a good ending for his first book.

This book has a strong sense of tearing in the early stages and has a lot of poisonous points. If I hadn't gone for Mansui, I probably wouldn't have continued reading. The writing in the later chapters is pretty good, and the narrative and other aspects are also well grasped. It can be read as a sweet novel. The overall rating is four stars, and one more star is given by Mansui.

It looks ok so far, but there is a bit of a knife in the front, which is very late Ming Dynasty. It changes around Chapter 47, with a slight break in the front and back, and the style changes to a normal system style (I haven't read too much, so I can't be completely sure). The author said that the front is dark history, but I feel that the writing is quite real. There is indeed that feeling of despair and powerlessness. At present, it seems that the overall theme is also a late Ming theme that I am very interested in. I can look forward to the future. I am still reading. After reading more than half of it, I would like to talk about the overall feeling. The general sense of direction is correct, and it is similar to the previous feeling. The first part is about wandering and drifting due to natural disasters caused by soldiers and bandits, and the second part is about the wandering experience and settling down with Wan Sui Ye. The latter part is sweet, and the overall feeling is good. There are a few minor flaws, but the impact is not big. It is indeed a masterpiece. In the end, Wan Sui Ye is high [laughing] [like]

Very good, one of the few Hungry Death fanfics that does not have Liang as the protagonist. I just hope that the protagonist and Mansui can use the system to live in modern life after they deal with the revenge (personal thoughts, and there will be more chapters by the way)

It's very good. It gave me a good impression. At first, I felt like I could publish a book on my own. Although I was a little bit addicted when I first met Man Sui, the rest of it left me with a good feeling. It's true that it's plain and simple. I feel like the corpse is warm.

As the first Hungry Death fanfic I have read, it is really good. Although I haven't read most of the extras and some of the text, I sincerely recommend it. There are some bad points, but not many. It's just a lot of typos, but it's not harmful [Chigua]