People Will Not Be Tempted After Falling into the Water in Tokyo

I feel like this book jumps back and forth between good and bad, but for the most part it is a good book. At least the plot is coherent and smooth, and the writing is readable. The general feeling is that it is not good because there are too many characters and too little foreshadowing. The author has a good grasp of the narrative, but it still feels like there are many steps missing. For example, he was suddenly dragged into a gambling competition. At least write a paragraph in the front, where the gangster girl is thinking about who will be the thug, and suddenly thinks of the protagonist, an interesting person, and fills it in. Oh, yes, and there are not many introductions to new things, such as the God-seeking characters in that system. You can at least tell them what kind of gambling monsters they are, and introduce the character's skills and so on. This way, you won't feel like you are reading in a fog.

A very good novel

It feels good, but the author probably has no interest in taking over projects. I just started reading it. The plot is very good and the characterization is also good, especially the protagonist's personality is very likable

It's pretty, but a little lacking.

Good-looking, good-looking, good-looking Will it be popular? It will be popular!

You can write well, please give it a try, author.

Hehe, it looks good. I love watching it. It's not enough to watch. As a young author, you don't want to be deprived of food, right?

Not bad, come on, come on

I am so embarrassed that I am twisted

It feels pretty good-looking

I can watch it, the plot is very smooth

It's a high-quality product, but it's a pity that it doesn't taste right.

Oops, I think you can still watch it, but I almost didn't read the first chapter.

It's good. The protagonist is not a brainless stallion.

Novel about Long Aotian, a city living in Japan

This is really good, the plot is quite novel

Come on, come on, come on, come on, come on, come on, come on, come on

It's a pity that it was cut in half. A very nice article by Long Aotian. The male protagonist has a very suitable personality

It's very interesting to watch, the plot is relatively novel, and the male and female protagonists are not cliche, and I personally prefer the male protagonist's Sigma Man setting.