In his previous life, he stepped on the air to save people and traveled to Ren Yibendao, who jumped into the river for his childhood sweetheart. The memories of the two lives were combined and he said that he would no longer be tempted by women.
But will the reborn Daodao really get what he wants?
The aloof senior sister, the cute junior school girl, the daughter of Aunt Wang's family next door, and so on, all kinds of troublesome things have entangled him...
Reader comments
I feel like this book jumps back and forth between good and bad, but for the most part it is a good book. At least the plot is coherent and smooth, and the writing is readable. The general feeling is that it is not good because there are too many characters and too little foreshadowing. The author has a good grasp of the narrative, but it still feels like there are many steps missing. For example, he was suddenly dragged into a gambling competition. At least write a paragraph in the front, where the gangster girl is thinking about who will be the thug, and suddenly thinks of the protagonist, an interesting person, and fills it in.
Oh, yes, and there are not many introductions to new things, such as the God-seeking characters in that system. You can at least tell them what kind of gambling monsters they are, and introduce the character's skills and so on. This way, you won't feel like you are reading in a fog.
A very good novel
It feels good, but the author probably has no interest in taking over projects. I just started reading it.
The plot is very good and the characterization is also good, especially the protagonist's personality is very likable
It's pretty, but a little lacking.
Good-looking, good-looking, good-looking
Will it be popular? It will be popular!
You can write well, please give it a try, author.
Hehe, it looks good. I love watching it.
It's not enough to watch. As a young author, you don't want to be deprived of food, right?
Not bad, come on, come on
I am so embarrassed that I am twisted
It feels pretty good-looking
I can watch it, the plot is very smooth
It's a high-quality product, but it's a pity that it doesn't taste right.
Oops, I think you can still watch it, but I almost didn't read the first chapter.
It's good. The protagonist is not a brainless stallion.
Novel about Long Aotian, a city living in Japan
This is really good, the plot is quite novel
Come on, come on, come on, come on, come on, come on, come on, come on
It's a pity that it was cut in half. A very nice article by Long Aotian. The male protagonist has a very suitable personality
It's very interesting to watch, the plot is relatively novel, and the male and female protagonists are not cliche, and I personally prefer the male protagonist's Sigma Man setting.
I feel like this book jumps back and forth between good and bad, but for the most part it is a good book. At least the plot is coherent and smooth, and the writing is readable. The general feeling is that it is not good because there are too many characters and too little foreshadowing. The author has a good grasp of the narrative, but it still feels like there are many steps missing. For example, he was suddenly dragged into a gambling competition. At least write a paragraph in the front, where the gangster girl is thinking about who will be the thug, and suddenly thinks of the protagonist, an interesting person, and fills it in. Oh, yes, and there are not many introductions to new things, such as the God-seeking characters in that system. You can at least tell them what kind of gambling monsters they are, and introduce the character's skills and so on. This way, you won't feel like you are reading in a fog.
A very good novel
It feels good, but the author probably has no interest in taking over projects. I just started reading it. The plot is very good and the characterization is also good, especially the protagonist's personality is very likable
It's pretty, but a little lacking.
Good-looking, good-looking, good-looking Will it be popular? It will be popular!
You can write well, please give it a try, author.
Hehe, it looks good. I love watching it. It's not enough to watch. As a young author, you don't want to be deprived of food, right?
Not bad, come on, come on
I am so embarrassed that I am twisted
It feels pretty good-looking
I can watch it, the plot is very smooth
It's a high-quality product, but it's a pity that it doesn't taste right.
Oops, I think you can still watch it, but I almost didn't read the first chapter.
It's good. The protagonist is not a brainless stallion.
Novel about Long Aotian, a city living in Japan
This is really good, the plot is quite novel
Come on, come on, come on, come on, come on, come on, come on, come on
It's a pity that it was cut in half. A very nice article by Long Aotian. The male protagonist has a very suitable personality
It's very interesting to watch, the plot is relatively novel, and the male and female protagonists are not cliche, and I personally prefer the male protagonist's Sigma Man setting.