I Use *************

The concept is very interesting, and it is a sure hit for people like me who prefer young generals. I was just a little bit dumbfounded when I clicked on it. ①I don't know why it is set 5,500 years ago. The female protagonist does not seem to be from the future, but should be contemporary with us. The male protagonist is a person from the Neolithic Age in 3500 BC, which is really a minority... The article also says that it is five hundred years earlier than the Shang Dynasty, but the earliest Shang Dynasty was only 1600 BC... Moreover, Xia, Shang and Zhou were slave societies, and the description in the article is more like a feudal society. ②The most awkward thing is the names of the characters in the article. The male protagonist is named Duan Zheng, and his subordinates are named Li Qingzhang, Chen Junwu, etc. These are names that only appeared after the Qin and Han Dynasties when surnames and surnames gradually merged. In fact, each dynasty has its own naming style. The one mentioned in the article may be from the Western Han Dynasty, but it is more like the Tang Dynasty and later. ③The communication between the heroine and the male protagonist using oracle bones is also very abstract. Not to mention that oracle bones are generally used for sacrifices and divination, and they cannot communicate in such detail. Even if there are only more than a thousand oracle bones that have been deciphered so far, it is difficult for professors who specialize in this to do this. This subject matter is really attractive to me, which is why I wrote so many words. I hope the author can carefully consider the background setting in the article. If you are not familiar with history, it is better to completely ignore it. Don't write about how many years ago or the text is in oracle bones. It is easy to make a joke. On the contrary, it is easier for readers to make up for it by leaving blank space.

After following the author for a few days, he became more and more diligent [laughter] It's good to watch and will be watched more. I feel like it has fixed a lot of loopholes. The heroine has not been turned into a tool of resentment by blind demands. I look forward to the future and hope that the logic will not collapse.

Super good-looking. The heroine is super awesome and kind. Unlike some heroines who are too ugly and greedy.

It's nice and nice. It's novel, unique, innovative and has ideas. It's very imaginative. Modern materials are transported in one train. It explodes. By the way, the ancient objects over there are shipped over and converted into money. Then I buy materials and take them. Wow, life is endless. Isn't the ancient powerful country coming to dominate the world again and finally getting married? It's beautiful.

It's only 40,000 words [laughing and crying][laughing and crying][laughing and crying] It looks good. I love watching it. Can there be more? The heroine has a cute personalityớ ₃ờ

Cool article, hope it has a beginning and an end

I saw Chapter 50, cool article. I don't want to worry about whether it's reasonable or not. It's inherently unreasonable to send things across time and space, so there's no need to worry about whether the details are reasonable.

Not bad. This young general actually looks very much like my favorite historical figure, Huo Qubing.

I would like to praise that the writing style is better than the other book with the same plot that I read. However, that book should be the first one. However, the writing style is not good, as if it was written by a newbie, and the details are not in place. I look forward to your polishing of this book. Come on.

Not bad, cool article, I hope the general will kill everyone

Who understands who understands! Dafei Fei [flying a kiss]

It looks good. Will the heroine come over later? I found that I like watching purely to satisfy my desire to spend whatever money I have [laughing][laughing][laughing]

Ah ah ah, who knows? This general pokes my heart, mainly because I feel that my brain is easy to use.

Ahhhh, it's so beautiful, once you get in there you can't stop!

Please update more. The author is great. It's not enough. Let them meet as soon as possible.

Too bad I didn't realize it was serialized until I finished reading it. It was so heart-breaking! The book is very beautiful! The plot is novel, I like it very much! Looking forward to seeing how they get together! Update soon

The gold finger can be opened directly, and you can use it without any worries. This is really cool. You don't have to be careful. It's really nice.

It's great. I've read two books recently, both of which are of this type! It's a pity that they are all serialized [crying]

The writing is very good, I like it

It's very beautiful, from beginning to end

I beg the author, please don't be so unsatisfied♥️

It's good-looking and exciting. The hero and heroine are decisive, smart and loving. Like [Like]

It's super beautiful. I like it. I'm so happy to read it. Thank you for the author. It's a great article and I feel good.

I hope it can be finished later. This is my only wish. I hope it will be a long and medium-length novel. Don't let down the five stars

Baby~ I'm waiting to see, please update soon! It's best to update three times a day [laughing] [laughing] [laughing] [laughing] [laughing] [laughing] [laughing] [laughing] [laughing]

It's very beautiful and feels very novel. I really like it. The author will give it a thumbs up and update it.

Pure and refreshing article, good looking

Looks good, but a bit short

Good-looking, good, good

Interesting and novel content