Black Myth: I Led the Demon King to the Heavenly Palace

Come on, this paragraph is well written to give the fourth sister and the final ending a perfect ending. When I was playing the game, I saw the fourth sister being captured by the crane-headed old man to make elixirs. I felt uncomfortable. Can I turn the crane-headed man into a roast chicken?

Personally, I suggest you don't talk about how much strength the stick has accumulated. The mob has lost a third of its health. It's not like playing a game. Just say it is injured.

Fourth sister! My fourth sister! ! ! Finally appeared! ! !

This is the best black mythology fan novel I have ever read. It doesn't kill people everywhere. The plot is okay for me. I think the character of the protagonist is pretty good. All in all, I think this book is very interesting.

Not bad, no more eunuchs. In the later stage, the author should give the protagonist a move called Mood, which is the remnant body of the Great Sage. This is just a suggestion.

It looks good, and the idea of ​​developing power is really good. Many fan fictions are about killing and killing all the way. Those look like a bunch of reskinned novels, which are not interesting.

Jianghu is not about fighting and killing, it is about human relations.

Very good, worth a look

It's well written. I hope the author can keep writing.

It feels better not to reincarnate. The plot at the beginning is good, and then it adds the feeling of three reincarnations. . . .