Villain: After Reincarnation Was Ruined, He Was Chased by the Daughter of Destiny

I have read a lot of regret stories and husband-chasing stories, and this one really hits the mark for me. It doesn't have the bloody stomachache plot or poisonous points of similar books. Even though the female protagonists are affected by the consciousness of heaven, they still retain their rationality and feelings for the male protagonist. Moreover, the exciting points of the female protagonist chasing her husband and the male protagonist's attitude after awakening are retained. It is like taking the essence and discarding the dross.

It's a good theme, and I've finished the latest chapter. I like the subject matter very much and want to continue to pursue it, so I left a long comment and wanted to make some personal suggestions. I hope the author can forgive me. The writing style leans towards daily comedy, and there are indeed many plots that make people laugh. It is well written. However, the change in the protagonist's personality is really strange. Funny, careless, and afraid of the Master, they should be the character of the protagonist before the disaster. Therefore, during the period when the protagonist just regained his memory, his personality changed, and it is difficult to assume that the protagonist is someone who has experienced several reincarnations. Now that the protagonist has begun to understand and forgive the heroines, and does not deviate from the funny and relaxed daily style of writing, then I think, can the protagonist's character be made a little stronger and sinister? In other words, he will tease the heroines from time to time, and he will not always be in a funny weak position when facing the master. After all, the current protagonist combines the memories of several lives. If he still uses the out-of-the-box personality before the disaster, it would be better not to write about the past life. If the setting of past life reincarnation is put aside and there is no difference between it and ordinary light-hearted daily novels, then wouldn't this subject matter be very redundant? In short, there is currently a lack of motivation to continue chasing. Personally, I hope that the protagonist can be like the above and change his personality a little bit when facing the heroines. Although the misunderstanding has been resolved and the male protagonist will not resent the female protagonists, after all they have suffered for so many lifetimes, it is still too bland to seamlessly switch back to Senior Brother Youai (disciple) after the misunderstanding is resolved. Personally, I think the male protagonist can really be more playful with the female protagonists, especially when facing the master, he can be stronger and even meaner. Because after seeing the title of the book and reading the introduction, my first reaction was that the male protagonist teases the female protagonists and tries to escape all day long. (PS: I really want to see it. The protagonist is saying "my good master" while doing bad things to her hhh. He is a master and a disciple. Isn't it more exciting to emphasize the contrast of identity in this way? Jie Jie Jie)

The writing is good and quite interesting. Unlike most other articles that have a system and are cheating, no1, all kinds of opportunities, and all kinds of love are given to the harem without progress. After reading it for a while, there is no desire to read anymore. It is the same. This one also adds a little bit of plot. If we keep up the good work, we can dig more holes and delve deeper into the plot. It would be better if we add some humor to the style of the newspaper seller. It will definitely be an outstanding article.

How should I put it? It's not as exciting as regretting in a crematorium. The misunderstandings of several reincarnations have been wiped out in a few words. It looks really awkward, like being stuck and uncomfortable when one breath cannot be taken up or down. But at least it's not poisonous. It can be seen that the author is crazy about his strong desire to survive. It's a pity that it's a bit hard to watch what he has done in several lives and just forgive it. Overall it's okay

It's quite embarrassing. Tomatoes are like this. As long as the author feels comfortable writing, the readers will have to think a lot [laughter]

The author hopes that the system will be "punished". After all, there are easier ways to complete it, but it still depends on having fun. This has to be "punished", so that people who have fun can also become fun [laughter]

Wow wow wow, it's super beautiful. Yuan'er's previous lives were so miserable and pitiful, and the master's love for Yuan'er in the later scenes was so well described that it made a 20-year-old boy cry when he saw it [Love] [Like]

I took this book out of the bookshelf and added it back three times. After much stumbling, I finished it this time. I could read the first 50% of the book word for word. I read it very seriously and liked it very much. The rebirth flow has the author's own characteristics. The reason why I gave up the book was that I kept pushing the map in the later period (maybe it was because the data was not good and I didn't want to write seriously?). It can be regarded as me giving the author some personal opinions. If I support the author, I will give it five stars. I hope the author can write such a bright book in the future!

Great to watch, very funny, lots of jokes, very interesting. Personally, I like it very much. The system acted as the entertainer and set up a crematorium for the male protagonist to chase his husband. It was very interesting. It is also a reverse strategy. The four women are trying to defeat the male protagonist hahahahahaha. The villain Ye Fan is very interesting. When the author made the clay figurine of the villain, he was full of laughs. He looked stupid, and the villain's old man also made comments from time to time, which was very interesting. The author has a very strong desire to survive and would avoid most poisonous spots. When you are passing the time, catching fish at work, or being a light bulb, bedtime stories are the most suitable.

It's a silly comedy, it doesn't have so much bitterness and hatred, it's pretty good

It's okay, but the first version of the text is a poisonous version. Is this a pressure revision?

It's funny, and the jokes are moderate, and the timing of the complaints is also relatively good. If you don't want to write too much later, you can try to write more fun daily life that does not affect the main plot, such as special festivals and so on, which can enrich the emotional line of the heroine. As long as it doesn't collapse in the later stage, I can't say how popular it is, but it is definitely a good book [Chigua][Chigua][Chigua]

This crematorium is very comfortable Like most people who abuse for the sake of abuse The kind that never forgives is much better.

The teacher is finally no longer an NPC, and the so-called emotions from childhood to adulthood are finally real, which is good. In addition, the writing style is relatively relaxed, so you can take a look. With a bit of sarcasm, the old clichés of masters, sisters, etc. Always have a sense of procedure, without flesh and blood, and with some elements of hypnosis or something, it can be read as a certain type of novel. Also, the way of heaven is merciless and all things are equal, so there is truth in cultivation. However, the background of this kind of story is that Tao favors someone. If Tao himself ends up, then why should we practice? The overall background is actually very desperate. I suggest that everyone in this world just open up and let others be strong.

It's not bad. Did the heroine have any close contact with Ye Fan in her previous lives? If not, it will be changed to 5 stars. I have to say that the author's reply speed is really fast.

It's okay, but I don't like regret articles. I read this one with the determination to take poison, but unexpectedly it wasn't that poisonous. But maybe it's because I was mentally prepared? Husband-chasing is a very tricky subject. Most husband-chasing articles on the market can't escape the poisonous points of cuckoldry, taking over, torturing the owner, and cheating. Therefore, this book can be regarded as a breath of fresh air among husband-chasing articles. The core of this kind of book is to compensate for mistakes, but this mistake must have a certain degree. If there are too many mistakes, it will be extremely toxic and it will be a pure cuckold story. If the mistakes are too light, there will be nothing interesting and the plot will be unreasonable. The second is compensation, and this compensation must be fierce. The book's faults are legitimate, but insufficiently compensated. Basically, the female protagonists say they are powerful but there is no actual compensation. The male protagonist is almost beaten to death, and the female protagonist just counterattacks with a sword. It does not mean that the female protagonist does not care. It is just that the actual actions and the words are not equal. It seems that the male protagonist is still a clown. And from a structural point of view, it has been said before that the male protagonist suffered some grievances in his previous life. It is better to at least let the male protagonist really enjoy himself for a while and then be deflated instead of dying again without getting compensation. Moreover, the heroine's reaction is not consistent with her previous feelings for the hero. As for the rest, there is some comedy, some light-heartedness, but there are also some little bits of poison. Overall, it can only be considered pretty good.

At first I saw a score of 7.5, But after reading it I felt that this score was obviously too low. As a reader of Thousand Hours Tomatoes. As long as you don't supervise tail docking, 7 points is basic. Next, as long as the ending is not shitty and not too urgent, 8 points will be no problem. For me, this book can be given a score of 8.5 Or above. It has a system but does not use the system to forcefully advance the story. It is not a brainless system flow. The fun of the system adds a lot of interest to the story. Moreover, the story does not involve a bunch of people talking and misunderstandings, and the heroines have not lost their virginity after many reincarnations. This arrangement is more than a million times better than many poisonous novels. The male should have fun and have fun, be serious and serious, and not be a virgin or cold-blooded. The disadvantage may be that there are too many female protagonists, and their respective plots and appearances will be diluted. But it can be seen that the author has worked very hard to balance each female character, and the female characters will not suddenly disappear or be offline for a long time like other novels. It's a good work on tomatoes. Easy reading @ a cat that can write. Waiting for you to write extras when you have time [making faces][eating melon]

I have finished watching it, and everything else is pretty good. I just feel that it is a bit unreasonable for the male protagonist to have such a cheerful personality after being imprisoned for hundreds of years. In later harem stories, it is inevitable that the female protagonist will be diluted, but the group portraits are handled well. I give it a good review😘

What's going on? It's not like you, the author, can write about the kind of person who can enter a dark room. Why do you only have so few points? I'm tired of this kind of reincarnation. It will feel much better to see you. It's good not to have so much hatred. Keep going and wait until I get paid and order you a cup of milk tea [shy]

After skipping chapters, I can only say that this type of book is really not my cup of tea [laughing awkwardly] [crying with laughter] Okay, I won't say anything more, that's it. Writing a book is not easy, five stars encourage you! Many female literary yyds! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! !

The score of this book is really low. After reading it, I feel that there is no poisonous point in the whole book. The style itself is light-hearted and funny. It is really top-notch and rarely used. However, as a harem novel, although it can be seen that the author has tried his best to avoid it, the description of some heroines in the later period is also very, very rare, which often appears. There are only Shuang Maomao and Mu Qinghan, and the second senior sister almost found no such person. Overall, I feel that this book has a low score of at least around 8.5. It is a fine book, without bitterness, hatred, darkness, and all kinds of life-and-death plots. After reading it, I just felt happy, warm, and relaxed

Not bad. The main point of being funny is that the author is very good at making jokes, but the plot is not very interesting. It doesn't really have any shortcomings. To put it bluntly, the later stage is very long but the progress is very fast. The rhythm is not quite right.

After watching it for a while, it is quite attractive, but the front is a bit depressing! I'd better give it five stars. Can you tell me a little bit about how many you will receive in the future? Except for Master and Third Junior Sister...[Laughing]

It's quite interesting. I think harem stories are not the kind of stock trading stories. I hope I can write some serious and profound emotional scenes between the male and female protagonists on the basis of humor. Otherwise, it's just funny and I always feel like something is missing.

It's okay, but the smell of dog licking is too strong. It's so licking that I have nothing to say, and the dog has to call out "big brother" when he sees it. Originally, the novel could be rated 8.5, But it had to come to the sixth life. I won't talk about the sixth life, but it had to be licked. This is the biggest poison.

Give yourself a thumbs up! [Cover face]

Every fantasy book has a kind of person, a person who uses other people's settings to reason with the author and then teaches the author to write a book [laughing and crying]

It's not bad, but there is a major drawback. It can't be updated 20 times a day.

Very good, 90 points or above, mainly daily, non-daily parts are designed and written with great care, and what is very rare is that the male protagonist has the same character from beginning to end, unlike many books where the male protagonist does not look like the same person in the early and late stages. The only small problem is that the early setting can easily be regarded as a poisonous point

Good to read. Love to read. Must read. Author, please update soon. I want to see Mr. Yuan's appearance after he has the memory of his past life. He gives up his sword and takes a gun.