My Game Connects to the Ancient World

215 Tied There are currently no red flags, almost all the words are correct, and there are basically no logic bugs. The writing is quite good, and the main plot is a little weak but quite complete. The plot is on the bland side, with the emotional drama at the front being the main focus. After the male protagonist leaves the small town and enters the world, the plot gradually becomes the main focus. By the time he has the ability to strike out independently, 90% of the plot will be taken up. However, the author is very good at describing, full of charlatanism, and the protagonist's daily behavior is also detailed in many details. For example, if the male protagonist lights a torch while riding a horse at night, he will first test whether the horse will be frightened, and then continue on the road. Whether it's intense fighting scenes or delicate emotional changes, they are all well written and very engaging. 90 Points for writing, 75 points for main plot, 80 points for fighting, and 100 points for emotion. In particular, the germination and transformation of emotions is a key point of this article. Several key chapters are really well written, and the transition is natural and not abrupt at all, allowing people to experience the inner changes of the protagonist. But now the main thing is that the male protagonist's feelings for the female protagonist have changed. The female protagonist is basically raising a child to the male protagonist. There are only a few details where she treats him as an independent person to avoid suspicion and respect, but the underlying logic still treats him as an adolescent child. I don't know how the heroine's emotional transformation will be written, I hope it won't disappoint. The author said that it is expected to be completed around 500,000 yuan, but now it is 450,000 yuan. The climax of the main plot has not yet arrived, and the heroine's relationship has not changed. I feel that 500,000 yuan will not be able to finish it, and it must be at least 600,000 yuan. You promise it won't suck, I believe you I can't think of anything else at the moment, I hope the author will update more regularly!

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I finished it in one go, it's so beautiful! 💕The female protagonist is saturated, the male protagonist is three-dimensional, and the fate between them is not in an oppositional state. After I breathed a sigh of relief, I was very surprised when I saw the later part. The development of the plot is ups and downs. Although the heroine is the fourth natural disaster, there are corresponding restrictions every time she hurts people in the martial arts world. The heroine herself is also very smart and quickly discovers these errors and restrictions. This is really the most complete, smoothest and most exciting novel I have ever read that combines the dual development of martial arts and the real world. I just don't know why it is not popular. QAQ The martial arts world is full of conspiracies and rivers and lakes. There is no fairy-tale color except for the systematic ability. The mutual help and suspense reasoning in the real world are full of the helplessness and small happiness of daily life. No matter which world it is, the supporting characters are also very three-dimensional in a few strokes. The author's wife really writes it very well. I highly recommend it. 💕😘😘

I've just read Chapter 113. It's another romantic novel with new ideas. No problems were found. I hope the author will not finish the work later or collapse. Remember to save the manuscript and update it steadily!!! [I haven't read enough]

I have read a similar novel before. Later, the male protagonist and the female protagonist meet across different dimensions. The male protagonist is extremely smart and cross-generational and develops a bug-like game so that the modern female protagonist can save the childhood male protagonist through the game. This book also has a tendency to encounter people who break the dimensional wall. I don't know what the plot will be like in the future. I look forward to it! I also really like the interaction between the female protagonist and the young male protagonist. The only thing I feel is not enough is that it is a bit short. I worked all night last night and almost finished it in my spare time. Come on!

This is the third book of this type that I have read. This one has great potential. The author and my wife are working hard to update it. I am very much looking forward to the subsequent development. The plot is smooth, the plot is compact and the writing is very good! Let's all look at the good works that won't make a loss if you invest in shares (✪▽✪)

It's so good. I like this kind of paper-based characters, but why should I watch it until it's not finished? [I almost cry]. It's too uncomfortable to wait for the update. I will hold it in until I get fatter and watch it again.

Looks like this game is a golden finger for the male protagonist Why didn't the heroine report the clues she found to the police? The heroine only cared about He Shi and herself.

This is my first time writing a book review because it's very interesting. But this is the first time I encountered such a good-looking novel. It's actually new and not fat at all 😢 😢. Also, did Chapter 17 skip a lot of plots? Why can't it be connected?

It's great! I've never read this kind of novel about a female protagonist raising a male protagonist, but this one is unexpectedly good-looking, with good writing and delicate emotions. Unfortunately, it's still being serialized. I look forward to the next article!