Transmigrated into a Book as a Mole in an Immortal Sect

It's a show of two strong characters, a battle of wits, both protagonists have a family line, and the writing is quite humorous; overall it looks like a bit of a group portrait, and there are quite a lot of supporting roles; the writing is not bad, the atmosphere in the early stage is generally relaxed, and there are a lot of laughs. The plot line is gradual and ups and downs, with many twists and turns, and the plot is very reasonable. Sometimes a funny plot is written just right in the tense plot to lighten the atmosphere, which makes it exciting and funny to watch. . Many pitfalls have been solved, and the character design is also very successful. The emotional line has made more practical progress when it is nearly a hundred chapters. The previous words are in a relatively ignorant state; there will be a wallpaper plot in the middle and late stages. There is a plot in the middle and late stages of why two people are in love but Qingyang rejects Ah Qi. There will be an explanation later, and there will be no forced torture. There are occasional minor abuses throughout the line, but overall I like the emotional line of this book very much. For me, the rhythm is just right. There were foreshadowings in the early stage that hinted at a plot later, which gave me a bad feeling... Then the premonition came true (pawn), the group portrait line was so sad, several of my favorite characters were gg, and I kept crying. Also, it was a pity that some of the villains died in the early stage, but when you think about what they did, it was very reasonable (?) And in short, they were quite charming. Demining: This book is quite normal. There is nothing weird about it. If I have to choose, it has a pair of sub-CPs (oh, of course, the sub-CPs are not my highlight. On the contrary, I think the sub-CPs are quite delicious, cough) All in all, the writing is quite good. Many of the settings are innovative and not too rigid. The characters and plot lines are very good. However, there are so few reviews... Oops, no one has read it. It is really good... I hope the traffic will be better. I wish the author well. It's a fairly large novel, and it's inevitable that there will be some minor pitfalls. I think it's a book that does not hide its flaws. Let's sort out some small pitfalls (of course, if I'm wrong, I may have missed it personally) 1. The article about Bi Yue during the mid-term holiday does not seem to explain how Qingyang guessed that Bi Yue was a rat who was punished by heaven. 2. The Yudu section did not explain why Ah Qi suddenly swallowed the demon pill, and why the demon power came back after practicing in the furnace for a while. Maybe it was just needed by the plot. 3. In the early stage of the plot, Jin Buhuan said that Ah Qi is the reincarnation of Cang Yu, and in the later stage, he said that Cang Yu is the ancestor of Ah Qi (and many plots also point to the term "descendants"). One is the past life and the other is the blood relationship, which is a bit contradictory. 4. Hun Sha mentioned that Qing Yang was blamed for his own experiences five hundred years ago, but the reason behind it has not yet been revealed. (There are quite a few pitfalls, some of which I have forgotten what they are, but the overall impact is not that big) Part 2 I've finished reading the ending. Well, it's very heroic and righteous, just like Bo Yuntian's. The explanation of the will of "the way of heaven" is actually a bit hellish. You'll understand it when you see it later (eyes move) See Chapter 319 for details. It's really not Xiao Yao's fault to have agreed on this matter first. . She didn't expect that her subconscious mind could grind her brother to this point, but she had no choice. The condition for "waking up" was ☠️. Xiaoyao kept trying to make her brother wake up, but this book suddenly changed the concept into - Lin Qingyang. . . Later, I also made up for the pitfall of "Rabbit Three", which is quite detailed. Generally speaking, even if you don't look at the emotional line, the plot line is still worth reading, and this book just happened to be finished the day before I started reading it (I am secretly happy again...) I feel that I am spoiled. Os hopes that there will be extra stories about Mo Yan Hongling, Lin Yao, Li Tian, Yun Zhan, and Xiao Su in the future (making a wish...)

It's been a long time since I've seen a novel that I like so much. The author's writing is very good, and the plot is amazing, but it's so sad. The original author Lin Heshi is really upset and wants to cry. I beg the author not to abandon the article. Goddess, I will follow you for the rest of my life 😢 😢 😢

Looks good! It doesn't have the awkwardness of fast-moving animation works, and the logic is quite logical. Although the settings are classic ones, the story is very ups and downs and has a sense of graphics, so I still enjoyed watching it. I think the most outstanding advantage is that the world view and details are very richly described, with a sense of picture but not redundant. It is easy to enter this fascinating world in the book. If you like it, the author please keep updating ❤️❤️❤️

I hope Ah Qi and Qing Yang can connect with each other soon. Don't be cruel. I can't watch a bit of cruelty 😢. I feel that many people may die in the future, such as the leader, other disciples, etc.

The wolf demon x is the best in swordsmanship, and the immortal sect elder x fox demon. This setting is also very exciting, very exciting hahahaha I really like this book, it's not brainless, the plot is not too cliche or cookie-cutter, especially the emotional part, the description is very good and delicate, I cried several times while reading it. The protagonist doesn't fall in love out of nowhere, the two are so awesome that there's no explanation! The villain is also well-shaped, not too weak and easily defeated. The plot twists and turns again and again. It's very exciting and makes you want to keep watching. The description of the love between the protagonists is also very effective. At first I was almost discouraged by the ratings, but I wanted to take a look, but I ended up reading it in one go. Recently, I like fairy tales, and I have been reading this genre. The ones I liked were still being serialized, and they were already tied. After reading other novels, I found that several of them were the same, which made me feel uncomfortable, and I quit after reading a little. This book is a treasure, I love it. The low rating is probably because I stopped updating for a whole year, and the traffic is not good. I believe it is only a matter of time before this book is discovered 💕

I feel that the plot will be a bit more novel than the traditional ancient and mysterious two-male protagonist. The author will also arrange two timelines to intersperse the narrative. The writing style is also good. I think it is worth watching. My expectations are very high. I hope the author will work hard and he will definitely produce good results 💕

I really like this kind of novel that uses flashbacks and interjects narration. The plot is very interesting and the author's writing is also good. The protagonist resists fate and thinks that it has changed, but the ending is still the same. The protagonist's fear psychology is well described, layer by layer, and the plot is very interesting. Each character is very unique, a bit group-like, and they are all brilliant! Even the small characters who only appear twice are well portrayed. Highly recommended!

Come on, keep working hard for the next book💪

This is my favorite type. It would be better if the author updates it quickly. It looks good, I hope the author will update it soon [sending my heart][sending my heart][sending my heart]

Super pretty! The story line is very complete and the plot is compact, with one wave rising after another. Although the deaths of some characters are regrettable, the final settlement is very emotional, but in short, it is very beautiful! Why such a low rating! Great support!