Double Cultivation: Starting with a Yandere School Beauty Whose Mother Is a Yandere

It just happened to be 7.8 From zero, which seems to be stable so far. However, some sections can be smoothed and more gradual. For example, when the heroine slaps Lin Tongtong, the heroine's high level of anger is a bit too much for the emotional development increased by all the events she has experienced before. Of course, feelings are not excluded. To such a radical girl, but objectively speaking, if there was at least a plot before this where both of them were in crisis, and the male protagonist risked a large amount of his own health to save the female protagonist's life and then narrowly won, the emotional changes in this section would be smoother, and it would make people feel that such a level of anger is worthy of the previous experience. Taking such emotional ups and downs as an example, I hope the author can improve better. Of course, the places I refer to may not represent everyone's preferences. I rarely comment on such a long essay and ask the author to revise the sentences, because I feel that this subject matter is a bit outstanding compared to the recent dozen or so recommended books. It suddenly comes to nature and I want to express my opinion. If there are more experienced reviewers, you are welcome to discuss it.

The author has never been in love before, and the writing is a bit green. In fact, relationships are not all cultivated bit by bit. They may take big steps as they go, or they may naturally make some intimate actions in the process of getting along, and then the two of them tacitly agree to a relationship. It is direct. I hope the author can write better and not be too green, and put emotions into it. The storyline is better designed to make people want to read.

Please give me good reviews and suggestions. If there are any mistakes, the author will make corrections. I will try my best to read your comments. Thank you~

The writing is okay, don't worry about those who rated it low. They feel that everything in the novel must go smoothly, move forward unrivaled, and maybe they have not even read Luotuo Xiangzi [shocked]

The person who designed this virus probably once had a girlfriend who urged him to shut down his phone and go to bed at 11:37 in the middle of the night. However, this person broke up with his teammates for a long time and ignored his girlfriend. When he was sad, he spread the virus. All the behaviors of the virus you see are the behaviors of his girlfriend: she is a foodie (animal food) She was so stupid that she thought she had deleted the icon and uninstalled the boy's game (only eating desktop icons). When she was angry, she would take pictures of the boy's monitor (the desktop would shake) and move the boy's mouse (the window would move as a result). The girl did this and he still ignored her. Later, the girl gave up and left, and the virus also left. The girl's last words were just like a virus: I will never touch your computer again, I won't say "I'm hungry" next to you and ask you to accompany me to dinner, I won't get angry when you play games in the middle of the night, I won't pat your computer and grab your mouse to make you Stay with me, and I won't pretend to be stupid and delete your game icons. I just want you to eat on time, go to bed on time, and spend a little time with me. Now that I'm tired, I'm leaving and I won't disturb your world, your computer, and your games😭😭

So far, there is nothing toxic about it. The heroine is very lovable, independent and understands that love means giving to each other. As a book written by a female author, it is very rare for the character's outlook to not be completely distorted. The story is also considered mainstream and unfolds slowly. Not to say it's exciting, at least it's not boring. The main reason is that it is difficult to find novels about cultivating immortals that have both emotional and main plots. The story written by the male author is okay, but the emotional line is either missing or shows up after getting married and there is no role for it. It's really rare to find this kind of novel about cultivating immortality that has its beginning and ending tied together.

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It meets the requirements very well. It has a single female protagonist. The female protagonist is more decisive than the male protagonist. The male and female protagonists have a good relationship and are not slow. They are a bit slow in cultivating immortals, but they are still good in daily life. The male protagonist is not a holy mother, and the female protagonist is not a holy mother. The heroine is still a yandere

At least what the author wrote is very consistent with the character. The male protagonist is really a pure dog licker, and he has a girlfriend every day.

It's beautiful, I love reading it, I like the author, I want to take the author away, lock her in a small dark room, lock her on the bed, and let her write a novel for me.

I'm tired. How can I put it, everyone can't see the male and female protagonists? There are so many S-level talents, and there is another insight talent, and there is no limit. This is somewhat [smile] Is it possible that the Demon Sect will have some soul-searching and talent-stripping methods in the future? [Working on draft]

I personally like this novel very much. First, it feels like a Minecraft game, which slowly develops, which is very attractive to me. Second, the sweet love between the male and female protagonists has a different kind of refreshing and sweetness.

So far it's okay [Send Hearts][Send Hearts] There's nothing too bad about it for me, it's just that the pace could be a little faster.

It's quite interesting, and the plot is good so far. I just hope that the system team settings will be changed in the future. The setting of happiness and four hours a day feels like it is imposed on the male and female protagonists, which is not practical. Then I hope that the masters of the male and female protagonists will not die [face covering] I finally feel a little more stable. The masters are also very nice. Please don't write me down.

The male and female protagonists of this book are not very strong in the early stages of the book, but they are very strong in the later stages. Already invincible. And the male and female protagonists are very sticky, well, they are very possessive and possess each other without being separated!

It's well written, it's a classic story of survival in a immortal cave [face covering]

It's a very good book, but it progresses too quickly later on. Maybe I want to finish it. I've briefly touched on Wu'an City in the God Realm and so on. I'd really like to see the author write it in detail. After all, it's also a very good book.

Very well written. The writing is excellent and the content is very interesting. I hope the author will continue to work hard.

The author's writing is okay, there are no bad points, from being a bit weak at the beginning to being invincible in the middle, there are actually traces to follow. I feel very comfortable watching it, and there is nothing that makes me a headache. That is to say, the setting of the heroine is about being yandere, but the writing is not that good.

This author seems to have a number. The author said that I have read three or four books. Although not all of the books written by the author are what I like to read, they are all very well organized. There's nothing that I can't understand. Especially the description of the current situation. It allows me to clearly know the current state of the protagonist. It is said that one of the author's accounts is called lucky and the other is called unlucky. It is true. [Cover face][cover face]

Okay, it's as good-looking as the National Games I've seen before. I hope the author's writing will get better and better.

This is the first book with a five-star review. As long as it doesn't fall apart later, it is indeed an interesting book.

I like it very much. The pace of the book is fast and the plot and characters are online. I read it in one afternoon. . .

Okay, at least I don't feel anything bad about it. It looks good. Anyone who is not a picky person will find it good-looking [laughs]

It looks good, but not enough. Will there be any intimate scenes in the future? [Thinking]

I think we can consider making the male protagonist slowly turn into a yandere like the female protagonist in the future [Sending my heart] I don't think it's good-looking enough if the heroine is a yandere. I think it would look better if both the male and female protagonists are yandere.

It looks so good. Keep up the good work, author.

After watching it, I felt very good. Chun Ai likes the heroine. ୧꒰•̀ᴗ•́꒱୨ Come on!

It's very interesting to watch. The characters of the male and female protagonists are also well portrayed. At least I like it very much. It's not poisonous. It's just that my writing skills can be improved a bit. Five stars.

The setting is quite novel and the logic is flawless. I think it looks pretty good. If you like single female protagonists, don't miss this book.