Fake: Prequel to Alien Beasts

It's well written. Please give me some suggestions. I suggest you write more about daily life in the early transition period. The old characters should not collapse. The new and old characters can be written in a more three-dimensional way. The lost characters who had roles in the original book but not many can be adapted into new characters. Judging from the plot, the first generation should have the most cruel and complex human nature. They can write things that satirize human nature, and they can be more lyrical and sublime. It's well written. I don't think you need to write too hastily. I hope the author can write better and better. By the way, if you want to keep the tradition of strange beasts, remember to write more about knives later [laughter]

It's very good, and it blends in very harmoniously with the alien beasts. Sometimes I even thought it was written by Peng Pai on a trumpet account.

I think the plot and details are all very well done. It will definitely be great for fans of exotic beasts to come and take a look.

It seems that The Paper's trumpet continues to hand out knives to us [smile], but it's pretty cool.

The writing is really good. Sometimes I feel it is better than the writing by The Paper. This is probably the best among the alien beast fanfics.

Well written. I like Chuxue. It's just that Chuxue's transformation from a cute little girl to a dormitory aunt is a bit unacceptable. I hope Chuxue's character will not be changed in the future and it will be closer to the original.

A good work, but it's a pity that some readers are illiterate.

After reading more than a dozen chapters, the author said, I want to ask if Gao Yang is still the male protagonist, and who is the heroine of the second part. If the male protagonist and the heroine are Gao Yang and Qing Ling, will they be together later? This will determine my desire to pursue this book later. . .

The writing is very good and the update speed is also very fast. Good luck to the author!

Where is Hong Xiaoxiao? Gamers, have you forgotten?

It's already pretty good in fan fiction.

A rare piece of fan fiction that can be put together without conflicting with the original work

The regret in my heart has been fulfilled [cry][cry][cry][cry][cry]

Weirdly good fanfic

The continuation is well written, but there is still room for improvement. I hope the author will continue to work hard. I am very optimistic about you.

Come on, author, you must come on😭😭😭😭😭😭

Everyone comes to see

Hahahahahaha

Maybe some details are not handled very well. Everyone has his or her own opinion on the quality of a book. After reading Alien Beasts for a long time, some new characters were suddenly added and I was not very used to it for a short time. But I am very satisfied that I can continue to see the protagonists [smile][snicker][snicker]

Well enough. The content is relatively restored.

I feel that it is quite reasonable at the moment, and it can still be connected to the original version. Good luck, author.

It's really good

It would be great if it can be followed up later

The writing style is particularly suitable for The Paper and is the best alien beast fanfic I have ever read.

Follow-up Perfectly combined with the follow-up to Lost City of Beasts

Clear structure, multi-dimensional description It makes up for most of the regrets of the original work There is no knife that readers don't like to eat Show affection and love No plagiarism

Very pretty, very good

I hope you can bring Gao Yang back to life

It's very beautiful, and I feel like I'm there

Awesome, can you please show more clips of Gao Yang?