There Is Indeed Something Wrong with This Story of a Defeated Dog.

How should I put it? I was very excited. After reading it, I said that this book is definitely a bonus for people who like light novels! The rhythm and the relationship between the characters are set very well. There are no stomachaches or embarrassing plots. The author is definitely a deep two-dimensional person! I think the low score is simply because it is a light novel. On a platform like Tomato, which has a huge user traffic and is free, many people will give it a low score when they see a novel type that they are not familiar with. Or maybe you feel that writing this kind of love story is too restrained, but I want to say that this kind of plain rhythm and dialogue are the charm of light novels. It makes people feel that they are tasting a very charming youth from the perspective of a bystander, and I believe this is what most people are missing. Some people may think that the male protagonist is too mediocre, and think that a heroic male protagonist is the right answer to satisfy regrets and fantasies. But let me tell you, what's wrong with looking at a mediocre male protagonist, or your mediocre self, and imagining your best self to experience another kind of youth? There are always people who regard being liked by many girls as a science fiction film, but I want to say that any youth is the best, and there is no distinction between good and bad. Whether it is ordinary, full of worries, or missing the autumn and regretting the spring, we are all at least young. Everyone will have a desire for another kind of youth when they are young. They feel that there is some kind of dazzling youth that they have not experienced, and they don't think they can experience it, so they seek comfort by calling it science fiction. But I think this is the romance of the novel and the author's romance! Finally, I would like to thank the author for the joy that writing this novel brought me! I hope the author will be happy every day and his worries will be reduced by half!

It's not that I don't want to give it five stars. That's it! It's such a pity that one, Kitahashi Yu's one is such a pity! What I don't like to read the most is abuse, but this author writes very well. I don't have much to see now, so I can give it four stars. Ah, I almost cried, you know? 😭😭😭😭It can't be cured and a girl just disappears. I don't know, that's what he thinks. Woohoo, I'm really convinced. If the author can reply, I hope he can reply. Why? What a pity! The girl wouldn't have died if she didn't accept her. I don't think it's okay to separate him from that childhood sweetheart. Anyway, I'm not jealous or anything. It's just such a pity that he died. 😭😭😭😭 Woohoo! What a pity, what a pity. ( ๑ŏ ŏ๑ )

It was okay. Beiqiao's story was very well written, but it was a pity that it followed the four-lie template but lacked enough accumulation and foreshadowing. As a result, the final moment of emotional catharsis was not as moving as expected. This is also a limitation of unit dramas. As for the overall plot, it is quite written with the charm of spring things, but there are too many hidden lines and foreshadowing, which makes the overall rhythm unclear. It makes people feel like they are moving forward in the fog. I look forward to the follow-up design.

It's a good read. It seems to have the feel of a Japanese light novel, which is about time travel, campus, love, and supernatural powers. The whole book is more about love, and powers are basically not used. The storyline is well written, without too many problems, and it will not make people tired after reading it.

Hayami Saori's chapter was okay, giving me a feeling of spring things plus ice fruit, but the plot was actually not particularly to my taste, but the following Gu Yue chapter felt very good. In the tense atmosphere, the dialogue between the two seemed plain but full of power, especially the sentence about xx (spoiler-proof) was to make him remember it better. It reminded me of the feeling I had when I watched the story of Naoko and Watanabe in the Norwegian forest. It's pretty good, I haven't read half of it yet, I hope there are more.

The protagonist, the observer, likes all kinds of gossip and can deduce the desired information through various details. The description is excellent and the plot is interesting. Also, after reading the introduction, I discovered that it is a single heroine, with an ice-faced heroine?

I just finished reading Saori Hayami's chapter. To be honest, this kind of slow-paced daily story suits my taste. At first, when I read the protagonist's reasoning, it felt like reasoning for the sake of reasoning, which felt a bit stiff. But the reasoning errors I discovered when the truth was revealed step by step later really shocked me. It enriched the image of several characters at once, and the reasoning didn't feel stiff when I looked at it later, and it was more like the protagonist's own inner performance.

I'm not telling you, it's really pretty. I have read a lot of light novels of this kind, and I really like this one. The author's writing style is also very good, and the emotional descriptions can affect my emotions. I hope the author will work harder to update it (recently there is a book shortage, and it is really not easy to come across a book of this quality, but it is not enough. I finished it in one night)

It's really beautiful. The portrayal of each heroine is very vivid, and the knife sandwiched in the middle makes people feel sour and satisfied. I hope the author can persevere. Compared with other small urban tomato articles, it is really comfortable to read.

I have now read Chapter 102. To sum up my overall impression, the content of the story is unique. It can be regarded as a particularly novel type among novels. Although the outline is not perfect, it still has a nose and an eye. The storyline of multiple female protagonists is well arranged. So far, I have not seen any bad points. The author must have put a lot of effort into conceiving this novel. From a current perspective, it is the most comfortable one I have ever read. This urban fantasy-themed novel has a very successful character creation of the male protagonist. Although it is a bit far-fetched to be considered a half-succubus, it suits my taste. There are a lot of foreshadowings in the article. It is known that there are more than a palm of foreshadowings. It really makes people want to read, but the more foreshadowings are not the better. There will be a lot of trouble in recycling the article later. As of now Speaking of these foreshadowings, I feel itching to read. This book is indeed worth reading. As for the shortcomings, the author's writing style is a bit clumsy, and the connection between the language is a bit laggy. But fortunately, the plot is very strong. Some parts are just for the sake of touching and touching, and torturing book friends for the sake of torturing book friends. The map sections and interpersonal relationships are slightly blurred, and sometimes you will be confused when reading. You can see a lot in this article. It is a shadow of a well-known light novel, but it can be regarded as removing the essence. There are also too few character descriptions and no room for imagination. The most impressive thing is Chiba Kage. Later, when the male protagonist saw the tablet, I realized that his sister was a double A. I always thought Chiba Kage was the big sister next door [shy][shy] But I also like double A [shy][shy]. I hope the author will continue to work hard, keep the original basic plot outline, and work hard to improve the writing style and shaping. This book is indeed very good, I like [shy][shy]

In the light novel genre, it's so shameless.

It's well written, but it's a pity that Gu Yue and Bei Qiao tell the truth. It would be nice if their endings could be better.

I feel like the latest chapter can be considered the end [eating melon]

How should I put it... It feels very interesting, but are there too many people who have an ambiguous relationship with the protagonist? (Although I feel like most people are watching this) Come on!

I think this book is pretty good. The plot is okay and the characters are well set up.

Good, good, good, good

It's great to watch, but I don't know why 11,000 people have watched it and there are still no ratings. Is it because there are no ratings at all?

Forgot to comment, hehe

I still think it's okay

Having multiple heroines is your lie [crying]

Good, good, good, good

That's it, five stars, nothing to say [eating melon]

So, I almost forgot about the heroines when I saw them later. Can anyone tell me?

No matter how Chen Lian plays, he always has Sister Ai's escape route.

It's so lifelike (referring to the protagonist's emotional psychology)

Very nice, very nice, nice, nice, nice

A bit interesting, full of Japanese comic flavor

The writing is very good. Although I have only read a few dozen chapters, I really can't bear to persuade people to quit with low scores. Please support me first.

It's awesome, the characters are well-drawn, and the plot doesn't have many flaws. But halfway through, it felt inexplicably boring. It felt like too much was revealed in the early stage and you can guess the plot later.

It's so beautiful. I really love it.